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Post by bik100 on Aug 26, 2007 22:06:31 GMT -5
yay 114 frames
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Mushroom Stomp
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Crazy Frog Bros Fa' Life
Joined on: Apr 15, 2007 18:41:39 GMT -5
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Post by Mushroom Stomp on Aug 26, 2007 22:27:06 GMT -5
pretty good,alittle choppy,very shaky,and lacks reaction at some parts,the chair shots looked pretty good though
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Post by binnzer317 on Aug 27, 2007 2:28:12 GMT -5
First of all, Change your title. It sounds like your begging. Its way too fast, lacks frames and I can see your hand in one frame. To be honest. 114 frames is to much for a animation. 114 frames is more like a sketch of a match. You need to consentrate on just one move. Try a simple DDT for instance. Moveing on to more of the animation. At the start of it. I think Orton gives a clothsline, its hard to tell. The pictures were blurry and the camera jumps. The kick to the head was pretty good. I like how Orton taps his thigh. Great effect.The chair shot was also quite nice. Although Flairs "dick" seems right in the middle of the rope. Was that supposed to happen?. Im not to fond of Flairs reaction the chair. His arm was kind of robotic. All this critisim will make you better. Im not trying to have a go at you. I just want more decent animaters on the board. 7/10 Scott - ►Binnzer317©◄
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Post by brandon20 on Aug 27, 2007 6:45:26 GMT -5
well its pretty good....but it think you should have never changed the camera angle so much
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Post by Deleted on Aug 28, 2007 13:34:20 GMT -5
Great ani really but i dont like te chairshot
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