Leones
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Post by Leones on Mar 27, 2013 10:54:11 GMT -5
I think it's one of my bests do ya think?
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Mar 27, 2013 12:42:28 GMT -5
I would say this is definitely your best animation except I wish it wasn't a botch 180 Senton lol. At the beginning I like the way you had Matt Hardy turn to calculate the distance he would need to travel during the senton. The jump into the springboard was pretty good, it was very smooth, you took just about the right amount of pictures and it didn't seem stiff at all. The transition from the top rope into the 180 Senton was very nicely done, it was smooth and the joint movement was really there. The spin into the senton could have used a few more pictures but it was nice all around for the most part. I like the impact on the canvas and I like the reaction from Orton the way he sat up and look at Hardy, that looked very realistic. Great job Leones!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 27, 2013 13:35:26 GMT -5
Good Job Here Leones. I liked the realism of Hardy turning around at the start looking at Orton, although I was not a fan of the pauses. I thought you could have done a bit more with Orton through the animation as some of his movements were quite fidgety. I liked the springboard up to the top rope, pretty smooth. I thought at the top of the springboard he was a bit fidgety as it looked like he was heading to far of to the left and then you missed a frame or two to correct that. Take off was pretty good, nice joint movements there and a good amount of frames, the turn/transition I felt lacked just a few frames to smooth it out though. The impact of the move was good and the initial reaction was fine but nearer the end the camera started to get a bit shaky and the end of the reaction began to become a bit choppy. Good Job here though.
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Leones
Mid-Carder
Nobody can touch me.
Joined on: May 27, 2012 15:44:06 GMT -5
Posts: 332
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Post by Leones on Mar 27, 2013 14:31:24 GMT -5
Yeah! Finally I got a comment from Mac with just positive aspects! I really think that has to be my best animation of all time. Also it was a botched one, because it is for a match on RA so wasn't my choice Thanks anyway. Jack thanks a lot too for the tips, somethings I have to agree, somethings not, like at the end the camera was not shaky, it was the ropes bouncing movement that was a bit fail, because I didn't take the pictures with ropes bouncing in all the frames, so it looks like the camera is shaky Thanks both for the apreciations and critics
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