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Post by attitudesback on Aug 8, 2015 3:54:15 GMT -5
Nice! Glad to see a new show bud. Nice opening promo. Interesting to see Shane open things up with some announcements. Oh, it's a YouTube fed as well? This is interesting. Some good poses with Kofi so far. Glad to see Joe get the win, he looked like an absolute monster. Raven! That's a cool figure, I wish I got more TNA figures actually some were really good. Just seems pretty small. One thing I've noticed, it'd be cool to see some "branding" in the arena. A RAW logo on the stage? At the minute it's a WWF stage. I'd like to see a RAW stage! Roman Reigns taking his vest off to show anger was cool, nice touch. Raven using the tag belts as a weapon! Awesome. Damn, lots of nice spots here. Credit to Raven for fighting back so much. Sabu and RVD! The buddies are here. Oh  !! SDCC Taker! So glad they're re-releasing it in DM form. Oh my god. STING! This is going to be a BRILLIANT feud. Ryback/Brock was a good match. Solid brawl. Brock promo! That's rare. A few things are making me question this here so far but I'll address them later. Woah, Jeff! Another nice match.. with even more questions. So, it seems you're going for a "reality fed" which is cool and all, but acknowledging the WWE as often as you do.. did WWE close? Are you the new WCW? And, if you are keeping within a reality, aren't some of these guys going to be super old? Creating your own reality within a fed is the usual way it's done, but if you're going for reality it narrows things right down because say Hulk Hogan couldn't compete in a feud with Daniel Bryan like he did in my fed. Hogan would simply be way too old. Unless you plan on focusing on younger stars with Taker/Sting being the two older, part time guys I'm not sure I understand how it works. It was a brilliant first time show, I think you're going to have an amazing fed. I'm just struggling with the "reality" element behind some of the storylines. Looking forward to where you go with this.  |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2015 7:08:07 GMT -5
Nice to see you back! Time to get RAW! -Tazz as a ring announcer? Strange choice, but we'll see how it goes. -Shane O'Mac as the Chairman? AW YEAH! -Nice Piper tribute. -Oh, you're doing the matches in the YT format? Interesting. -Nice opening match, big win for Samoa Joe. -Nice Hardcore match. Raven took a beating, but he didn't look weak. -Nice segment with 'Taker and Sting. The only thing that ruined it for me, was that Sting spoke. I would've just stuck with the silence between them, personally. -Glad Lesnar beat Ryback. -HE'S COMING FOR YOU, BOY! -The Shield working for JBL? Interesting. -Who is Bryan's mystery opponent? -Jeff Hardy? UGH. Not a fan of his, but let's see how you use him in RAW. -And Hardy wins. BOOOOOOO!  OK! That was a pretty good show @masspick. Posing needs a little bit of work, but it was good for the most part. You've got some good feuds developing already, so I'm looking forward to seeing how those play out. Looking forward to more RAW very soon! |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2015 7:46:44 GMT -5
Nice! Glad to see a new show bud. Nice opening promo. Interesting to see Shane open things up with some announcements. Oh, it's a YouTube fed as well? This is interesting. Some good poses with Kofi so far. Glad to see Joe get the win, he looked like an absolute monster. Raven! That's a cool figure, I wish I got more TNA figures actually some were really good. Just seems pretty small. One thing I've noticed, it'd be cool to see some "branding" in the arena. A RAW logo on the stage? At the minute it's a WWF stage. I'd like to see a RAW stage! Roman Reigns taking his vest off to show anger was cool, nice touch. Raven using the tag belts as a weapon! Awesome. Damn, lots of nice spots here. Credit to Raven for fighting back so much. Sabu and RVD! The buddies are here. Oh !! SDCC Taker! So glad they're re-releasing it in DM form. Oh my god. STING! This is going to be a BRILLIANT feud. Ryback/Brock was a good match. Solid brawl. Brock promo! That's rare. A few things are making me question this here so far but I'll address them later. Woah, Jeff! Another nice match.. with even more questions. So, it seems you're going for a "reality fed" which is cool and all, but acknowledging the WWE as often as you do.. did WWE close? Are you the new WCW? And, if you are keeping within a reality, aren't some of these guys going to be super old? Creating your own reality within a fed is the usual way it's done, but if you're going for reality it narrows things right down because say Hulk Hogan couldn't compete in a feud with Daniel Bryan like he did in my fed. Hogan would simply be way too old. Unless you plan on focusing on younger stars with Taker/Sting being the two older, part time guys I'm not sure I understand how it works. It was a brilliant first time show, I think you're going to have an amazing fed. I'm just struggling with the "reality" element behind some of the storylines. Looking forward to where you go with this. I'm coming up with a prequel episode explaining what happened to lead up to RAW's creation but it's mostly a fantasy where all wrestling past exists however all guys here are in their prime so they can be used. I like having the fantasy of wrestler being in their prime so they can all compete but there are so many stories I've seen that could have been built on so I wanted to take wrestling history and mix it into fantasy. Nice to see you back! Time to get RAW! -Tazz as a ring announcer? Strange choice, but we'll see how it goes. -Shane O'Mac as the Chairman? AW YEAH! -Nice Piper tribute. -Oh, you're doing the matches in the YT format? Interesting. -Nice opening match, big win for Samoa Joe. -Nice Hardcore match. Raven took a beating, but he didn't look weak. -Nice segment with 'Taker and Sting. The only thing that ruined it for me, was that Sting spoke. I would've just stuck with the silence between them, personally.-Glad Lesnar beat Ryback. -HE'S COMING FOR YOU, BOY! -The Shield working for JBL? Interesting. -Who is Bryan's mystery opponent? -Jeff Hardy? UGH. Not a fan of his, but let's see how you use him in RAW. -And Hardy wins. BOOOOOOO! OK! That was a pretty good show @masspick. Posing needs a little bit of work, but it was good for the most part. You've got some good feuds developing already, so I'm looking forward to seeing how those play out. Looking forward to more RAW very soon! I had originally done it in Fed format but when I posted it my computer froze so I went the Youtube route, it may change for episode 2 but I find this was a little less stress enducing worrying as to whether or not my computer will freeze as I post it. sorry to disapoint with the Sting thing, I normally come up with stuff (dialogue) on the fly and I kinda felt he should have some type of response to Undertaker's promo |
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Post by T on Aug 11, 2015 14:58:00 GMT -5
Always like watching how people do their first episodes. Hopefully the first of many. -Nice to see Shane O'Mac in a fed -Bit too much to take in from Shane, you maybe could have hyped some of that stuff through the announcers -Love a bit of Offspring -Some really good high flying mid-air poses using Kofi there in an entertaining opener -Enjoyed watching the Shield work together again and decimate Raven. The ECW Originals helping Raven out reminded me a little too much of what Pooky did, as it's pretty much the same guys in the same feud -That 'Taker figure is so cool -As was Sting coming down from the rafters -Hope that you do something different with Lesnar as you move forward -Interesting mix of guys back there with JBL -Great to see Jeff Hardy in a fed. You put on a good match with Bryan there Nice debut show, @masspick. Some surprises along the way and some interesting storylines starting. Looking forward to seeing how things pan out. |
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Post by Woods on Aug 12, 2015 4:58:50 GMT -5
Really good debut episode of RAW!
I like the announce team of heyman and Booker, Tazz on the mic is unique as well! Gives the fed a unique feel which is good.
Shane o Mac is in charge?! Awesome!
I like how you've incorporated the superstars past in other promotions (wwe) to start up or continue rivalries.
Opener was really good with some excellent poses in there.
I know you said it was because your pc froze when unploading but I actually really like the format of your episode with the matches being in YouTube style and then the add ons in traditional style to expand on the match and get the vital commentating in their to advance stories.
You had some big moments in this episode like the eery encounter between Undertaker & Sting.
Then also Jeff Hardys surprise appearance to continue his rivalry with CM Punk, which I'm
really happy about because I loved their feud in WWE so I'm looking forward to how you continue this and put your own spin on things!
Great debut ep, looking forward to ep 2!
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