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Post by pegasiskid on Mar 14, 2007 21:28:00 GMT -5
Here is another animation. I'm too  ing lazy to edit my other post so here is a frog splash  |
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Post by legendkiller92 on Mar 15, 2007 11:40:46 GMT -5
OK
half way through the frog splash he just stops for like a second and finishes the splash,needs editing,can see your arm in a couple frames,could use a better reaction from Taker,very choppy
Overall:
4/10
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Post by f1gh7er on Mar 16, 2007 19:37:24 GMT -5
cool i liked it 6/10 for me
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Post by lucifer666 on Mar 20, 2007 1:07:31 GMT -5
3/10. it would look cooler if you made eddie catch more air.
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Post by mrfry on Mar 26, 2007 12:33:05 GMT -5
edit your string 2/10
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Post by dillan123kid on Mar 29, 2007 9:54:14 GMT -5
its pretty good, needs i a little improvement
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Post by warzonewoody on Mar 30, 2007 4:59:23 GMT -5
The shaking camera makes is look more untidy than it really is. A still camera is fundamental. The move itself isn't too bad, but he should jump higher and not as far, and should do the frog at the peak of the jump, not just before impact; it makes it look unrealistic.
A couple of other improvements would be to remove the reflection of the spotlamp from the rear wall, and to animate all on-set figures. A guy stood next to the ring frozen spoils the illusion.
4/10 for the ani.
Woodzor
P.S. - Just so you know, Eddie died, so you should really have used a different figure, but it's ok just this one time.
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