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Post by John1234 on May 8, 2016 15:59:38 GMT -5
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Post by Woods on May 8, 2016 17:00:47 GMT -5
Seen as I'm online, I'll give out a quick reply.
I thought the opening segment was gonna lead to a fatal 4 way match, but we've got 2 singles matches. Looking forward to those.
Good opening match followed by the tag match. Interested to see how far sheamus and rusev can go in your tag division as it's just the two of them with no Barrett or ADR.
Enjoyed the final 2 matches that were hyped at the beginning of the show. Cesaro vs Zayn being my favourite of the night.
I do think the timing of each shot during matches is a little long though. The main thing you need to work on is the posing. It is very stiff, make sure you bend all the necessary joints. I find watching the move you want to pose on YouTube helpful when filming a match.
Overall, this was a fun watch. The match quality was much, much better in this episode. This was a big improvement on your first episode. So good work.
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Post by John1234 on May 8, 2016 17:03:19 GMT -5
Seen as I'm online, I'll give out a quick reply. I thought the opening segment was gonna lead to a fatal 4 way match, but we've got 2 singles matches. Looking forward to those. Good opening match followed by the tag match. Interested to see how far sheamus and rusev can go in your tag division as it's just the two of them with no Barrett or ADR. Enjoyed the final 2 matches that were hyped at the beginning of the show. Cesaro vs Zayn being my favourite of the night. I do think the timing of each shot during matches is a little long though. The main thing you need to work on is the posing. It is very stiff, make sure you bend all the necessary joints. I find watching the move you want to pose on YouTube helpful when filming a match. Overall, this was a fun watch. The match quality was much, much better in this episode. This was a big improvement on your first episode. So good work. Thanks, really appreciate it  |
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Post by aries63 on May 8, 2016 18:33:22 GMT -5
Just started using this forum and came across this just now and was really pleased with the show overall.
Some places that could be improved is the posing, because it looked strange when Rey dialed the 619. I'm also intrigued on how the Cena and Batista PWF rivalry will continue at Summer SuperBrawl for the title. All in all, I'm satisfied with Episode 2 of PWF RAW and appreciate it a lot.
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Post by John1234 on May 8, 2016 18:37:36 GMT -5
Just started using this forum and came across this just now and was really pleased with the show overall. Some places that could be improved is the posing, because it looked strange when Rey dialed the 619. I'm also intrigued on how the Cena and Batista PWF rivalry will continue at Summer SuperBrawl for the title. All in all, I'm satisfied with Episode 2 of PWF RAW and appreciate it a lot. Thanks . Do you have any plans for starting a pic fed? |
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Post by aries63 on May 8, 2016 18:43:12 GMT -5
Yeah, I certainly am! All I'm doing now is building up a roster with a few figures I have. Also need to make room for the ring and stage since the area I'm going to use is covered with scripts and blue prints of the arena.
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Post by John1234 on May 8, 2016 18:47:05 GMT -5
Yeah, I certainly am! All I'm doing now is building up a roster with a few figures I have. Also need to make room for the ring and stage since the area I'm going to use is covered with scripts and blue prints of the arena. Great! |
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Post by attitudesback on May 9, 2016 12:16:25 GMT -5
I can see that you've worked hard here and it's a big improvement on the first ep.
Promo's made sense and the show was laid out early on.
Posing was a huge issue, super super stiff. Make sure the joints are bent etc.
The background too, cut out the printouts and stick them together to make one big image.
Pic quality is really really good though, that's a huge good point.
Lighting wasn't that much of an issue. Was pretty good throughout, the change wasn't that noticeable.
Good stuff man, it's all enjoyable and starting off well. Keep working on the points we mention and you're onto a super good fed.
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Post by John1234 on May 9, 2016 13:41:48 GMT -5
I can see that you've worked hard here and it's a big improvement on the first ep. Promo's made sense and the show was laid out early on. Posing was a huge issue, super super stiff. Make sure the joints are bent etc. The background too, cut out the printouts and stick them together to make one big image. Pic quality is really really good though, that's a huge good point. Lighting wasn't that much of an issue. Was pretty good throughout, the change wasn't that noticeable. Good stuff man, it's all enjoyable and starting off well. Keep working on the points we mention and you're onto a super good fed. Thanks |
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Post by John1234 on May 16, 2016 10:08:18 GMT -5
Thanks for all of the replies guys!
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Post by RBW on May 20, 2016 12:06:06 GMT -5
nice opener, good four guys in the main event scene sets up their following matches nicely good arena setup, really like the titan trons screen idea and crisp photos too! really liked y2J's jacket in the dark too Y2J .vs. Rey was good length, hitting their best moves nicely one tip, if I may? Some posing needs to be a bit of work, seemed rigid in places, make sure to get the most out of the figure's articulation to really express their body language tag match was good, hopefully there will be a team tough enough to topple the L.O.nations do you have tag titles in PWF ? the sami / cesaro match was really good, the counter to the neutraizler was smart! and the koji clutch counter came out of nowehere, which was a great finish! glad sami won just the poses need to be more expressive- like when sami zayne is running to do his flip, his arms and legs are stiff and straight, so doesn't seem look he's running properly even though he lost, we still got to see an RKo at least I like how in your matches the wrestlers nail all their best moves, it makes it action packed from start to finish. nice end with cena and blueTista I hope blueman is the champ, I like the blueness of it all real good show, being your 2nd ever it's going nicely just remember - posing was a little stiff in places, so make sure to exaggerate the arms and legs a bit more to give a bigger feel of their movement - and make sure each picture counts. |
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Post by John1234 on May 20, 2016 13:17:06 GMT -5
nice opener, good four guys in the main event scene sets up their following matches nicely good arena setup, really like the titan trons screen idea and crisp photos too! really liked y2J's jacket in the dark too Y2J .vs. Rey was good length, hitting their best moves nicely one tip, if I may? Some posing needs to be a bit of work, seemed rigid in places, make sure to get the most out of the figure's articulation to really express their body language tag match was good, hopefully there will be a team tough enough to topple the L.O.nations do you have tag titles in PWF ? the sami / cesaro match was really good, the counter to the neutraizler was smart! and the koji clutch counter came out of nowehere, which was a great finish! glad sami won just the poses need to be more expressive- like when sami zayne is running to do his flip, his arms and legs are stiff and straight, so doesn't seem look he's running properly even though he lost, we still got to see an RKo at least I like how in your matches the wrestlers nail all their best moves, it makes it action packed from start to finish. nice end with cena and blueTista I hope blueman is the champ, I like the blueness of it all real good show, being your 2nd ever it's going nicely just remember - posing was a little stiff in places, so make sure to exaggerate the arms and legs a bit more to give a bigger feel of their movement - and make sure each picture counts. Thanks for the kind words! The tag team titles are featured in episode 1 |
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Post by Stuart? on May 29, 2016 8:22:21 GMT -5
Nice opening segment! The shots are super clear, I dig 'em.
Not sure why the bell rang half way through. As with Woods, I thought we'd be getting a fatal four way, but the two singles matches should be good.
You could work on the audio a little. Have the entrance music fade in and fade out instead of just randomly cutting off. Also, have the crowd sfx running the whole way through.
Posing was still hella stiff. Try to move all the joints, try to make them seem like the actual people with natural looking arm/leg positioning, not just toys you've taken pictures of.
You gotta edit that string out too. Super distracting. Use Pixlr if you don't have Photoshop.
Try to use the right themes as well, the intro to Break the Walls Down is always cut when he leaves.
Lighting was pretty dope. I know you mentioned that there would be a change, but it wasn't too distracting.
Nice job dude. Keep hitting those points we advise you on and you'll be on your way to having a great fed!
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Post by deskjet on Jun 7, 2016 8:43:42 GMT -5
Lighting was good as well as the arena. The matches were set up nicely and were well followed through. Posing and string needs work, but I think you have a fed that has some good overall aesthetic and character use. With that as a foundation, you've got potential to make this a really good fed. Keep up the improvements:)
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Post by John1234 on Jun 7, 2016 13:29:11 GMT -5
Lighting was good as well as the arena. The matches were set up nicely and were well followed through. Posing and string needs work, but I think you have a fed that has some good overall aesthetic and character use. With that as a foundation, you've got potential to make this a really good fed. Keep up the improvements:) Thanks! It means a lot coming from a great fedder like you |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jun 8, 2016 13:45:18 GMT -5
Not bad for a second show! I only have a few critiques. I suggest that you really utilize the joints on those figures. They have some great articulation, and using their full range of posing will really make some of those shots a lot less stiff. You have a great eye for telling a story through your matches when it comes to spots and finishes, but the poses are a bit stiff. I like your roster and your arena. Polish up some of those poses, and this could be an awesome fed. Thank you for posting and keep it up!
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Post by Wicked on Jun 27, 2016 23:30:51 GMT -5
This was an interesting show. You have a cool new fed that is coming out and I like it. I like the current WWE feel to it.
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Lighting and picture quality is good. Arena is cool. I like the sharp images.
You can definitely get better with posing and match quality btu you're new and you'll get used to it in no time. For posing trying bending the joints of figures more instead of having stiff unrealistic poses. Also maybe watch moves on youtube to get to know how they look.
Overall a cool show and I am excited for the next one. Keep at it!
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Aug 19, 2016 7:46:52 GMT -5
Pretty much going to echo what has been said, you have some good aspects : roster, lighting, arena, presentation
Really work on your posing and this will be really good
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