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Post by alexgg on Jan 25, 2013 19:06:24 GMT -5
 I don't like the end but Pivot messed up again so the file is corrupt, I should download the newer beta, hopefully its patched the errors i keep getting. Made it because I figured I needed to get into making aerial moves and weapon related moves again. |
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Post by BION on Jan 25, 2013 19:23:04 GMT -5
Its verry  ing smooth, The jump was awesome, Impact was great,but the table bounce should have lasted longer in my opinion. |
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jan 25, 2013 19:30:13 GMT -5
Really nice animation you have there alex, I like the Kurt Angle type of moonsault you have there. The joint movement on the top rope was quite realistic. The moonsault was really smooth and the spacing/transition was good. The impact was nice but I'm sure the reaction would have been better if pivot didn't mess with the file.
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Post by Sicks on Jan 26, 2013 8:14:12 GMT -5
Overall: The animation is a tad choppy for my likings, but having said that and you mentionning Pivot corrupted your file, let's look at this one from another view.
Pros: The first part of the animation is great. The bent'n'jump has to be my favorite part.
Cons: It is a bit choppy for me. Mid-air movement are a bit quick, I would have add a couple of frames more to turn my stick in mid-air. The impact is very bad for me, but I figure this is where Pivot started to screw you so we are not going to talk about that issue more than that.
Favorite part: The bent'n'jump. You made it so we really feel like your stick is taking some real air there. Like I said in King Bishop latest animation where he did a little 'slo-mo', I would have love to see a similar part to that animation where he turns in mid-air.
Conclusion: With the problem you have with Pivot, I think this is a fairly good animation, not over the tope, but still you managed to make it look good after all. Hoping you can fix those issues you are having with Pivot. Keep up the good work!
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Post by alexgg on Jan 26, 2013 9:28:26 GMT -5
Thanks for the replys.  I should of had put the animation speed down a few notches, I felt it went too fast as a gif. The errors appear for me sometimes when I remove a frame, I was going to re-do the ending but it wouldn't allow me to create or edit frames. Honestly I found it pretty hard to animate, I re-did the jump so many times, I wasn't sure how to position the arms.  I hope to improve, but I'm probably about as best as I'll get. Animations will always be hit or miss. |
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