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Post by Sully© on Jan 2, 2007 15:01:33 GMT -5
and came up with this. kane Sig nip/ tuck ^^i'm liking this one, ive added a border. what do you guys think? edited nip/ tuck one
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Post by Sully© on Jan 2, 2007 15:47:46 GMT -5
any one?
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Post by tylerblackohyes on Jan 2, 2007 15:56:47 GMT -5
I like it, for a first. Sure, it's quite basic (it's just 3 PSDs, right?), and it's got some pretty crappy text, but if you work at that you'll get better in no time at all. You seem to have no problem with finding a fitting background - something many first-timers seem to be physically incapable of in most circumstances - so you get points from me there. Overall a nice signature, just proving that you have to work on your text work and, maybe, go a little deeper into the process as opposed to a few PSDs.
Good for a first.
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Post by Sully© on Jan 2, 2007 16:01:45 GMT -5
theres actually 4 PSD's. Thanks for the reply man. This took me a while, didnt really now hat to do for text and how to do it.
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Post by tylerblackohyes on Jan 2, 2007 16:07:15 GMT -5
Oh yeah, now I see the fourth one. My bad.
Anyway - study up on some text tutorials at Good-Tutorials (in the resource thread) - they'll help you unbelievably.
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Post by classicfan on Jan 2, 2007 16:26:06 GMT -5
its actually pretty good it just a needs a border and the text should be thicker and bigger maybe
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Post by Sully© on Jan 2, 2007 20:49:19 GMT -5
Oh yeah, now I see the fourth one. My bad. Anyway - study up on some text tutorials at Good-Tutorials (in the resource thread) - they'll help you unbelievably. the tuts wont load on there. :-(
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Post by iamkrang on Jan 3, 2007 3:08:32 GMT -5
Not a bad first stab. Border is definately needed and would add a nice finish to any graphic you make especially signature banners. The text is kind of lost in the kane mask but good first stab. The only thing that kinda is meh about it for the future especially is the kane picture within a kane picture. Its really lost and doesnt serve a purpose here. Keep at it look forward to seeing you progress and develop.
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Post by Sully© on Jan 6, 2007 0:01:03 GMT -5
bumpage
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Post by hurricane on Jan 6, 2007 0:02:59 GMT -5
I like the Nip tuck one. Very simple, but it's clean, makes it more appealing. I would say make the font more ledgible. The backround pic is nice, it stands out alot.
The kane however, im not really liking. It's col how you blended the two pics on the left, but the others are just bleh. Theres no realy theme to it, they're just blended over flames. I'd say make the font bigger, make it stand out more. And definately give it a theme of some sort. Perhaps an all red hue?
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Post by tylerblackohyes on Jan 6, 2007 0:03:41 GMT -5
You're improving, and at quite a steady rate if I may say so. Nice placement and the like on the nip/tuck signature, and I'm loving where you put the logo, and the general lowered opacity of it accentuating the eye in the background. The only thing I would perhaps change is the border - I'd put that over the cuts of the two figures, but that's just a personal preference. By the way, did you cut them yourself?
Next, I'd like to see you use some text effects and stuff. You'll be fantastic soon enough.
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Post by Sully© on Jan 6, 2007 0:07:32 GMT -5
You're improving, and at quite a steady rate if I may say so. Nice placement and the like on the nip/tuck signature, and I'm loving where you put the logo, and the general lowered opacity of it accentuating the eye in the background. The only thing I would perhaps change is the border - I'd put that over the cuts of the two figures, but that's just a personal preference. By the way, did you cut them yourself? Next, I'd like to see you use some text effects and stuff. You'll be fantastic soon enough. thanks hurr man for the inputs. Shuya yes i did cut them my self took a while to get it right, my hand would twitch everytime i got close to being doen out lining. Why does it look good?
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Post by tylerblackohyes on Jan 6, 2007 0:17:25 GMT -5
They look really well done, good job man.
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Post by Sully© on Jan 6, 2007 0:34:08 GMT -5
They look really well done, good job man. thanks alot dude.
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