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Lions Den Pro Ep.1 Aug 3, 2013 22:56:56 GMT -5 Wicked likes this

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Raja Lion the owner of the company enters the ring
Raja Lion – Welcome to Lion Den Pro we have a very strong card for the night with the main event an elimination 3-way dance between C.M Punk, Steve Austin, and Eddie Guerrero. Enough with the talk let’s get into the first contest.
Evan Bourne versus El Generico for the T.V Title
The bell rings and the two lock up and go hold for hold. The men are still feeling each other out when Bourne hits a hurricarana which turns into a fast paced exchange of arm drags, chops, and reversals with Generico getting the better. Bourne was trapped in a corner getting stomped and chopped on when Generico hoisted him up in the air and hit him with the Brainbuster. (1.2.3) the ref gave Generico the belt. El Generico was holding the belt when the lights went out. When they came on Delirious, Rhyno, and Truth Martini were beating on Generico. Security officers had to pull the group off.

Truth Martini and group are backstage
Truth Martini: El Generico you are just the tip of the ice berg on our hit list. Tonight we are going to celebrate this victory with some lovely honeys. I have members in high places of different nations and different races, and remember people hoopla isn’t a word it’s a way of life.
Delirious: laeiurgleriugriughi I Will Hunt You down aiergliegreiug!!!

Paul London and Brian Kendrick versus W.G.T.T for the Tag Team Titles
London and Haas start off the match with a slow clap working through the crowd and picking up speed. The two decide to shy away from the usual lock up and start a chop war. The chops turned into forearms and the two knocked each other down. The ref starts the count and the men crawl to their partners. A simultaneous tag and Benjamin and Kendrick run into the ring. Kendrick slides between Benjamin’s legs and goes for a roll up (1.2) Benjamin kicks out. Benjamin then ducks a clothesline and follows up with a German Suplex. Kendrick gets dragged to the corner where W.G.T.T executes a Powerbomb leg-drop combo. Haas goes on the offensive with stomps and elbow drops. Haas Irish-Whips Kendrick into a corner away from both teams. Haas runs at the corner but Kendrick pushes himself off the ropes over Haas and hits him with Sliced Bread. Seeing his teams about to lose Benjamin jumps off the apron. He then pulls London off the apron, and London hits his face on the thin padding. The referee goes to check on London when Benjamin slid into the ring with chair in hand. Kendrick falls to mat as he gets nailed in the back of the head with a chair. Benjamin slides out of the ring before the ref gets back into the ring (1.2.3). Winners and the new Tag Team Champions. The World’s Greatest Tag Team.
Commercial Break

C.M Punk is backstage.
C.M Punk: So tonight I’m competing for the Lion’s Den Pro World Title. I’m competing against two veterans of the sport in Stone Cold Steve Austin and Latino Heat Eddie Guerrero. * Long pause*. So I thought to myself what have they done that I haven’t. The only things I came up with were Drugs and Alcohol. I have no demons, no skeletons in my closet. So tonight I will prove that I Am The Best In The Wor….
Steve Austin: Shut the hell up boy. * Brief stare down* so you say you don’t have skeletons in your closet. Well tonight I’m gonna beat you so bad you are gonna wish you did so they could keep you company when you go hide and cry about how Steve Austin whooped your sorry ass, and that’s the bottom line because Stone Cold said so.

Main Event for The Lion’s Den Pro World Title
All the men are in the ring. They go into a Three-way Lock-Up. The two more experienced men kicked Punk in the gut, knocked him down with a Forearm, and put the boots to him. The two then pick Punk up, hit him with a Double Suplex, then argue over who gets the cover. C.M Punk got enough time to get to the ropes and get up. He waits in the corner, he hits a double clothesline. Punk now in the driver’s seat throws Eddie out of the ring. Punk yells some obscenities at Austin. Austin gives him a one finger salute. The two lock-up, they then separate. Austin throws two right hands. Punk throws a leg kick targeting Austin’s bad knees. Austin Irish-Whips Punk into the ropes. Austin dishes out his signature stomps in the corner. Eddie seeing Austin with his backed turned playing to the crowd went for a quick cover on punk. (1, 2) Punk kicks out. Austin noticing Eddie in the ring runs at him, jumps on him, and delivers punches. Punk kicks Austin in the ribs. Austin clutches his ribs then falls to one knee. Punk runs up and hits him with a Shining Wizard. Eddie falls to the ground holding his knee and rolls out of the ring. Austin and Punk than go for an exciting sequence of holds, strikes, submissions, finishers, and near falls. Punk throws Austin in the corner, follows after him, hits him with an elbow, and follows up with a Bulldog. C.M Punk signals the end. He pulls of Austin’s knee braces he then puts Austin onto his shoulders, but Austin falls to his feet and follows through with a stunner. (1, 2, 3) Austin stays down clutching his knees. Eddie roles through the ropes, locks in the Lasso from El Paso, and Austin passes out. Winner and the new World Heavyweight Champion Eddie Guerrero. Eddie then hands the ref a wad of cash.

Raja Lion is in the ring.
Raja Lion: Thank you for coming out and watching the show. Hoped you enjoyed it. Give me some feedback and ways I can improve the company. Good night and hope to see you soon

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Lions Den Pro Ep.1 Aug 6, 2013 11:12:01 GMT -5

Post by WCWA Online on Aug 6, 2013 11:12:01 GMT -5

From the start, I appreciate the unique identity of the promotion. It's very different that it's not a promotion ending in W or with Ws somewhere in it to identify it with wrestling. I liken this to Fight Club Pro, CHIKARA Pro, or Michinoku Pro in that it doesn't need the "wrestling" in the name. It's different from what's generally around here and that in itself is a good thing.

I was pleasantly surprised by Truth Martini in the opener. I probably would've put more emphasis on the destruction of the beat down myself, and more on them being dragged away, but that's just me.

The tag team match was good. I'd suggest working on your pacing, so that things are happening at the right speed in the context of the match, but a solid match.

Punk's promo was good.. Austin's was kind of awkward. I'm not sure what was wrong with it, but something was definitely off.

Make sure your spot sequences make sense and that they're happening in the right order. The finish of the main event specifically. Punk is going for the GTS, but first he takes the time to pull off Austin's knee braces. Now I now he was doing it, so the finish of the Lasso would be more effective, but it comes off as really stupid for Punk to take the time to stop what he was doing to weaken a body part that he specifically wasn't attacking.

Oveall a good first showing. Just make sure you proof read. Try to catch homophones like roles/rolls, there/their and just awkward ways things are said. A lot of times reading back through something can give you a breakthrough and a way to fix it to be better. To expand on your ideas and to make your ideas as a whole more complete.

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Lions Den Pro Ep.1 Aug 15, 2013 15:38:09 GMT -5

Post by ICW on Aug 15, 2013 15:38:09 GMT -5

You're federation definitely has a "unique identity" as WCWA Online put it. It feels "indy-ish" but features a few "main stream" stars such as Stone Cold Steve Austin; by the way, is this supposed to be a realistic fed (like it takes place a specific year) or is this a purely fantasy fed?

The opening promo from Raja Lion was a little awkward. How do you envision someone opening up a brand new federation? I envision the promoter doing a little bragging about how awesome the federation is, talk about why they're different, and then I'd get to the action (or turn it over to the commentary team).

I dug the Truth Martini promo even though it could've benefited from a little more substance.

Tag match was short but effective. Writing matches is really, really difficult and that difficulty only increases when you're writing wrestlers who are high flyers (the HooliganZ) and true technicians (WGTT).

You started off great with the CM Punk promo...but Austin's interruption was really awkward. I probably would've had Punk just cut a straight promo and have Austin respond later in the program.

Main Event already? Hmm. Why not add in, at the very least, two more matches? Seems odd to have only two matches especially when it's your first show. Anyways, the match itself was decent. Formatting wise, I would separate the text so it's easier to read. Booking wise, the match seemed a little off but it was passable.

You have loads of potential. You seem to be good at writing promos and that's always encouraging to see. You just need more polish and that only comes with experience. Can't wait for the second show.