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Post by Tim of thee on Aug 4, 2008 4:20:02 GMT -5
this film was done by our film group for our production class final
and now it's finally on the web and now I can share it with you guys!
thank you for watching
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Post by Neverfail Nao on Aug 4, 2008 15:50:02 GMT -5
Wow, that was pretty great. The break in part was confusing though. When he sent the script back, he basically admitted break in. I'd been freaked, if I was her! What grade did you get?
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Post by Barrett on Aug 4, 2008 16:26:18 GMT -5
The girl was cute, so I liked it. But seriously, it was pretty good for the most part. I think some of the editing could have used a little work (some shots seemed to drag on where others were so quick that I thought WTF?) and the end seemed a little abrupt (spoiler in white: I think even a shot of him reading the script and how it changed his ways of thinking would've helped. Perhaps even a scene earlier that explained that he had stolen ideas in the past.. But it was still better than most short films I've seen online. And the acting was surprisingly good. Great Job.
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Post by Kasper on Aug 4, 2008 16:44:42 GMT -5
Great Job man! I enjoyed this. Good editing, and good story. I also really liked the acting. The girl could use alitle help though, but it was still great. What kind of camera do you have? It seems like it has very good quality
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Post by TooShort4 on Aug 4, 2008 20:35:44 GMT -5
i lol'd at feed the cat.
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Post by Edgeman05 on Aug 5, 2008 9:19:06 GMT -5
LOL at him taking his shoes off so neatly when he walks in.
Really liked the ending man. Great job!
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Post by Deadshot on Aug 5, 2008 12:55:28 GMT -5
Why is this stickied?
I'd like to watch it...but its lagging alot. Darn my computer.
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Post by ß®å¢K$ßâ¢k on Aug 5, 2008 14:07:48 GMT -5
I thought it was going to be like an opposite of Big Fat Liar, but it wasn't at all. This was good!
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Post by I LIKE BIG BUTTS on Aug 5, 2008 16:09:07 GMT -5
Not that good.
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Post by jomoishollywood on Aug 5, 2008 20:04:43 GMT -5
It was well done but I didnt like the ending.
There shouldve been a hint or something.
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Post by Official WF Ghostbuster on Aug 6, 2008 13:58:50 GMT -5
Technically speaking, it was well done. The shots were laid out well, and the lighting/production was solid.
I would have liked it if the audio was louder, I had to turn my speakers up a lot to hear quite a bit of dialogue.
The main girl actress was good, as was the rest of the supporting cast. I didn't think the teacher had the "look" of a teacher, and because of that, his scenes seemed really fake to me.
The pacing was very hit and miss, some scenes went super quick, and others took a long time to get to the point.
Overall, it wasn't bad at all, and hopefully you got a good grade on it. It has room for improvements, but it was a solid piece.
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Post by PhoeniX™: Valoween on Aug 6, 2008 18:22:48 GMT -5
Yeah? Well, no-one cares for the opinion of someone who steals figures online.
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Post by Master Lewpac on Aug 7, 2008 22:37:37 GMT -5
That girl looks EXACTLY like my Ex.. its almost scary how much they look alike.
The best part of the whole thing was "Im here to talk about erectile disfunction" haha classic.
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Post by goalie on Aug 7, 2008 23:28:23 GMT -5
Why is this stickied, like honestly just because you're a mod you can sticky your own thread? Movie was pretty good though, the girl wasn't the best actor, and the teacher, didn't remind me of a teacher.
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Post by Mr. Show on Aug 8, 2008 1:09:06 GMT -5
The actor playing the teacher is an ok actor, but way too young to play a teacher. The other actors just weren't very good at all, specifically the main girl and the pizza boy. The camera work however, is well done.
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Post by Tim of thee on Aug 8, 2008 14:31:30 GMT -5
first of all, I'd like to thank those of you who have watched it it really means a lot to me since it consumed a lot of my life during the spring Great Job man! I enjoyed this. Good editing, and good story. I also really liked the acting. The girl could use alitle help though, but it was still great. What kind of camera do you have? It seems like it has very good quality thanks a lot, we used a simple gl-2, mostly on a tripod but we were able to make a decent dolly why not? Why is this stickied, like honestly just because you're a mod you can sticky your own thread?. basically The best part of the whole thing was "Im here to talk about erectile disfunction" haha classic. the funny part is that he chooses to watch that infomercial The actor playing the teacher is an ok actor, but way too young to play a teacher. The other actors just weren't very good at all, specifically the main girl and the pizza boy. The camera work however, is well done. for the teacher, we were going for someone in their early 30's and he was 33.. the dean got killed by toshirô mifune when he worked with him in japan thanks, we put a lot of time into the camera work and editing
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Post by 3Lephant (Naptown Icon) on Aug 9, 2008 2:02:21 GMT -5
Timmmmmmmage,
you know i love all of the stuff you do.. poetry, songs, music, random videos with your friends, etc.. And this is no exception. You've got your bases covered and it needs some work, I think it just needs to be longer, I trust that you will do fine in adding the right shots if you get time.
Great job
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Post by pineappleexpress on Aug 9, 2008 2:42:24 GMT -5
awesome stuff timmy
awesome camera work and screenplay, so enticing for a viewer. you're really talented and i hope you continue to post your stuff on here
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Post by Joe/Smurf on Aug 10, 2008 13:19:42 GMT -5
I watched it earlier this week and forgot to leave a reply. It was a little artsy, but I still enjoyed it.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2008 22:28:15 GMT -5
Tim, I'd love to know what camera was used, and what editing software was used. I'm shopping around for cameras and I have no clue what to get.
Pretty good movie, like others said the teacher was the only good actor in the bunch. The main chick has to be a robot.
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