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Post by thegiantcassatt on Apr 18, 2017 2:03:26 GMT -5
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Post by ¡Twist Of Cinnamon! on Apr 18, 2017 2:04:40 GMT -5
That just made me not want to check it out.
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Post by The American Daydream on Apr 18, 2017 9:22:18 GMT -5
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Post by gazwefc on Apr 18, 2017 9:28:19 GMT -5
You have a good voice for reviews, kinda like the guys that do movie trailers. Nice vid.
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Post by customania on Apr 18, 2017 12:30:03 GMT -5
I like this figure. Like most Orton Elites, it's kept basic and simple but very effective.
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Post by CAT-ion Figures on Apr 18, 2017 13:45:45 GMT -5
I'm gonna go in depth since nobody else wants to. You need to hear this. My advice: do away with the intro. That crap is annoying. Microphone is poor. You don't talk about the actual figure and your vocabulary is poor. You also talk about trivial stuff that has nothing to do with the figure. You basically recreated those RSC videos. "Randy Orton is a great wrestler and is honored here with this elite 49 figure. He comes with a cloth t shirt and a diorama piece. He has a good headscan." Don't do that crap. It's annoying and serves no purpose. We can see he comes with that. You went into no detail and the detail you did was rudimentary. A review goes in depth. Talk about the flaws, the pros etc. This isn't a commercial like the RSC videos. Lose the gimmick and the script. Just show the figure and talk about it. And you already put the intro in the beginning, we don't need it at the end.
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Post by thegiantcassatt on Apr 18, 2017 14:29:16 GMT -5
I'm gonna go in depth since nobody else wants to. You need to hear this. My advice: do away with the intro. That crap is annoying. Microphone is poor. You don't talk about the actual figure and your vocabulary is poor. You also talk about trivial stuff that has nothing to do with the figure. You basically recreated those RSC videos. "Randy Orton is a great wrestler and is honored here with this elite 49 figure. He comes with a cloth t shirt and a diorama piece. He has a good headscan." Don't do that crap. It's annoying and serves no purpose. We can see he comes with that. You went into no detail and the detail you did was rudimentary. A review goes in depth. Talk about the flaws, the pros etc. This isn't a commercial like the RSC videos. Lose the gimmick and the script. Just show the figure and talk about it. And you already put the intro in the beginning, we don't need it at the end. criticism like this is exactly why i posted in here! Thanks alot! But, what exactly do you want to see? You said talk about flaws and pros? I thought i did. |
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Post by RKOrton on Apr 18, 2017 14:30:18 GMT -5
I'm gonna go in depth since nobody else wants to. You need to hear this. My advice: do away with the intro. That crap is annoying. Microphone is poor. You don't talk about the actual figure and your vocabulary is poor. You also talk about trivial stuff that has nothing to do with the figure. You basically recreated those RSC videos. "Randy Orton is a great wrestler and is honored here with this elite 49 figure. He comes with a cloth t shirt and a diorama piece. He has a good headscan." Don't do that crap. It's annoying and serves no purpose. We can see he comes with that. You went into no detail and the detail you did was rudimentary. A review goes in depth. Talk about the flaws, the pros etc. This isn't a commercial like the RSC videos. Lose the gimmick and the script. Just show the figure and talk about it. And you already put the intro in the beginning, we don't need it at the end. Agree. you have a great voice for reviews, but you need to focus more on the figure. |
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Post by Iron Bison on Apr 18, 2017 14:47:57 GMT -5
I'm gonna go in depth since nobody else wants to. You need to hear this. My advice: do away with the intro. That crap is annoying. Microphone is poor. You don't talk about the actual figure and your vocabulary is poor. You also talk about trivial stuff that has nothing to do with the figure. You basically recreated those RSC videos. "Randy Orton is a great wrestler and is honored here with this elite 49 figure. He comes with a cloth t shirt and a diorama piece. He has a good headscan." Don't do that crap. It's annoying and serves no purpose. We can see he comes with that. You went into no detail and the detail you did was rudimentary. A review goes in depth. Talk about the flaws, the pros etc. This isn't a commercial like the RSC videos. Lose the gimmick and the script. Just show the figure and talk about it. And you already put the intro in the beginning, we don't need it at the end. criticism like this is exactly why i posted in here! Thanks alot! But, what exactly do you want to see? You said talk about flaws and pros? I thought i did. You need to tell us why YOU personally liked or disliked it. Not describe it like you're selling It to us. |
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Post by dannybosa on Apr 18, 2017 16:41:26 GMT -5
shouldve been Summerslam Orton !!!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 18, 2017 16:48:28 GMT -5
That just made me not want to check it out. |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 18, 2017 19:42:39 GMT -5
Pretty good, just loose the intro, it's not a gaming channel. Let the intro be your voice.
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Post by SporeSpam on Apr 18, 2017 21:22:29 GMT -5
Talk about the figure, not your thoughts on Randy.
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Post by wrestlingdelorean on Apr 18, 2017 21:52:03 GMT -5
shouldve been Summerslam Orton !!! Agree with this. This Orton would have been an automatic buy if the tights had some color -- orange (like the SummerSlam Heritage basic) or red or something. It's a figure that's been wanted for a long time and unfortunately the execution falls a little short do to the attire choice. Hoping this isn't a trend with Mattel finally giving us the figures we've asked for but with the wrong attires, head choices, etc. |
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Post by CAT-ion Figures on Apr 19, 2017 12:21:50 GMT -5
I'm gonna go in depth since nobody else wants to. You need to hear this. My advice: do away with the intro. That crap is annoying. Microphone is poor. You don't talk about the actual figure and your vocabulary is poor. You also talk about trivial stuff that has nothing to do with the figure. You basically recreated those RSC videos. "Randy Orton is a great wrestler and is honored here with this elite 49 figure. He comes with a cloth t shirt and a diorama piece. He has a good headscan." Don't do that crap. It's annoying and serves no purpose. We can see he comes with that. You went into no detail and the detail you did was rudimentary. A review goes in depth. Talk about the flaws, the pros etc. This isn't a commercial like the RSC videos. Lose the gimmick and the script. Just show the figure and talk about it. And you already put the intro in the beginning, we don't need it at the end. criticism like this is exactly why i posted in here! Thanks alot! But, what exactly do you want to see? You said talk about flaws and pros? I thought i did. I want to see a review. All you mentioned was basic information about Randy Orton. You need to talk about the figure in depth. The extent of what you detailed basically boiled down to "I like the cloth t shirt and the head scan is young Randy Orton". That's not a review. You need to talk about the figures details, how it compares to other figures, what did the figure get right and what did it get wrong. Go in depth and be specific. As it is, it sounded like you were reading off a script of what you think a review is. "Randy Orton is a great wrestler and I liked him when he was the legend killer. I wanted this figure. He comes with a shirt and a young headscan". You need to show off the figure more, not just show a picture of a jakks figure and an Orton picture. Besides the intros, there was nothing of substance in this video. Just set up a camera and film yourself talking about it. Let your thoughts organically flow and come out and edit it down afterwards. Reading from a script may sound like a good idea, but for these kinds of videos it doesn't work unless you're experienced enough, which you aren't. |
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Post by FWE on Apr 19, 2017 12:44:02 GMT -5
criticism like this is exactly why i posted in here! Thanks alot! But, what exactly do you want to see? You said talk about flaws and pros? I thought i did. I want to see a review. All you mentioned was basic information about Randy Orton. You need to talk about the figure in depth. The extent of what you detailed basically boiled down to "I like the cloth t shirt and the head scan is young Randy Orton". That's not a review. You need to talk about the figures details, how it compares to other figures, what did the figure get right and what did it get wrong. Go in depth and be specific. As it is, it sounded like you were reading off a script of what you think a review is. "Randy Orton is a great wrestler and I liked him when he was the legend killer. I wanted this figure. He comes with a shirt and a young headscan". You need to show off the figure more, not just show a picture of a jakks figure and an Orton picture. Besides the intros, there was nothing of substance in this video. Just set up a camera and film yourself talking about it. Let your thoughts organically flow and come out and edit it down afterwards. Reading from a script may sound like a good idea, but for these kinds of videos it doesn't work unless you're experienced enough, which you aren't. what are your thoughts about Tommy toy travels elite figure reviews? |
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Post by CAT-ion Figures on Apr 19, 2017 13:57:03 GMT -5
I want to see a review. All you mentioned was basic information about Randy Orton. You need to talk about the figure in depth. The extent of what you detailed basically boiled down to "I like the cloth t shirt and the head scan is young Randy Orton". That's not a review. You need to talk about the figures details, how it compares to other figures, what did the figure get right and what did it get wrong. Go in depth and be specific. As it is, it sounded like you were reading off a script of what you think a review is. "Randy Orton is a great wrestler and I liked him when he was the legend killer. I wanted this figure. He comes with a shirt and a young headscan". You need to show off the figure more, not just show a picture of a jakks figure and an Orton picture. Besides the intros, there was nothing of substance in this video. Just set up a camera and film yourself talking about it. Let your thoughts organically flow and come out and edit it down afterwards. Reading from a script may sound like a good idea, but for these kinds of videos it doesn't work unless you're experienced enough, which you aren't. what are your thoughts about Tommy toy travels elite figure reviews? Tommy is decent. I liked his previous style better. He has the same problem as OP where it seems he's reading off a script. Burnoutinc has the best reviews by far. He talks about the figure organically and it's pleasant to watch. Tommy tries to be funny way too hard but his reviews are fairly serious which I can appreciate. He covers everything and points out the pros and cons. He has room for improvement but I'm satiated with his reviews. |
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Post by dannybosa on Apr 19, 2017 15:52:48 GMT -5
shouldve been Summerslam Orton !!! Agree with this. This Orton would have been an automatic buy if the tights had some color -- orange (like the SummerSlam Heritage basic) or red or something. It's a figure that's been wanted for a long time and unfortunately the execution falls a little short do to the attire choice. Hoping this isn't a trend with Mattel finally giving us the figures we've asked for but with the wrong attires, head choices, etc. theyve done it with camo edge we've asked for the purple one but got WM 24 attire instead which wasn't that much of a problem but still it also seems the case with the dm jericho, vengeance attire instead of wm 18 |
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Post by thegiantcassatt on Apr 19, 2017 20:42:53 GMT -5
I took some of your advice. I still kept it scripted though only because i already had the footage. Starting with Elite 50 ( I have Shane, Rhyno and Baron) Ill open the box and review unscripted! I still have Enzo and Cass for elite 49 .
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Post by FWE on Apr 20, 2017 13:57:09 GMT -5
I took some of your advice. I still kept it scripted though only because i already had the footage. Starting with Elite 50 ( I have Shane, Rhyno and Baron) Ill open the box and review unscripted! I still have Enzo and Cass for elite 49 . your voice is MONEY! did you ever apply for any radio\tv stations or marketing companies? youd be great for that. it is so strange listening to your voice talking about figures, but I enjoyed the review itself and its definitely an improvement from last time. one pointer tho is i think you should use phrases like "im not a fan of it" instead of "lame", because it is a bit of a buzzkill to hear it sucks if you like it, but its totally acceptable if youre just not a fan of it, or dont like it as much. |
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