R.J. Wilson
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Post by R.J. Wilson on Jul 9, 2014 20:11:34 GMT -5
Sorry i just started animating again and I'm not very good. All comments allowed. If you like what you see check out my YouTube channel Thwinc2001
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Post by Colter on Jul 9, 2014 21:19:26 GMT -5
Your movements seemed alright, but the animation was very choppy. I'd suggest speeding it up a bit more. Jericho's reaction could have used improvement. Study the move beforehand to see how people react to it in ring.
All in all, nice effort.
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R.J. Wilson
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Post by R.J. Wilson on Jul 9, 2014 21:28:51 GMT -5
Your movements seemed alright, but the animation was very choppy. I'd suggest speeding it up a bit more. Jericho's reaction could have used improvement. Study the move beforehand to see how people react to it in ring. All in all, nice effort. Thanks I'm a little rusty but thanks a million for the advice.
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Post by R.J. Wilson on Jul 9, 2014 21:37:27 GMT -5
I made this animation not so long ago but this is my recently retuning animation. Sorry about the bad shaky camera. All comments alowed. If you like what you see visit my YouTube channel Thwinc2001
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Post by Colter on Jul 9, 2014 21:41:29 GMT -5
I made this animation not so long ago but this is my recently retuning animation. Sorry about the bad shaky camera. All comments alowed. Nice try here. Animation had better movements and I liked the reaction. Work out that shaky camera and I think you'll be fine.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 9, 2014 22:47:01 GMT -5
I made this animation not so long ago but this is my recently retuning animation. Sorry about the bad shaky camera. All comments alowed. If you like what you see visit my YouTube channel Thwinc2001 Work on the shaky camera and don't zoom in and out it is sort of annoying.
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R.J. Wilson
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Post by R.J. Wilson on Jul 9, 2014 23:01:29 GMT -5
I made this animation not so long ago but this is my recently retuning animation. Sorry about the bad shaky camera. All comments alowed. If you like what you see visit my YouTube channel Thwinc2001 Work on the shaky camera and don't zoom in and out it is sort of annoying. Yea when I was filming the animation my camera died and I had to find the correct zoom that I had befor.
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Post by Jack on Jul 10, 2014 4:04:47 GMT -5
Its not bad man for your first few animations. I suggest working on a few things though. Firstly fidgetyness, you have to look back over your frames after every picture. This will allow you to check how good the flow is and if any pictures need to be retaken. Also, think about the smoothness of the move. You are replicating a wrestling move, so think about joint movements and the smooth transition between different parts of the move. After every picture you should be moving the joints a little bit, no big movements, that can also cause fidgetyness. Looks like you are getting there mate, so just keep going.
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Post by Slim on Jul 10, 2014 5:02:54 GMT -5
I don't think the SSP was choppy at all it was nice but really slow. Speed it up! And I agree with Jack. Work on fidgetyness, stiffness etc.
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Post by Dan. on Jul 10, 2014 13:02:08 GMT -5
I'm impressed here, are these your first few, or are you just getting back into it? either way, you've got some potential.
The shooting star press was decent. The jump was done pretty well, it seemed a tad floaty in the air, and it was a bit stiff too, but those are problems that come with animating SSPs, especially standing ones. The impact was okay, could've done with a bit more of a reaction like. It had a decent flow, could've done with being a bit faster. Nice touch adding the commentary too.
There's something I like about the german suplex that I just can't put my finger on, it might have something to do with how rarely they're animated, but you had a good attempt at it. The build up was okay, i really liked how ziggler ducked the punch though, i thought that was a good set-up for the move. The suplex itself wasnt stiff, it flowed really well and the reactions were pretty good too. As you mentioned, the shaky camera did ruin it a bit though. It would've been nice if you could've used some sound effects like in the shooting star press one, just to add to the end product. Good work though.
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R.J. Wilson
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Post by R.J. Wilson on Jul 10, 2014 14:32:15 GMT -5
I'm impressed here, are these your first few, or are you just getting back into it? either way, you've got some potential. The shooting star press was decent. The jump was done pretty well, it seemed a tad floaty in the air, and it was a bit stiff too, but those are problems that come with animating SSPs, especially standing ones. The impact was okay, could've done with a bit more of a reaction like. It had a decent flow, could've done with being a bit faster. Nice touch adding the commentary too. There's something I like about the german suplex that I just can't put my finger on, it might have something to do with how rarely they're animated, but you had a good attempt at it. The build up was okay, i really liked how ziggler ducked the punch though, i thought that was a good set-up for the move. The suplex itself wasnt stiff, it flowed really well and the reactions were pretty good too. As you mentioned, the shaky camera did ruin it a bit though. It would've been nice if you could've used some sound effects like in the shooting star press one, just to add to the end product. Good work though. Thank you very much. Btw I'm just starting again. If you interested you could check out my older animations. Thanks again. It means a lot.
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Post by EGLEJOEF16 OG on Jul 14, 2014 17:15:52 GMT -5
WOW!
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R.J. Wilson
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Post by R.J. Wilson on Jul 16, 2014 20:08:36 GMT -5
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Post by EGLEJOEF16 OG on Jul 17, 2014 0:13:57 GMT -5
First impression it looks ready good. Second time around I can clearly see the strings. I really like the smoothness! Over all I understand that you worked hard on it, and I'm sure you will get better and better as you do more.
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