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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Mar 11, 2007 0:07:00 GMT -5
Card1. Corey Crimson VS Contraband - Grudge Match 2. Shawn Williams VS Ace - PHW Championship Song - Carved In Stone by Scar Symmetry Elapsed Time - 5:29 OR download.yousendit.com/940229DF63E59B03The Post-Show 3 minute segment will be upp'ed in an hour or so for anyone interested in seeing it. -Thanks and please leave some detailed feedy.
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Post by bbwfjasonfierce on Mar 11, 2007 18:47:35 GMT -5
The First match was its usual crap so much stuff to work on. Second match was the best match from PHW but it wasnt anthing amazing . Good work from Shawny but ACE didnt sell the working of the arm at all and kidna ruined the match. But good Effort i need to come up there some time and help you guys out. which i will and own your asses  |
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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Mar 11, 2007 19:09:50 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedy Jason, I appreciate how much you've been helping PHW lately. Glad you're seeing some improvement.  I think I'm partially at fault for Ace not selling his arm, cause usually before our matches we discuss what we're each gonna work on and sell and this match we forgot to do that. So yeah, I'll just make sure both of us discuss what we're working on the next time around so they know what to sell when it's getting worked on. Come on guys, gimme some more feedy. |
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Post by bbwfjasonfierce on Mar 11, 2007 19:32:49 GMT -5
ya anytime. keep working and ill get up there and help you guys soon.
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Post by xshawnxwilliamsx on Mar 14, 2007 17:57:58 GMT -5
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Post by Joey T on Mar 15, 2007 14:08:03 GMT -5
Thank you for making it decent length.
First match, first thing that jumps out at me is, tell that one kid not to put his arms up when taking a clothesline. They don't hurt that bad, that one wasn't even stiff or anything, so just take it. I LOVED the curbstomp frontflipy mobobber, that was awesome. Chair shot from the guy in the mask was weak. I did like the keeping them apart thing though, cause I mark for feuds. Other than that, nothing really special in this match
2nd match. I really liked the opening chains. Ace's headlock takeover should have been done like, coming down and pulling you over, not whipping you around. I don't know how to explain how to do it with words, but yeah....
With the bridges, have the guy who isnt bridging move his arms a little closer, otherwise it doesn't look like he's making you bridge at all, and it's obvious you are doing it on your own. Good working on the arm, I mark for those sorts of things. Same deal for you as ace with the headlock takeovers. I really liked this match. I'm becoming a bigger fan with the shorter videos. And I totally mark for Ace's gear.
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Post by soadmonsterb on Mar 16, 2007 0:13:56 GMT -5
"And I totally mark for Ace's gear."
thanks bro
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Post by rkboogy on Mar 16, 2007 1:21:22 GMT -5
The first match was lacking. These two definitely need some more work. I like that you're building a solid feud here though. It's good to see storylines in the yard again.
The second match was nuts-o. A lot of good spots in there. The stuff outside was crazy.... I love that you saved the biggest moves for the most painful surface yu could find. lol. The Here It Is Driver was crazy. The curb stomp made me mark out so big. The snapmare driver was a great bump on Ace's part. You and Ace are by far the ones who shine the most in all of your videos.
I love that you made the video shorter this time around. It really made it a lot more fun and easier to watch. The song choice was great. This was definitely my favorite video thus far. I know I say that every time, but that's because every time you guys improve a lot. I remember watching your "Pit of Death" match from back in the day. Then watching this, I wouldn't believe it was the same guys and much less the same fed. You guys are gonna be great some day.
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Post by nickshadeowns on Mar 16, 2007 7:12:03 GMT -5
Nice video, Sab. I'd go into a detailed analysis/breakdown of the match and tell you what I liked/didn't like, but it's about to be 2nd period (I'm at skool). Def. marked for the snapmare driver though, and that curbstomp was the balls. I tell you this alot on AIM, but you guys are getting better all the time. Keep it up!
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