CheZiman
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Post by CheZiman on Jun 12, 2006 23:57:13 GMT -5
"Here's 90 million dollars!"
I stared in shock at the martian that stood before me, a large sum of money in his hands. I wasn't sure if I was more shocked that an interplanetary being had landed in my yard and offered me a large sum of money, or that his spaceship had managed to completely avoid my azalea garden.
"Take it! Start a wrestling federation! DO IT!!!"
OK, this is weird. I've always wanted to start a wrestling federation. How did this...thing...know this? i pondered whether or not to accept his offer.
"Do it or I'll disintegrate you with my ray gun."
Two days later, the wrestling ring was set up in my backyard. I soon realized that the martian who stood in front of me two nights ago was actually local eccentric billionaire Walter Gains. I was pretty drunk that night. Walter knew of my love for wrestling, and agreed to provide me with all the money I needed, as long as I held the matches in my backyard, so he could watch from his window.
Freakin' Sweet Wrestling needed some wrestlers to get going, of course. I contacted a few major names...all rejected. Apparently the idea of wrestling in a backyard on Long Island didn't really suit them too well. Therefore, I had to scrounge up what little talent I could get from the people in the area. And what a crazy bunch I had, folks.
Blavid Dane: A pathetically bad magician who decided that he wanted to go into the wrestling business.
Bling Bling Bertram: A skinny white boy who thinks he's a thug superstar.
Vesuvius The Mighty: A 7'4" giant of a man who is supposed to be playing a demon gimmick, but is far too friendly and nice to do it well.
T.P. Williams: A plumber who uses the overly contrived "Canadian Declogger" as a finisher.
Jimmy Thompson: The local paperboy, forced to wrestle against his will by the bully commissioner.
JAND: A Kane wannabe who seems to be running through all of Kane's bad angles simultaneously.
Kevin Kinnison: The only trained wrestler on the roster, also a very well trained one. The owners don't like him though, and he jobs constantly.
Sasuke McKeelhaul: The ultimate combination of deadly forces, Sasuke McKeelHaul is part ninja, part pirate.
Jon Cena: A cardboard cut-out of John Cena.
The Nuisance: Blavid Dane's mentally challenged friend. He speaks complete gibberish and is constantly dangerously hopped up on pills, so they stuck him with a Warrior-esque character.
Cyrus Meez: Diagnosed with multiple personalities, Cyrus wants to be in the tag division, and pairs up with random inanimate objects.
Rick Blinder: The commissioner of FSW, Blinder was always a bully, and continues to act like that in his role.
Overlord Oblivion: A wimpy, pathetic goth, kind of along the lines of Azrael Abyss from the old SNL Goth Talk segments.
Hatman: A wannabe superhero who possesses unbelievable hat-related superpowers.
ph33r and h4X0rZ: A tag team of two uber technonerds who constantly use 1337 speak in their promos.
Grant Gains: Walter Gains's son, Grant thinks that he can do anything he wants because his father owns the company. He's possibly the worst wrestler of the bunch but gets a decent push anyway. Also, he's a fitness instructor.
What a ragtag bunch....hopefully this'll go well...
(Sorry for the crappy backstory. I wanted to make sure it was really corny, because as you might have gathered, this isn't going to be the most serious of diaries)
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 13, 2006 0:22:45 GMT -5
If it's not going to be a serious diary, don't do it.
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CheZiman
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Post by CheZiman on Jun 13, 2006 0:25:41 GMT -5
You're misunderstanding me. I'm going to be serious about running it and updating. The things that are not going to be serious are the characters and storylines.
Anyway:
FSW UPDATE!!!!
According to a press release by FSW head booker and publicist Erik Dickash, delivered in the most functional and powerful way of advertising possible (Read: he left flyers on all the cars in the nearby parking lots) the card for the FSW's first event: FSW Battle Action Damage (FSW BAD for short). The exciting card will consist of the following matches:
FSW WORLD TITLE MATCH!!! Bling Bling Bertram Vs. The Nuisance
THE FORCES OF ULTIMATE GOOD TEAM UP!!! Hatman and Sasuke McKeelHaul Vs. JAND and T.P. Williams
AN AMAZING ALLITERATION ALTERCATION!!! Kevin Kinnison Vs. Grant Gains
THESE GUYS ARE FIGHTING TOO!!! The 1337 Squad (ph33r and h4X0rZ) Vs. Cyrus Meez and....Cyrus Meez
AND THESE GUYS WILL BE PROBABLY BE DOING SOMETHING!!! Also appearing: Blavid Dane, Jon Cena, and Overlord Oblivion, plus a few more!
Be sure to come see our show, located in lovely and beautiful Erik's Backyard! Bring your friends!! FOR GOD'S SAKE, BRING YOUR FRIENDS!!!!
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 13, 2006 0:31:18 GMT -5
I meant if you weren't going to do serious matches and storylines, don't do it. It's pointless.
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CheZiman
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Post by CheZiman on Jun 13, 2006 0:34:09 GMT -5
What's wrong with doing a humorous diary?
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 13, 2006 0:52:08 GMT -5
They're stupid, and unrealistic. Read some of the other diaries, and then come back and do, you know, a diary worth reading.
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CheZiman
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Post by CheZiman on Jun 13, 2006 1:00:06 GMT -5
Who made you the be-all, end-all of diary writing? I'll have you know that I already read part of your diary on this board, and frankly, I've read more interesting things from my mom's second grade class.
I've been writing diaries for about 3 years now. Instead of just saying, "Person A faces Person B and Person A wins with his finisher in this much time," I like to add a bit of detail to make it...you know....interesting to read.
I've got this diary going on another board, and though I've only done one card so far, I've gotten rave reviews.
So yeah, I'm going to post this diary here. If you don't like it, don't read it, and get back to your stat sheets.
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Post by waylon on Jun 13, 2006 1:03:02 GMT -5
Could you please post the link to the other forum with your diary on it?
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 13, 2006 1:04:15 GMT -5
^Indeed.
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CheZiman
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Post by CheZiman on Jun 13, 2006 1:08:40 GMT -5
I'm in the middle of copying and pasting the card over to here.
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 13, 2006 1:11:15 GMT -5
Why not, you know, copy and past the link?
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Post by CheZiman on Jun 13, 2006 1:13:08 GMT -5
FSW BATTLE ACTION DAMAGE July 9th, 2006
SEGMENT 1: Special Vs. Street
The tiny amount of fans that showed up on time to the event are treated to a press conference between the two wrestlers competing for the FSW World Title tonight: The Nuisance and Bling Bling Bertram. FSW owner Walter Gains hosts the conference as the two begin trading insults.
Bertram: Yo yo yo, what the hell is dis, playa? I gotta fight against dis slow sucka tonight? Dis homie can't even tie his shoelaces, let alone tie me up in a submizzle! Yo, Nuisance, dawg, you betta just give up right now, cuz I was raised on da mean streets! I woke up every mornin' to da sound of dawgs fightin' outside my window! Waddaya gotta say to dat, sucka?
Nuisance: THE PARANOIA OF YOUR MISGUIDED ESTABLISHMENT WILL TREMBLE IN THE SIGHTS OF THE UNPARALLELED RECOGNIZANCE OF YOUR NIGHTMARES!!!! I AM THE TENDERIZATION PLATEAU OF QUINTESSENTIAL ARCHIPELAGOS!!!
Bertram: ....Yo homes, you wack. I'ma kick yo' ass tonizzle and take the World Tizzle, fo' ****zle, mah dizzle!
FSW Color Commentator Laughing Larry: I don't know which one of these guys I understand less.
FSW Play-By-Play Commentator Brian Tegland: I have no clue what either one of these guys is saying, but they both sound pretty angry, and we're sure to see a great match tonight!
Bling Bling Bertram gained 1 point of overness from this segment. The Nuisance gained 2 points of overness from this segment. Overall Rating: 40%
SEGMENT 2: The 1337 Squad Vs. Cyrus Meez
The 1337 Squad has one of the more visually pleasing entrances in the promotion, as they were the only ones who really knew how to use Powerpoint correctly to make their entrance video. Meez enters the arena talking to his partner for the night, a bottle of laundry detergent. Meez holds his own in the match pretty well, considering his partner's inherent lack of sentience. The 1337 Squad has their manager, a computer they've named "Seven-Of-Nine McJaneway," in their corner, and the member of the team that isn't currently wrestling is busy messing around with the computer. Meez ends up tagging the detergent in, and ph33r can't figure out a way to defeat it. He tries to get Meez to tag back in, but Meez refuses, cheering his partner on. Just then, h4X0rZ prints something up and tags himself in. h4X0rZ proceeds to tape the picture he printed up, a picture of a set of shoulders, onto the detergent bottle. h4X0rZ then covers the bottle for the pin, while ph33r keeps Meez away. Meez is angry as the 1337 Squad celebrates, and he clocks both members with his partner, then heads angrily to the back.
WINNERS: The 1337 Squad Crowd Reaction: 12% Match Quality: 32% Overall Rating: 19%
SEGMENT 3: Blindsided
Between matches, local paperboy Jimmy Thompson is riding past the arena on his bike. FSW Commissioner Rick Blinder shoves Thompson off his bike and grabs his papers.
Thompson: Heeeey!!! What didja do that for? I gotta deliver these!
Blinder: Shut up, dweeb! You interrupted our wrestling show!
Thompson: But I was just...
Blinder: (Grabbing Thompson's head and noogeying him) I said shut up! You're not getting your papers back!
Thoimpson: But I have to finish my route!
Blinder: ...Tell ya what. I'll give you your papers back, but you gotta wrestle in our wrestling show first!
Thompson: Come on! I'm getting paid for this!
Blinder: SHUT UP! I'm taking your papers, and if you win your match, you'll get them back! And you're gonna face...him!
(Blinder points to Vesuvius The Mighty, who is standing right near him. Thompson is paralyzed with fear)
Blinder: Good luck tonight, loser!!
Rick Blinder gained 1 point of overness from this segment. Overall Rating: 37%
SEGMENT 4: Grant Gains Vs. Kevin Kinnison
It is painfully obvious how much Kinnison is forcing himself to limit his abilities against the absolutely horrid Gains. Kinnison also looks very unhappy to be in this match, seeing as Gains is the owner's son and Kinnison knows what the outcome is going to have to be. Gains, on the other hand, is ridiculously peppy, jumping around the ring and doing jumping jacks in between his terrible offense. Kinnison eventually gets tired of limiting himself, and puts Gains down with a few really nice maneuvers, including a crisp fisherman's suplex and an excellent exploder suplex. Kinnison signals for his finisher, the Blue Thunder Driver, when Gains starts having a temper tantrum. Gains yells that his dad's going to be really angry if Kinnison wins the match. Kinnison stops for a second, then sighs. He helps Gains up, and Gains hits him with his finisher, the Clothesline. Gains pins Kinnison, then begins to celebrate. Kinnison gets up and starts to leave the ring, but Gains hits him with a stiff clothesline from behind, knocking him out of the ring. Gains laughs and calls Kinnison a loser idiot as he heads to the back.
WINNER: Grant Gains Crowd Reaction: 14% Match Quality: 47% Overall Rating: 27%
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Post by CheZiman on Jun 13, 2006 1:13:24 GMT -5
SEGMENT 5: Jimmy Thompson Vs. Vesuvius The Mighty
Thompson looks like he needs new pants as he steps into the ring with the 7'4" Vesuvius. Thompson spends most of the match running away from Vesuvius, who looks ready to kill him, but Vesuvius finally catches him with a hard lariat. Thompson looks to be out cold as Vesuvius stands over him. Vesuvius suddenly looks remorseful and kneels down to check Thompson's pulse, apologizing the whole time. Vesuvius looks around for someone to help Thompson, but finds no one. Vesuvius tells Thompson that he is going to find him some medical attention, and leaves the ring. The ref has no choice but to count Vesuvius out, and despite the fact that he doesn't look like one, Thompson is officially declared the winner. Thompson finally comes to, realizes he won the match and therefore gets his papers back, and starts to leave, but Rick Blinder comes out and tells Thompson that he isn't going anywhere. Blinder grabs Thompson and gives him an atomic wedgie, then hooks Thompson's underwear to a nearby flagpole and hoists him up the pole.
WINNER (By countout): Jimmy Thompson Vesuvius The Mighty is losing overness because of his weak gimmick. Crowd Reaction: 14% Match Quality: 34% Overall Rating: 21%
SEGMENT 6: Blavid Dane's Hall of Mirrors
There is a puff of smoke in the ring, and when it dissipates....nothing happens. Then Blavid Dane slides into the ring and plays it off as if he just appeared there in the smoke. Dane performs some horribly botched card tricks for the audience, then says that he is here to interview John Cena! The small amount of fans in the crowd start going wild, as Dane runs to the back to get Cena. The crowd's emotions switch from elated to disappointed as Dane comes out with Jon Cena, a cardboard cutout of John Cena. Dane brings Jon into the ring and conducts a very one-sided interview with him, saying that he is reading his mind to get the answers. Dane says that Jon Cena is talking about how he will make his way up to the top of FSW and become the new World Champion. Somehow, the crowd ends up loving this, and chants for Cena until the neighbors poke their heads out of their windows and tell them to quiet down.
Blavid Dane gained 3 points of overness from this segment. Jon Cena gained 1 point of overness from this segment. Overall Rating: 43%
SEGMENT 7: Hatman and Sasuke McKeelHaul Vs. JAND and T.P.Williams
Hatman enters the arena by swinging in on a rope made of yarn from some dismantled wool hats, while Sasuke enters in a wooden ship painted completely black. T.P. enters holding his trademark plunger with the Canadian Maple Leaf painted on it, and JAND comes down with a mask, but then takes it off to reveal horrible burn marks on his face, which are gone by the time he enters the ring. Hatman seems nearly invincible as he takes on JAND, but a clothesline knocks his hat off. From there on in, Hatman's power seems to be almost completely gone, as JAND dominates him. Suddenly, the lights go off (No big difference, being as this is an outside arena and it's daytime), and a voiceover starts taunting JAND. Hatman uses this opportunity to tag McKeelHaul in. T.P. tags himself in, and sets McKeelHaul up for the Canadian Declogger. About a third of the way through the execution of the move (Roughly three minutes in), McKeelHaul manages to power out of it. McKeelHaul puts T.P. down with the Swashbuckle Suplex, then locks in his submission finisher, the Shuriken Lock, for the tapout victory. Hatman recovers his hat and the two celebrate, but JAND summons lightning from the sky, almost hitting the two. Distracted, Hatman and McKeelHaul are easy pickings for T.P. and JAND. JAND hits the Rombstond on Hatman, while T.P. starts executing the Canadian Declogger on McKeelHaul. JAND leaves, and Hatman recovers after about 5 minutes, giving him plenty of time to stop T.P. from finishing the move on McKeelHaul.
WINNERS: Hatman and Sasuke McKeelHaul T.P. Williams is losing overness because of his weak gimmick. Sasuke McKeelHaul is losing overness because of his weak gimmick. Crowd Reaction: 17% Match Quality: 35% Overall Rating: 23%
SEGMENT 8: The House of Oblivion
Overlord Oblivion enters the arena, trying to look all intimidating. He enters the ring and takes a microphone.
Oblivion: Welcome, everyone, to the House of Oblivion! I am Overlord Oblivion, the darkest, most evil member of the FSW roster, and I am here to begin a reign of terror and fear across the FSW arena! All will tremble before my dark powers, of which I received from the Dark Lord Beelzebub himself! I will take on ANYONE who wishes to accept my challenge in order to prove my absolute dominance!
(Just then, a homeless bum walks into the arena)
Bum: Heyyy...anyone got a quarter?
Oblivion: YOU!! How dare you interrupt my demonic tirade!! Enter the ring now, and face my wrath!!
(The bum enters the ring. He is holding a bottle of wine and looks very confused)
Bum: You got a quarter for me, buddy?
Oblivion: The only quarter you'll be seeing is no quarter, when I utterly destroy you! Now give me that wine bottle and let's get this started!
(Oblivion grabs the wine bottle from the bum's hand. A sudden furor enters the bum's eyes, and he pounces on Oblivion, beating the holy hell out of him while he screams and begs for him to stop. The bum lays Oblivion out with a Death Valley Driver-like move, then takes the bottle)
Bum: Don't mess with mah hooch!
(The bum then leaves the arena)
Overlord Oblivion gained 1 point of overness from this segment. Overall Rating: 22%
MAIN EVENT: FSW WORLD TITLE MATCH: The Nuisance Vs. Bling Bling Bertram
Bertram enters to the sounds of "Purple Pills" by D-12 and Eminem, while Nuisance charges to the ring accompanied by a generic (And pretty crappy) hard rock beat. The majority of the match sees Nuisance running around like a wildman, while Bertram tries to bring him down but can't seem to do so. Nuisance is far too hopped up on pills to even feel the pain right now. Nuisance has Bertram set up for his finisher, the Running Hug, when Bertram pulls out one of his diamond-encrusted necklaces. Nuisance is distracted by the shiny object, giving Bertram time to grab him and hit him with the Thug Life Suplex. Bertram pins Nuisance, and we have our first FSW World Champion! Bertram celebrates his tainted victory, playing loud hip-hop music and dedicating his victory to "the brothaz who ain't here no' mo'."
WINNER (New FSW World Champion): Bling Bling Bertram The FSW World title has gained in image. Bling Bling Bertram is losing overness because of his weak gimmick. Crowd Reaction: 19% Match Quality: 40% Overall Rating: 26%
OVERALL RATING: 27%
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Post by CheZiman on Jun 13, 2006 1:37:21 GMT -5
I'm just gonna close this up and post it on the other board I go to. If people don't want a comedy diary here, I'm not going to force it down people's throats.
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 13, 2006 1:42:22 GMT -5
No, it's cool. It was...actually sorta maybe almost kinda good, but a piece of advice, if your ratings pull that crapty, don't post them.
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Post by waylon on Jun 13, 2006 14:55:26 GMT -5
So yeah, post that link buddy where you are getting these rave reviews.
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Post by stevecorinoisgod on Jun 13, 2006 15:33:42 GMT -5
So yeah, post that link buddy where you are getting these rave reviews. He told me on AIM he got the rave reviews from GameFAQs.
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