Jamie
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Post by Jamie on Oct 19, 2013 18:51:45 GMT -5
I think I'm meant to make these.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 19, 2013 21:22:51 GMT -5
It needed more pictures in almost all places, everything was choppy, the squat into the pedigree just needed another 2 or 3 photos on the way down and up, the main one that needed more photos was in the air during the pedigree as that looked like it only had 3 or 4 pictures in it at most and that made it choppy there. Also there was little to no reaction so it wouldn't hurt to add one in there.
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