KRAYZIE BONE
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Visual.Avenues
Joined on: Jul 20, 2003 22:29:25 GMT -5
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Post by KRAYZIE BONE on May 31, 2008 1:16:54 GMT -5
so a good friend of mine and someone else are in the process of starting a fitness bootcamp/training thing called "the real fit", and needed a logo. "keeping it real" is their motto. This is something thats important to them so I wanna do it right. Heres what I have for my first concept. Thoughts? Criticisms? Ideas?  |
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Post by Mole on May 31, 2008 7:46:55 GMT -5
I really like it. The design's simple and elegant. I'd almost say it should have some color, but I have a feeling it'd throw everything off.
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Post by CF9™ on May 31, 2008 12:59:28 GMT -5
I'm liking it, you should post a pic with color and see how people like that version.
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Post by OverTheEdge on May 31, 2008 13:19:52 GMT -5
I'm not really liking it. There's no main focal point. The circle has strongly contrasting shades, as well as the text. Plus since the main thing is a circle, the straight text really looks awkward. I like the idea, but it could use some work.
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Post by [MJH] on May 31, 2008 13:31:28 GMT -5
for what it's meant to be for it's not all that great, if it were for an advertising agency or an IT company it would suit but it should look alot more exciting for a Fitness company, definately add in more colour or change the shape to something less generic.
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Post by hurricane on Jun 3, 2008 2:14:09 GMT -5
If it weren't for the aftershock part it would be quite nice. But that really throws it off. It's the littlest things. I'd keep it on the side it's already on but arch it along the side of the circle.
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Post by KeBen Owens on Jun 3, 2008 22:35:35 GMT -5
It needs some color I think but it would be tricky to find the right color(s) to use that wouldn't throw everything off. It's simple but still eye catching. Color would help that too if you can find the right one. -abcs
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