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Post by nobre19 on Jan 29, 2007 17:54:11 GMT -5
It is a little fast. The movements are a little choppy. The string is easially visible. But hey, it IS my first animation. It is an ani of Kane Clotheslining and then Chockslamming Edge. Hope you like it, and I accept any constructive critisizm ;D.
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Chris182
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Post by Chris182 on Jan 29, 2007 20:28:14 GMT -5
....ummmmmm....yea....i did not really know what was happining.....i saw a clothesline not that much of an impact and everything is very very stiff......ummm then i saw a table....the cokeslam was very stiff too.....but i think you should get a nice clean background....maybe white at first....then get thinner string...and then easily edit it out.....well just practice and you will get better
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Post by armor on Jan 29, 2007 20:28:41 GMT -5
Now Im not really the one that should be crticizing seeing as how I have never done one of these but using Fishing line might work the best as far as using string goes. And make sure all the body parts are facing the right way. Like during the pin Kanes arms are all behind him.
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Post by jdsnow14 on Jan 31, 2007 7:09:48 GMT -5
not bad i guess for first ani
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