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Post by deskjet on May 1, 2015 19:00:08 GMT -5
*****EPISODE #2*****
-The Semi-Finals are set!
-Mr. Williams declares a new champion will be crowned tonight!
-The pressure mounts as all involved try to remain... UNBREAKABLE!
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Post by Deleted on May 1, 2015 20:32:17 GMT -5
Time for Unbreakable episode 2. Looking forward to seeing who wins the tournament, as well as seeing improvement. First match was okay. I'd complain that it ran too long and Jinder kicked out too much because it's a match against Jinder but I kinda like how you're not completely jobbing him out. I wish I could say the same for JTG in your fed...  . Second match, Bourne's posing is great so far. Crimson, not so much. Which is weird, though it's probably just me who actually has an easier time posing with DAs then any other figures. When he got Crimson up, they could've at least locked up. Or Crimson could've turned his head from looking at a turnbuckle pad, or he could've moved his arms before Bourne's hurricanrana. You don't want to go multiple pictures with one guy not moving at all...it's unrealistic. Bourne's crossbody pose was great, Crimson's reverse thrust into the turnbuckle post was rather stiff and unrealistic...it looks like he's ramming his head into the post along with Bourne's midsection. Bourne's counter to Crimson's powerbomb was great. Bourne's neckbreaker, great. Match was a good length, but it was ruined by Crimson's posing. Twist the waist, turn the head, bend the knees, extend the arm out when doing a clothesline, not just leave him barely the same and have it look like a shoulder tackle. Other then that,the match was fine. Well, except for the fact they never did what's in every wrestling match in existence, locking up. I have no clue what you're doing with Xavier Woods. But eh, it's original. And in the beginning of Big E/Crimson there's a lockup. Good. Big E went from being in a front facelock to having Crimson on the ground. Would it have killed you to take two extra pics showing him knocking Crimson to the ground? Crimson stayed in the position he was when he was clotheslined for 3 pictures. Screwy finish, Crimson wins. Or should I say Tommy Mercer. It made sense. Overall, this episode was much better then the first. Pros: Decent-good posing in most cases Good presentation Matches were longer, and more competitive. Cons: When there's bad posing, it's really bad. I already elaborated on this with Crimson. DAs are limited mostly in wrapping their arms around someone. If I never owned one and watched this, I'd think they're limited in everything. Entrances being almost non existent. You've got the No Mercy entrances going on lol. Stories not being developed quite that well. See, this isn't the problem. You're developing stories, sure. You're developing one story. Maybe two if you count what ever you're doing with Xavier Woods. One thing regular BWR excells in is developing each and every storyline every show, whether it be through promos, interviews, or in ring confrontations. You still could do all this stuff, you could still start storylines and progress them through interviews and that jazz. Or in ring confrontations. I don't expect them to fight eachother in a match, as you were still doing your tournament, but you could've started storylines and had them going for two episodes already. Anyway.... Practice posing with Crimson, and flesh out the show a little more with stories and all that, and it'll be just fine. |
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Post by deskjet on May 2, 2015 6:05:37 GMT -5
@brickandyozen I'll agree that's the one thing I enjoy most about BWR Shatter is how well Titch fleshes out storylines. Unbreakable will get there. I just need to situate titles and give guys more of a reason to have a feud with each other than just for the sake of having a feud. More storylines are gonna conceptualize during and after episode #3. Can't say I'm in total agreement with some of your other opinions, sans a transition pic or two, but I do appreciate the perspective and I do go back and double check things when people bring stuff to my attention. Constructive criticism is always welcomed. Thanks for checking out the show  |
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Post by Deleted on May 2, 2015 6:59:45 GMT -5
I've been looking forward to this! Let's go! -I wouldn't be too happy about Mr. Williams being here Paul... -Come on ladies! Enough's enough, damn it! -Women's Hardcore match? I am down for that! -Great match with Big E and Jinder, nice back and forth action. -Good slugfest there with Mercer and Bourne, very entertaining! -I'm loving Xavier's gimmick! -What the **** happened there?! -Going on tour? Cool! Looking forward to it! -Loved the shot of the car pulling up, very effective. -Heyman being a suck up?! -Drew? What are you doing? -Damn it Williams! -And Mercer wins the strap. A very good show deskjet! Looking forward to seeing what stories develop on Episode 3! |
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Post by attitudesback on May 2, 2015 11:18:37 GMT -5
Would like to see entrances. The whole neck thing with Jinder was a little odd to me because you actually see him land on his head, I guess it's a case of exaggerating the extent of the hurt. Not a fan of Mercer at all. As a character it's fine, just the actual figure used sticks out like a sore thumb as he's huge compared to everyone else. The idea of a 'BWR Tour' is great though, really makes it like a WWE event. The background with Xavier looked awesome, the use of a shadow just looked so mysterious. Overall, another solid show. Would like to see some more transitional shots, promos will come once the tournament is finished I think too. The poses were a little off at times which is always something that happens in every fed. My only real dislike is Mercer because of how big the figure is. Look forward to seeing some storylines now the tournament is finished. The whole 'International BWR' is just awesome. Good stuff!!  |
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Post by Robert69 on May 3, 2015 2:22:36 GMT -5
Loved it.
I really can't expand much on what anyone else has already said.
Loved the matches, the segments, etc. I dig the layout etc...
Look forward to the show moving forward.
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Post by T on May 3, 2015 7:53:21 GMT -5
Good to see another bumper episode to get the show rolling -Nice catfight to start with, unique way to begin a show. Looking forward to a women's hardcore match -Mahal/Big E was a nice change with a lot of thought gone into Mahal's strategy for taking down Big E. Took a leaf out of RVD's book from Shatter a few months back -Glad Mercer won, as I want to see Big E/Mercer. Bourne put up a good fight with some nice reversals -Oooh, I noticed something in that Brawler/Woods segment. Sneaked it in there! -Cool idea of how to crown a US champ with the tour -Nice car for Williams  -Good intro for Williams, nice to see you're treating him well  -Funny to read Heyman brown-nosing Williams so much -Didn't see Williams hand-picking a champion across the pond as well as doing it in the UK, but it definitely made sense Very enjoyable show, DJ! Now a champion has been crowned, a few more storylines can start to develop as you've got a good base to build on. Williams will have to return the favour to Heyman one time. |
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Post by The Champ is Here! on May 4, 2015 12:35:02 GMT -5
another solid episode. a few stiff poses here and there, but nothing major
i like the continuity of Having Williams come in and be a tool, just like on shatter
had a feeling that you would have that guy be champ, im excited to see where it goes
woods story has me intrigued
im glad we got our champ, so that you can start putting out more stories, as you have established some stuff
overall another enjoyable episode, and i look forward to you putting out the next episode!
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Post by CWE OWNER on May 5, 2015 7:25:25 GMT -5
Ok here goes.
First of all gotta say this is one of many feds i look forward too
Love the design straight away of the site.
The Arena is spot on glad you added a crowd. Maybe get a print out in there too
make it look oh so much better !
Nice start with the Eva and Kelly brawl looking forward to Hardcore match
My moneys on Fandango to win the title.
Nice to see you using Mattel figures now.
Some great poses in the Big E Jinder match.
Glad Big E won.
Gonna get round to Great British Bash
Gotta be honest the mix between Mattel and Jakks don't work but some great poses in the Bourne / Tommy match
Will Edit later.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on May 5, 2015 14:44:51 GMT -5
Glad to see another episode of BWR Unbreakable up and running! Woohoo! Oh dope! A C2W sign :-) Thanks!
Haha nice opening segment with the two women battling it out. A hardcore women's mach?! Oh hell yeah!
Mahal vs. Langston: A lot of cool back and forth action in this match. Like I've said before, your camera angles make it feel like you're actually in the ring at times. God posing throughout! Mahal almost pulled the wool over Big E's eyes with his antics. Glad to see Langston come out looking strong with the victory. Great match.
Mercer vs. Bourne: I really enjoyed this match. Good to see Bourne combat Mercer's brute strength and size with his aerial attacks. I thoroughly enjoy watching matches with figures from different series. I think you made me love that with your work with NWR. It makes the federation look unique and fun. Loving the Mercer dominance. He's a force to be reckoned with for sure.
Segments: Seems to be some scary dark magic happening with Woods. Cool shot with the vehicle! Wish I had some cars because I would love to shoot a parking lot brawl at some point.
Big E vs. Mercer: This match has been a brawl! They are going at it and I love it. What?! Big E got screwed! There's going to be hell to pay. I'm looking forward to the owner's explanation.
Overall, this was a great show! I love the format and am looking forward to seeing how your owner justifies his actions. Thanks for working so hard on this man! It shows.
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