Leones
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Post by Leones on Mar 13, 2013 17:17:33 GMT -5
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Mar 13, 2013 17:25:21 GMT -5
Not a bad animation you have here Leones. The squat on the apron at the beginning of the animation could have used a couple more frames just to even out the smoothest a bit better. The jump itself onto the top rope was very stiff and a tad choppy in certain parts in mid air. There wasn't any type of bend or squat to show that he is setting up to make another leap to the next rope which made the transition to the next top rope look very floaty and stiff as well. On the second top rope their wasn't a squat to show that he was going into the moonsault and allow the animation to flow better and it also made the ani look stiff there. The moonsault itself was a little bit fidgety and choppy in mid air and I didn't really like the way Orton kind of figets forward into the RKO. The RKO looked pretty smooth however and I really like Jeff Hardy's reaction at the end.
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Leones
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Nobody can touch me.
Joined on: May 27, 2012 15:44:06 GMT -5
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Post by Leones on Mar 14, 2013 16:19:18 GMT -5
Thanks Mac, I always aprecciate your detailed critics that can help me improving my animations, thanks for the feedback, so I'm gonna try to make it come out better next time!
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