JL24FPS
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Post by JL24FPS on Oct 28, 2012 12:41:42 GMT -5
WF: IndyRiffic”Look at him flip!” Entrance King Championship Matchasmi5065* (c) Vs. Checkers* -Stip: Ricochet's "Wall Run" Entrance. asmi5065* (c): Checkers*: How to vote on matches: No polls and no suckish replies. Your vote will only and only count if you do the following: 1) State the username of the person you are voting for. (should I even have to say this?) 2) You must give reason on why you have voted this person as the winner. (Could be anything from smoother animation, to most creative. Compare other's animation is recommended) If you cannot complete these simple rules, then your vote won't count and will be deleted on the spot, no exceptions. Note: Alot of users like to get a mark out of 10 (or 5 if you must), but I can't force you to give a mark. Just take it to consideration when voting to make a mark to compare each animation in the match. VOTING ENDS IN 48 HOURS! |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 28, 2012 12:51:06 GMT -5
Asmi: Good ani here. I thought it flowed better than Checkers', although it was stiff at times and the running wasn't really good. The flips and cartwheels were good, but the main thing I disliked about this ani was the effects. The smoke really had no reason to be there since Sydal was already out, you picked a really grainy titantron to use, and you put the tron in a really obscure place in the arena. Plus your graphic for Sydal was really basic and should have been used earlier in the entrance.
Checkers: First thing I noticed(not that important but still) was that you could barely hear the audio. The animation was stiff and fidgety but still flowed well. I saw no issues with the wall climbing or the flips. The running into the ring could have used some work, but I liked how you added the Sin Cara flip into the ring. Few other things I liked were you having the tron in a place where it should have been, and that you had Bourne come out through the curtain.
This one is close but I'm voting Checkers because of his animation having better effects, and a good flow.
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Post by kwaanimations on Oct 28, 2012 13:16:26 GMT -5
This match was even
Checkers: I liked the effects. The wall entrane was really fidgety but was smooth, it was slightly stiff. The walking to the arena was really fidgety, but I liked the extra effort of the flip to the inside, again fidgety but smooth 6.5/10
Asmi: The walking wasnt good and had many different angles getting there. The flips wer really nice and not fidgety. Did seem a bit stiff though. The walikng to the ring seem rushed and missed frames. 6.5/10
These werent great but its most likely a hard entrance
Vote: Asmi
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Post by Deleted on Oct 28, 2012 13:49:49 GMT -5
Good Match Here Guys!
Check - Good ani here bro! Good Job! I liked how he came through the curtain and you had the titantron above it. Nice Details. The running into the wall was a bit fidgety but the flip and the handspring was smooth and flowed pretty well i thought. The Shadows were a bit of a problem and I really liked how u tried extra hard to include the flip into the ring. The running was a bit fidgety into the ring though but the flip was nice and not that stiff and very smooth!
Asmi - Nice bro, not your best but still pretty good. I liked the flow of your ani which was better than checkers i thought. The running i thought was pretty good actually just slightly fidgety but still good. Shadows and string were a problem for you here and I also didn't really like how u changed the camera angle so much in the flip and handsprings. I also have to agree with Arrow here. Your effects weren't as good as his. The titantron was in the wrong place really, the smoke really wasn't needed for this kinda entrance and he just kinda appeared. I would have rather he came through an entrance way or something.
After re reading my paragraphs I have to give this one to Checkers.
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Oct 28, 2012 15:20:59 GMT -5
My vote goes to Asmi
Checkers: At the start I like the titantron you used. The entrance wasn't half bad but the running was fidgety from the entrance ramp into the wall backflip was also fidgety and stiff also you miss calcuated the height needed for it to flow well. The cartwheel looked really smooth and the second backflip was very nicely done. The running done the ramp was very fidgety and choppy and the jump into the roll inside the ring was a little choppy. 8.2/10
Asmi5065: At the beginning I thought the titantron was really grainy and low quality unfornuately but Evan's entrance wasn't to bad, the running could have used a few more frames during each movement but it was still smooth. The backflip of the wall was really nicely done along with the cartwheel and the second backflip. The slide into the ring was fine and I like the rope and raise at the end. 8.3/10
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Post by Cooperman on Oct 28, 2012 20:19:59 GMT -5
I vote for Checkers.
Asmi's entrance was pretty cool, but I didn't like the quality. It's probably due to the green screen, so maybe, try to improve it. That nameplate was really not needed as It sorta ruined your work. Checkers' actually had a decent green screen & great lighting. Thought asmi's wall backflip was better and less fidgety but the running and the rest didn't look as realistic as Checkers. Everything in his ani was smooth and flowed really well and that lil jump to the ring was a nice touch. Just work more on fidgetiness next time.
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Zack
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Post by Zack on Oct 29, 2012 6:34:18 GMT -5
This is one awesome match lol, love the stip xD
Asmi: Great Job, love the green screen at the start but you might have to resize it to make it look bigger next time if you really take this entrance king thing seriously, because it looks really small and I dont think any wrestling companies would want a small titantron in the real wrestling world. I find the taunt very awkward, maybe its just me but you did take this entrance animation to the second ground and make Evan Bourne run, which shows me how much of an animator you are, a very hardworking one. But the Running looks very weird to me too but the flips are very nice. The backflip is pretty stiff though. Great job anyways, 7/10
Checkers: Great job, I see an improvement here! Love the titantron but the running looks weird, I dont really know why but I just find it weird and unrealistic. The backflip is pretty stiff but the two other flips following looks amazing, espectially the second backflip, it looks very realistic and smooth, great job on that. Anyways, 7.5/10
Both are good but I see an improvement on Checkers animation and Asmi didnt really did his best, I know he can do better than that, anyways, my vote goes to Checkers!
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Post by wwestevo07 on Oct 29, 2012 17:40:04 GMT -5
asmi5065: Titan tron could have been better. The taunt at the start of the entrance should have lasted longer. I like that you attempted the run from the stage to the back wall but the running needs a lot of work. The flip off the wall looked great, pretty smooth and the other flips looked good too. Didn't really like how it just freezed on one frame for his name to come up, should of kept him moving. The getting into the ring was alright, could have looked a little better.
Checkers: Nice titan tron and i liked how you had it above the stage, that stage looks great btw. Loved how you had bourne come out of the curtain. Would of liked to see a taunt or something rather than running the wall as soon as he came out. The flips were smooth, seemed a little fidgety in places but overall they looked pretty good. Just like asmi5065 the running needed work.
Overall i think Checkers had a slightly better animation. asmi5065 i feel the pause to show bournes name let it down slightly and i would have liked to see something a little better when he got in the ring and also a better titan tron.
Vote: Checkers
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Post by Wardyz on Oct 29, 2012 18:11:35 GMT -5
Asmi : A few issues with the extra added to the entrance... firstly, the titantron was in a very awkward place and the smoke effect didn't really make any sense... the animation flowed well but the running seemed like slow skipping and it was stiff... the last part with the name plate seemed cheesy
Checkers : Unlike Asmi, the extra stuff was organised much better! The curtain was cool as well... The running to the wall and flips were smooth but fidgety and the camera angle moved a bit... I like how you added a bit more to the entrance
Vote : Checkers
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JL24FPS
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Post by JL24FPS on Oct 29, 2012 21:19:38 GMT -5
ASMI: I like the arena set up you used.. It had a very "Indy" feel. Points from me for that... The running looked awkward, but the flip on the wall looked good. It had a nice flow to it. I didn't really like the still closeup on him for the name and I thought it could have been smoother. Overall: 6/10.
Checkers: I personally didn't like the "HD" feel of the arena. But The effects were very cool. It was pulled off well. The wall flip looked awkward, but the rest of the animation looked smooth. Overall: 6.5/10.
Vote: Checkers
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