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Post by Colter on Jul 24, 2013 20:35:20 GMT -5
Tell me what you think. Of course, there's always room for improvement and the next part will be longer. Hope you take the time to watch this and all feedback is welcome.
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Post by IWFAnimation on Jul 28, 2013 23:22:23 GMT -5
This is my critique of this installment:
~ At the beginning, when the crowd was banging the barrier, you should've animated the crowd hands moving instead of just adding the sound
~ On the stage: You should remove the fake pyro picture since it makes the stage look bad and add more pics of your logo to make the entrance look less plain
~ The pyro during Jericho's entrance was good
~ During Jericho's entrance, there were shadows of your hand when he was standing still with the microphone in his hand
~ There are lots of shadows
~ Instead of transitioning Jericho into holding a mic, you should also animate that
~ There are some issues with the lighting during Jericho's segment
~ You should animate Jericho while he is talking instead of making him stand still
Other than that you have a good idea in your mind for this episode. I liked the promo given by Jericho. If you work on these flaws, I'll be waiting for the next installment of this episode
Rating: 4.5/10
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Post by Colter on Jul 30, 2013 14:16:11 GMT -5
This is my critique of this installment: ~ At the beginning, when the crowd was banging the barrier, you should've animated the crowd hands moving instead of just adding the sound ~ On the stage: You should remove the fake pyro picture since it makes the stage look bad and add more pics of your logo to make the entrance look less plain ~ The pyro during Jericho's entrance was good ~ During Jericho's entrance, there were shadows of your hand when he was standing still with the microphone in his hand ~ There are lots of shadows ~ Instead of transitioning Jericho into holding a mic, you should also animate that ~ There are some issues with the lighting during Jericho's segment ~ You should animate Jericho while he is talking instead of making him stand still Other than that you have a good idea in your mind for this episode. I liked the promo given by Jericho. If you work on these flaws, I'll be waiting for the next installment of this episode Rating: 4.5/10 Thanks for the critique. I've never really animated people, you know, talking before, so that was new territory for me. I'll make sure to work on these flaws and btw, the next part should be out by August 1st, providing my WLMM stops crashing. Thanks! |
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Post by IWFAnimation on Jul 30, 2013 14:20:23 GMT -5
This is my critique of this installment: ~ At the beginning, when the crowd was banging the barrier, you should've animated the crowd hands moving instead of just adding the sound ~ On the stage: You should remove the fake pyro picture since it makes the stage look bad and add more pics of your logo to make the entrance look less plain ~ The pyro during Jericho's entrance was good ~ During Jericho's entrance, there were shadows of your hand when he was standing still with the microphone in his hand ~ There are lots of shadows ~ Instead of transitioning Jericho into holding a mic, you should also animate that ~ There are some issues with the lighting during Jericho's segment ~ You should animate Jericho while he is talking instead of making him stand still Other than that you have a good idea in your mind for this episode. I liked the promo given by Jericho. If you work on these flaws, I'll be waiting for the next installment of this episode Rating: 4.5/10 Thanks for the critique. I've never really animated people, you know, talking before, so that was new territory for me. I'll make sure to work on these flaws and btw, the next part should be out by August 1st, providing my WLMM stops crashing. Thanks! NP for the critique and if you do fix these flaws im sure you're animations will become better |
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Post by Colter on Aug 1, 2013 15:12:45 GMT -5
Thanks for the critique. I've never really animated people, you know, talking before, so that was new territory for me. I'll make sure to work on these flaws and btw, the next part should be out by August 1st, providing my WLMM stops crashing. Thanks! NP for the critique and if you do fix these flaws im sure you're animations will become better Hey, here is part 2 with HHH/Punk, and entrances for Sheamus/Rock. I know Rock and Sheamus are completely random but WWE '13 universe gave me that idea. Anyway's heres the video and I hope you (along with anyone who watches this) enjoy it. |
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Post by IWFAnimation on Aug 1, 2013 16:29:16 GMT -5
I can see that you followed my tips which made this part way better than the last one. As always there are flaws in everyone's animation but all I can say is that work with the tips that I have given you
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