Insanity: End of The Year show RP

That might be the most harsh critique I've seen Drakz deliver in recent memory.

But yeah, pretty much everything he said. There's nothing here that makes the reader really want to see what happens next. We're left to contextual assumptions that are never confirmed nor seem to matter in the weird sense in which Dustin's brother keeps referring to Dustin's father as "your father" rather than "our father". The assumption could be made that they're half brothers, but that sort of history is never expounded upon, so it just comes off as weird and half plotted. t's compoundedly disappointing, as a quick glance back down the road shows that you were the mind behind Jon Gotch, which, prior to your discarding of the character, was infinitely more creative than Toughlife Hardass #476 here.

That, and yeah - a late entry for an already disappointing card showing? Bummer.