Jamie
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Post by Jamie on Jan 28, 2014 19:07:08 GMT -5
Thought I'd post here as this is probably my best.
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CWF
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Post by CWF on Jan 28, 2014 19:12:07 GMT -5
Great animation man! The kick could use some work, but the Batista bomb was so damn good! The flow was nice, and the taunt from Batista was a nice touch. Overall 8/10. Great Job!
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Jamie
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Post by Jamie on Jan 28, 2014 21:09:12 GMT -5
Great animation man! The kick could use some work, but the Batista bomb was so damn good! The flow was nice, and the taunt from Batista was a nice touch. Overall 8/10. Great Job! Thanks so much for the feedback mate! |
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Post by Jack on Jan 29, 2014 4:40:00 GMT -5
Nice Effort.
-Taunt at the start by Bourne was pretty smooth but Batista lacked any movement.
-The jump on the springboard had an ok flow, but lacked some pictures to smoothen it out as well as I felt the joint movements could have been better.
-The change in angle was annoying tbh how it zoomed in and out, ruined the flow.
-Evan was pretty stiff and Batista's turn was fidgety and choppy.
-Taunt before the Batista Bomb was good.
-Pick up was smooth, nice flow, still felt it lacked some joint movements.
-Flow of the move itself was good, impact and reactions seemed a bit fidgety from Batista.
-Evan's arm positions looked a tad weird and his impact was stiff.
Good effort, still alot of things to work on.
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Jamie
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Post by Jamie on Jan 29, 2014 5:28:38 GMT -5
Nice Effort. -Taunt at the start by Bourne was pretty smooth but Batista lacked any movement. -The jump on the springboard had an ok flow, but lacked some pictures to smoothen it out as well as I felt the joint movements could have been better. -The change in angle was annoying tbh how it zoomed in and out, ruined the flow. -Evan was pretty stiff and Batista's turn was fidgety and choppy. -Taunt before the Batista Bomb was good. -Pick up was smooth, nice flow, still felt it lacked some joint movements. -Flow of the move itself was good, impact and reactions seemed a bit fidgety from Batista. -Evan's arm positions looked a tad weird and his impact was stiff. Good effort, still alot of things to work on. Thanks for the in-depth review Jack! Will take tips into consideration. |
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Post by wwextreme25 on Jan 29, 2014 10:15:10 GMT -5
Nice effort man. i agree, definitely your best to date. Here's one thing i noticed straight away. The blue tac was very visible and therefore looked to be a distratcion to me when trying to watch the animation! The taunt from evan at the start was very nice and was smooth, the springboard could use a ew more joint movements, however, still smooth and nicely done. I think maybe take one or two more pics when he's bouncing on the ropes as that went too quick for me. I know how hard it is animating a kick whilst having someone in mid air too, really hard to do so kudos there. I think maybe move batista's torso and arms a little more when he goes for the kick so it looks like he's really putting a lot into it. i liked the setup of the batista bomb though. The whole move from here was very consistent and i didnt really see much wrong with it other than it having a lack of pictures. you culd easily smoothen it up by adding one photo, in betwen all the photos you already took and it would make it look a lot more fluid. nice little bounce reaction from evan at the end, added a lot of impact. Will look forward to more if you keep it up nice job. 7/10
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Post by Jamie on Jan 29, 2014 16:41:16 GMT -5
Nice effort man. i agree, definitely your best to date. Here's one thing i noticed straight away. The blue tac was very visible and therefore looked to be a distratcion to me when trying to watch the animation! The taunt from evan at the start was very nice and was smooth, the springboard could use a ew more joint movements, however, still smooth and nicely done. I think maybe take one or two more pics when he's bouncing on the ropes as that went too quick for me. I know how hard it is animating a kick whilst having someone in mid air too, really hard to do so kudos there. I think maybe move batista's torso and arms a little more when he goes for the kick so it looks like he's really putting a lot into it. i liked the setup of the batista bomb though. The whole move from here was very consistent and i didnt really see much wrong with it other than it having a lack of pictures. you culd easily smoothen it up by adding one photo, in betwen all the photos you already took and it would make it look a lot more fluid. nice little bounce reaction from evan at the end, added a lot of impact. Will look forward to more if you keep it up nice job. 7/10 Thanks so much mate! Really means a lot coming from you. Will take everything into consideration. Thanks again! |
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Post by Jamie on Feb 2, 2014 3:30:36 GMT -5
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