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Post by Deleted on Jul 13, 2012 23:16:18 GMT -5
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Justin Sanity
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PEE WEE 3:16
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Post by Justin Sanity on Jul 21, 2012 13:41:56 GMT -5
there isn't much to say for your show. it is decent, however, it lacks detail. Detail makes your show and your matches more interesting, i recommend looking at one of ICW's show's to see how much detail he puts in his show. Your show also has very short matches, but its not that much of a big deal. You also have too many commercial breaks. I liked your show but those are the few things i think you can improve on, keep writing.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 21, 2012 16:58:18 GMT -5
thanks for the feedback
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Post by thesaleguy on Jan 22, 2013 19:25:13 GMT -5
great work on this one .. need more
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