Andrew
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Post by Andrew on Apr 6, 2008 12:43:03 GMT -5
Decent replys, BRM , Hellboy, Goalie, Cass, Mike, Anybody who can reply longer than 4 lines if you alive out there , hear my wish.
I duno about this one, i like it in ways, but one or two blurry pics make me dislike it            |
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mike
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Post by mike on Apr 6, 2008 14:06:38 GMT -5
Wow, this is like definatley your best pose in my opinion. Thanks for the mention in the comment : ). On to the pose, pic 1 is good its not amazing but usually the first pic isnt. AJ's poisitioning is great in pic 2, you can tell he's setting up for something. Nice kick, it looks well done it doesn't lok to impactful, but then in the next pic you made Benjamin sell it perfectly by just holding his side. I also really like AJ's positioning in pic 4, I like hoes his legs spread out, makes it seem like he put it down really fast after the kick to keep his balance. Pic 5 is pretty plain but I guess its needed to show that AJ is about to grab Shelton. Pic 6 is so great, AJ couldn't be positioned better, it looks like AJ is having some trouble lifting Benjamin so it shows that hes using a lot of strength to lift him. The next pic is amazing too Ajs perfect, Sheltons perfect its great. Also the angles in like all of the pics are spot on. I don't know if pic 8 was needed because it just seems odd how Benjamin looks in the pic after, I think it would have been better to go from pic 7 to 9 and just make it like a release suplexe. There nothing wrong with the pic, its great, its just by the angle or sometihng, Benjamin looks sideways in the next pic. Pic 9 is probably my favourite pic, the way Benjamin sells the move is teriffic and Ajs positioning is great. The last 2 pics are nice, AJ's reaction is great and it great how you made AJ like keep his eye on Benjamin. Great pose buddy, probably your best, its great how you have been so active lately, we should pbl some time, even though id get my ass kicked.
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Post by S on Apr 6, 2008 15:22:22 GMT -5
Tis a great pose Timeout, you did well on this, good positioning and nice clear pictures... it flowed and was easy to understan. If i have one criticism, i'd say the kick looks a little weak and impactless
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Post by SouthAmerican WF'er on Apr 6, 2008 15:51:47 GMT -5
I concur, it is the best pose you have done. I like how you added a move prior to the "main" move, it shows that you payed attention. However, I still think it could have been done a bit better. AJ's kick looks so weak, like he barely touched Shelton. Benjamin's reaction is also poor. I do like, however, how AJ struggled to german suplex Shelton, looks like he was exhausted from the match, which adds realism. I think pic 7 could be done a little better on Shelton's side, but AJ's looking good. The impact is looking good as well as the aftermath reactions, good job on including that.
So yeah, good job. You are getting better, and if you keep practicing, you will be a pretty good poser soon.
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Post by goalie on Apr 6, 2008 19:57:42 GMT -5
Other than the kick looking awkward, and forced, it's great. The flow is excellent, as is positioning all around. Good job bud.
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Paney
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Post by Paney on Apr 7, 2008 7:25:20 GMT -5
Awesome pose man, nothing really bad with it at all.
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Dyamez
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Post by Dyamez on Apr 8, 2008 15:05:27 GMT -5
awesome sequence!
I loved how you made AJ look like his hands were clasped and how you kept his feet together as he did the german suplex. Personally would have loved a little bounce as shelton hit the chair but it still good.
Great job Timeout
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Post by Gene on Apr 10, 2008 1:47:11 GMT -5
AJ'S fingers  |
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Post by Gazza on Apr 11, 2008 2:06:20 GMT -5
Lol euge;[
It's a great pose, the reactions and positioning is spot on. Great detial on the movement. AJs reaction is especily great. Great pose timeout, well done.
ps.im not going to write more than 4 line cos i never did ;[.
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Post by b13stinga on Apr 21, 2008 18:07:25 GMT -5
sweet poses
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Post by eawwe on Apr 27, 2008 9:45:48 GMT -5
Cool pose.
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Post by The Silent Flute (joepetree) on May 12, 2008 4:37:12 GMT -5
i like how you use aj alot
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