JL24FPS
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Post by JL24FPS on Jul 27, 2014 11:47:50 GMT -5
"Things are about to get Hardcore! Hide the children! Hardcore Championship: Open ChallengeAc3(c) vs. Anyone who enters -Stip: Running Death Valley Driver onto a Ladder Ac3 Meximerican How to vote on matches No polls or bad replies. Your vote will only and only count if you do the following: 1) State the username of the person you are voting for. (should I even have to say this?) 2) You must give reason on why you have voted this person as the winner. Could be anything from smoother animation, to most creative. However you need to compare with the other animations in the match. Put thought into your votes, don't just say who you are voting and leave a sentence, put some effort in. 3) Forum status must be above Jobber If you cannot complete these simple rules, then your vote won't count and will be deleted on the spot, no exceptions. Note: Alot of users like to get a mark out of 10, but I can't force you to give a mark. Just take it to consideration when voting to make a mark to compare each animation in the match. VOTING ENDS IN 48 HOURS
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Post by el torro on Jul 27, 2014 12:25:16 GMT -5
Ace: Good animation here. Again, the running is just not good. First you have all this white tack which just makes the whole thing rather sloppy and lazy and secondly, you NEED to bend the knees, lift the feet up, etc. Otherwise it just looks like he's sliding. The turn was done nice and really liked Joe's movements when he threw AJ off onto the ladder. Didn't like the abrupt ending as it seemed AJ was still going to fall completely on the mat and just stopped.
Meximerican: Well what can I say. They're not pictures so it doesn't really have a flow to it. Movements were not good, mainly Rollins being on Cesaro's shoulders in one frame, and then on the ladder the next. I just don't know what to say.
VOTE: Easily, ACE
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Post by Slim on Jul 27, 2014 13:14:18 GMT -5
Ace: Nice work on this animation, it was smooth, I liked the joints movements but wanted to see Joe jump to make a better impact. The reaction was unfinished. But I like it Meximerican: Like Ozzy said, what can we say, it was bad to me, no pictures, so it was really really choppy, as a consequence we couldn't see the joints movements, so it looked really stiff... Take a lot of pictures, take your time!!! Vote: Ace, OBVIOUSLY.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2014 13:36:53 GMT -5
Ace: It was simple but got the job done. It was smooth, but I really really dislike the "running." You've actually managed to do proper running well in the past so it surprises me, it looks like Samoa is skating on ice. Joe's turn was nice and it had a good flow too it, the reaction was very underwhelming as AJ kinda just laid there without moving an inch.
Meximerican: You've got to take pictures mate! Animation is all pictures haha. You really want to stabilize the camera and move the joints/figures slowly. Just keep practicing!
Vote: Ace.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2014 15:05:01 GMT -5
I wasn't sure if I took enough pics, I guess not. It's my first animation and I know I need to improve. Hopefully I can keep improving and maybe win a title.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2014 5:23:38 GMT -5
Ace: The animation was pretty smooth like always, had a good flow but as always seemed to have a slow pace to the movements. Joint movement was largely non existent, really lazy stuff, if you want to improve to be a top guy you're going to have to focus more on moving them instead of just making them smooth, you've got that down but reaction and joint movement are far more important. Impact was non existent once more, I expect more since you have an RSR so the impact should be a lot easier to do. Reaction was again nothing, AJ landed onto the ladder and moved for about 3 frames before it just ended, out of nowhere, very disappointing. The running wasn't great, sliding always looks bad, you should've atleast attempted proper running given that the way you did the move made it seem quite easy. Lighting was good but I saw the camera shake, I didn't see any string though. 2.5/10 Meximerican: First off, this wasn't an animation, it was a sequence of little videos mashed together, to get it to be an animation you have to take pictures and sequence them together. It's hard to critique this because of that, but from an animation standpoint I'll comment. It wasn't smooth and lacked alot of obvious pictures to make it smooth, it seemed more like a pic fed in the way of smoothness. Joint movement during the animation was so hard to see because of the way it was presented, another reason it has to be stop motion style. I like that you added a little reaction from Cesaro with him holding his back in pain and then taunting but it overall wasn't a whole lot. You really have got to do it stop motion style because otherwise it makes it very hard to comment on it. I hope you make more and that this doesn't deter you from trying harder to improve. dud/10 Vote: Ace
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2014 13:41:57 GMT -5
Ace - This is not my favourite from you. Running, was not really running, it felt pretty slidy. AJ was pretty stiff throughout the running too, a struggle would have been nice. Impact was pretty average, and the reaction just seemed fidgety for me. Mexican Person - Was not an animation. Vote Ace. I get it's not an animation, but really couldn't you have called me by my username instead of my race? Seems a little racist to me
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Post by Colter on Jul 28, 2014 14:31:19 GMT -5
Ac3 - Eh, smooth ani, I felt joint movement was lacking and Joe's walking seemed a tad off. Impact wasn't very, erm, "explosive" as I'd expect this move to be, but nevertheless, you did fine.
Meximerican - Check the tips I gave you earlier in the Stips thread.
My vote goes to...
Ac3
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Post by Jack on Jul 28, 2014 14:58:34 GMT -5
Ace - This is not my favourite from you. Running, was not really running, it felt pretty slidy. AJ was pretty stiff throughout the running too, a struggle would have been nice. Impact was pretty average, and the reaction just seemed fidgety for me.
Meximerican - Was not an animation.
Vote Ace.
Repost, with correct username. Nothing was meant by it, just forgot his username, wanted to get through all the matches.
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Post by Scotty on Jul 28, 2014 15:16:34 GMT -5
Ac3: Probably my favorite from you so far tonight. The movements were pretty great imo. While J was stiff, the way he roated around joe and everything was nice. Really wish you would have finished it to. Once again though, I feel like you're being really lazy tonight, idk if you're not capable of having 2 people in the air at once with string, but you've avoided it with both this move and the Huricanrana. Meximerican: Love how you're standing up for yourself against that racist tyrant named Jack. Nobody should be called by their "race"! Rock on man! It wasn't that stiff. The reaction was pretty good. Just take pictures next time or make the videos shorter. Probably the closest match I've ever witnessed. Ac3 takes it by a strand of hair though.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2014 15:55:29 GMT -5
Since it's pretty obvious ace stomped me I'm gonna go ahead and congratulate ace on his victory. Hopefully I can improve and put in a better submission next ppv
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JL24FPS
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Post by JL24FPS on Jul 29, 2014 11:41:31 GMT -5
Ace- Great job. Like I said before to you, the animation flows really well and has a good impact. Just wish you had a reaction. It just suddenly stops as Aj is falling and its kind of annoying. Otherwise, great job.
Meximerican- What is there to say that hasn't already been said? You gotta take photos. And get a stable surface or tripod so the camera doesn't move. Good attempt, man.
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