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Post by animan on Dec 8, 2007 4:23:25 GMT -5
 BWA (british wrestling alliance) proudly presents afterburn tv 1 This took alot of time and effort so detailed replys would be appreciated.
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Post by ljs on Dec 8, 2007 7:19:05 GMT -5
Nice show, very good in parts like the first match were it was a enjoyable one and some bad parts like how very WWE it was, like the end. I was 50-50 on if I liked it.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Dec 8, 2007 11:29:08 GMT -5
pretty decent show man. the only thing i would reccomend is clean up your arena a bit. when i watch a show i want to feel like im watching an actual wrestling event (which is hard because they're just figs lol) but I would suggest actually making an arena so it would feel more real. that would make your fed better. The match lenght was ok, but just work on your poses. i enjoyed watching most of the show. I think your storyline is developing pretty nicely. lol JBL got knocked the f*** out. Once again the only thing that mesed it up for me was the setup. just change that and you'll be good. nice show =) keep it up
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Post by Nexus Leader on Dec 8, 2007 13:01:14 GMT -5
Cool i see you have changed youtube to WF style instead. Let me start of saying nice lights Michaels champion without even fighting lucky dog (Please sort your grammer out) Kenny Doane!!! who the hell trusts him to look after you? Take a bit of sweet chin music B**** Johnny Nitro v Jimmy Wang Yang Haha no steriod abs Comon Jimmy make him taP? Ouch thats got to hurt the knockers Nitro wins damn Overall match score 3/5 To short for my liking and the moves werent timed perfectly as in. Some moves should of happened later no near the beginning Jeff and MAtt having arguements this cant be good ( i fancy a subway now) Gaunlet Ladder Match:O sounds good Scott stenier starting us off i see and Elijah burke That time went really fast :S Comon Rey, oh great get your head stamped in why dont you Rey-Rey Stunner  That was more like Mayweather then elijah Burke. Great punchs In come the soman Machine Somoa Joe. End off goes Burke Ok i swear that look like Rey is doing something wrong to JOe Stenier owns Burke In comes my favourite Matt Hardy and what a SIDE EFFECT OMG Dangerous powerbomb from Somoa joe Wtf is Rey a monkey all of a sudden? Well looks like Joe has just ruined Rey's monkey streak# Ok that picture sucked sorry to say. Your shadows in it and your fingers lol plus how the  does joe still stay on the ladder SOMOA JOE IS THE NEW CHAMPION Ken- Come out your in 7 UP haha a n o how he feels Why doe lawler ask for 1 Million for? Angle v Show Easy one to say i think Show's going to win Angle won oh well Jericho is coming (old news) lol WTF JBLS dead? But it looks like ketchup lol Randy Orton is comign to the ring. He wants a title show to  Vader Kenny Edge and Orton in the same ring. This isnt going to turn out good WTF Michaels gets the title comesout then gets it striped theres something jacked up with that storyline 5 man NO-DQ match next week Erm this show need to get better Grammer, better storyline. Im liking the ring action most of the time but you need to layout the moves in proper order if you kno what i mean, 6/10 |
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Post by thetaker13 on Dec 9, 2007 15:02:35 GMT -5
Good job. My only recomendation is either use all DA's or RA's or TNA's. The only time you should mix them is for guys like big show.
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Post by DTP. on Dec 9, 2007 15:20:48 GMT -5
Okay, automatic 2.5 for this being your first show.
Nitro/Yang: Ouch, this was harsh. A tiny laugh at your steroid-enhanced abs comment. The beginning springboard dropkick=alien invasion? Okay match, nothing spectacular. Seems a little WWE-ish. 3/5
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Harsh Hardys segment. I remember being depressed when the Hardys were split up in winter 2001.
You had Subway for lunch, didn't you.
Gauntlet: Steiner=100% No, Mysterio, bleh fig. The rules are a little messed up. Good, TNA finally gets a go. Good decision having Joe win, he's a midget next to Matt. 3/5
Lots of sponsors! Yay Angle won the KOE.
Angle/Show: Decent match, pointless run-in. it's Rob Van Dam Real? 3/5
Y2J owns.
OMG Heinz spilled their sauce on JBL, what am I going to eat with this dry burger, omg.
IT'S VADER TIME! Aww, more Dykstra? He's like BWA's Batista. Boo, random title change.
OVERALL: 3.9 [Including 2.5 bonus] Very average show. However I think you have just gotten me into starting a pic fed. Thanks for that. Anyways, the string was there staring me in the face [They took Nitro and Elijah!] But you have some pretty good plans for the future of BWA.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 10, 2007 0:17:14 GMT -5
WOAH! Nice show for first timer!
WOW! Ken Kennedy (Ken Anderson) as the GM!
Nice matches, but seem are lacking of something!
Ketchup on JBL! Oh my God!
Nice show! 6/10 from me!!!!
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Post by animan on Dec 10, 2007 10:41:17 GMT -5
thanks for comments keep um coming
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Post by greenjack1992 on Dec 14, 2007 20:19:28 GMT -5
It was good for what it is but it was a little too 'Vince McMahon' for my liking. Work on your posing and make sure you read back what you've typed to make sure it makes sense. Your storyline is good and I really hope Edge gets the title.
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Post by edgehead12345 on Dec 19, 2007 12:40:03 GMT -5
Looks Like a good show. Opening segment good GM Please's one Superstar. Who else would it be c'mon good Choice. HBK. Kenny Tries To sweetalk HBK. HAHA, Nice response by HBK. Kenny For the cheap shot. HBK saw it coming. SWEET CHIN MUSIC!!. First Match in BWA. Nice lighting. Nitro Vs Jimmy. Nitro off the ropes. Hurricanerunna off the top. 1-2, Kickout . OUCH!, top rope to the floor. TORNADO DDT!. Ouch. Thats gonna leave a mark. Neckbreaker from Nitro. Damn Nitro Won. lol AT Matt. Eh Jeff Should of been in it aswell. Littel Falling out I see. Ladder Match. Scott And Burke Starting thing's up. BACKWARDS HURRICANECANNA OFF THE TOP!!!. Hey The Biggest Littel Man. Burke Pounding away at Rey. Ladder time. Going for the title. Joe. Intresting. Ouch Nasty Fall. Ladder to the head. Hardy. Would of wanted to off seen Jeff come in and attack Matt. SIDE EFFECT!. Chair to the face. Good one on the powerbomb  . Haha lol @ Rey, Ouch Ladder to well Body. Funk's move with the ladder. Springboard on to the ladder. Big Kick. Ah! Joe won. Eh Kurt putting trophy on line. Kurt Vs Big Show. haha at Kurt jumping on show his plan backfired. Trip's him up. Good streanth. Hardcore Holly whats he doing here?. DAMN IT, Monitor to the face. Angel Slam. Its over. Hum Intresting storyline so far. What series that Y2J in?. Good Promo. OMG! No offence but bad blood effects. Who would lay out JBL? Intresting. Edge Trastalking Randy and Kenny. Now Vaders go. Harsh. Oh HBK Lose's it. Nice main event for next show. 7/10. |
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Post by animan on Dec 20, 2007 5:15:57 GMT -5
thanks for the reply man. the jericho is from RA 7 the only bad thing is the head scan
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Post by ayoterror1rcwcorp on Dec 29, 2007 11:10:31 GMT -5
good, but 1 thing i noticed is that lawler is th only one that commentates,some nice poses though, 6.5/10,
And i just noticed that you are parceglos on youtube, why did u stop doing efw?
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Post by Wez on Dec 31, 2007 15:52:28 GMT -5
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Post by The L.F.C Fan on Jan 3, 2008 10:42:33 GMT -5
Sorry for a short reply but basically:
I loved the ladder gauntlet match, easilly the best on the card (apart from matt coming in last which was highly predictable)
The Nitro v Wang match was typical WWE bottom card
Jeff and Matt promo was like... why did matt snap at jeff in the first place? and for the record bringing matt in last was quite stupid since we kinda new he was in the amtch from the matt/jeff promo :/ should of started with him.
There was actually no real main event :/ atleast do a singles match to finish it off instead of a in-ring confrontation. I mean surely you could of donr a 3 v 3 tag match or something leading upto the 6 man match
But still, not bad
6.5/10
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Post by thecolt on Jan 4, 2008 10:38:53 GMT -5
Not bad for your first show. The arena could use some work. I used to mix DA's with RA's on shows, but not in the same match. Dykstra sucks, I'm glad HBK put him out. Everybody loves Joe. Next time you might want to edit out your string. Keep on pic fedding and try to get a little better each time. Overall a decent job ! 6/10
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Post by UFW.222 on Jan 16, 2008 14:59:02 GMT -5
Nice opening segment. with HBK delivering tyhe Sweet chin music
Nirto v Wang, That was a good match and well put together.
Nice Hardy's segment
Nice gauntlet ladder match to determine the first ever IC,Great match but would of liked Elijah to win.
Amazing match between angle and big show.glad angle won.
LOL at the Jbl attacked backstage. who did it . dun dun dun!
nice ending segment!
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Post by hCo.Bro™ [brandon_lee] on Jan 17, 2008 1:13:01 GMT -5
Pretty decent for a first show...
Commentary is always something that can be worked on, if you can help it. As for COMMENTATOR I would use someone other than Lawler, like that Chris B guy something orginal for your fed ...
Pic quality was really good and nice simple light effects here and there...
Im kind of hypocritcal about this subject, but I really dont like the mix of RA's and DA's. Where I guess im hypocritical is that I do like seeing DA's used for guys who are actually bigger than others ex. Kane and 'taker...
Some of the segments were pretty random...ex. I would have had Nitro/Morrison in the intercontiental ladder match rather than Steiner, who I would have liked to see in the world title picture rather than Doane/Dykstra. The Main Event I feel was wasted for a rather pointless debate that resulted in Michaels getting stripped, which in turn had me wondering why he was GIVEN the title in the first place...IMO would have had some sort of match for the title. Tournaments can be entertaining if done right I guess, but hell sometimes its better to just cut to the chase...
Overall it wasnt half bad, some work needed but as always with new feds. No real issues that I cant see getting smoothed out later on...
When people refer to stuff being WWEish dont take it wrong, the best advice that was never given (lol) came from Tazzmaniac about the FCW:
...Season One was “The Foundation”. The roster and storylines were intended to be somewhat reflective of the then-WWF. We wanted viewers to see some familiar faces and aspects in our shows that they were familiar with. So having Triple H, The Rock, “Stone Cold" Steve Austin and others at the top of the card wasn’t to copy the WWF, it was merely to build a foundation for viewers to relate to. It would have been easy to start with a random group of guys in the main event level of the card but if we had started out with Grand Master Sexay fighting Test for the FCW World Championship many people could have been turned off by the fact that it wasn’t very believable. Looking at history, and certainly the present, it is true that people don't support a product that they don't find to be believable.
Season Two was planned to be “The Transition” between Seasons One and Three. The second season saw some new faces make their way to the top of the card and a few familiar faces drop down the card into less high-profile roles. We wanted to start mixing things up a little bit. We tried to pair guys up in different programs that people had never seen before. Elevating newer, fresher talent allowed this to happen...
The current, third season was planned to be “The Product.” We wanted this to be our breakout season. This season has witnessed the start of angles that we have planned before our first episode and the debuts of guys that we have wanted to debut since our early episodes...
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Post by John™ on May 31, 2008 15:22:44 GMT -5
very nice entertaining aswell which i like about a show
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