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Post by [MJH] on Jun 30, 2008 7:06:15 GMT -5
yeah so I attempted my animania ani and failed, I'll probably redo it but might use this if my retries suck even worse:  |
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EMINЭMツ
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Post by EMINЭMツ on Jun 30, 2008 7:33:50 GMT -5
to fast and cant see wat happend at the end
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Post by hardyboyzwwe on Jun 30, 2008 8:15:46 GMT -5
Ya add a pause at the beggining and the end. And The Stip was through a wall, Like have AJ instead of getting speared through the door have him get speared into the cage and have the cage fall. Very good for a third ani. Thre running was good, but did you use string when he wen through the wall? It looks like you didn't. The pear had a lot of impact which is very good.
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Post by [MJH] on Jun 30, 2008 8:17:53 GMT -5
Ya add a pause at the beggining and the end. Very good for a third ani. Thre running was good, but did you use string when he wen through the wall? It looks like you didn't. The pear had a lot of impact which is very good. I couldnt use string for the through the cage bit because the cage was in the way. |
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JedsWorld
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Post by JedsWorld on Jun 30, 2008 8:44:00 GMT -5
I Like the animation! - The Running Impressed me and It was well done using string - 8/10
As for the 'spear through the cage' I think it ended the animation badly - Seeing the good use of string that you used in your running Im sure the dive through the cage could of been done much better and from a different angle - 5/10
Use string for the spear out the door and you will have a great animation!
Well done, -Jed
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Post by darksideofthemoon on Jun 30, 2008 10:10:04 GMT -5
I really like it, I went back a few pages and did not see you make a animation so I take it that this is your first. I think this is very smooth but choppy in some parts. Try shutting the flash off because the flash is bouncing off the figures badly. The only thing I could recommend is to get a tripod.
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Post by *Xx:DAN:xX* on Jun 30, 2008 12:31:05 GMT -5
well i think u did a pretty good job for u being a beginner
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Post by ayoterror1rcwcorp on Jul 1, 2008 14:19:39 GMT -5
really good as it is very smooth and the running is good. The ending didn't go very well but everything else was pretty good.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 2, 2008 14:14:20 GMT -5
The lighting wasnt good and it went to fast. The running was good though.
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