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Post by Tim of thee on Aug 13, 2008 2:09:42 GMT -5
Tim, I'd love to know what camera was used, and what editing software was used. I'm shopping around for cameras and I have no clue what to get. Pretty good movie, like others said the teacher was the only good actor in the bunch. The main chick has to be a robot. we used a simple gl-2 that the school supplied we edited on final cut.. it so easy to use I am taking a class on avid editing technology.. thats the real deal, the thing that most everyone uses |
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Post by HandsomeHollywood on Aug 13, 2008 11:24:35 GMT -5
the professor reminds me of Ryan Reynolds.
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Post by DC:UK on Aug 15, 2008 7:02:20 GMT -5
Im not gonna lie I wasn't expecting much, ive seen similar things which people have produced in college around my area and they havent been great... ...But, this is definately one of the better ones ive seen, the camera work and editing was really well done, the acting wasnt the best ive seen, but you have to work with what you've got right? And as someone mentioned before the audio was a bit off, some dialouge was louder than other parts. But on the whole great job, hope you get the grade you need for it  |
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Post by chriswf on Aug 19, 2008 6:03:59 GMT -5
Just watched this. Was a nice little piece. The acting wasn't great, but it also wasn't horrible. And all the editing and the production was really nice and professional looking. Little ending twist was nice too. Good job.
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Post by DgenerationX092 on Aug 31, 2008 0:18:34 GMT -5
Why is this stickied, like honestly just because you're a mod you can sticky your own thread? Movie was pretty good though, the girl wasn't the best actor, and the teacher, didn't remind me of a teacher. Agreed. your abusing your power by stickying a thread about your school movie like its really that important, and took one month to get two pages, and yet threads like TDK which the first time probably had over 100 pages doesnt get stickied. Last Movie You Watched and the Official Horror Threads are the biggest threads here, almost the biggest on the entire board, and yet are not stickied. Onto the actual doc. it was good (actually great) until the end. the end was stupid. you built all of this tension and a 5 minute scene of breaking and entering, only for it to lead to nothing. When drafting storys, movies, and films, they all use a plot outline right? Well tell me, whats at the very top and point of the outline? The Climax, or the main conflict. thats exactly what this video was missing. I mean if you have a plot outline please post it because id like to know where exactly the climax is supposed to be in this. The rising action was the breaking and entering, then he took the script... and then it cuts to him resigning which was in no way a climax. Definitly a falling action. no conflict inbetween? Something had to have happened from him taking the script, and him quitting his job. Nobody risks going to prison just to admit theyre wrong and quit their job. Really the only climax or main conflict was the turn on music from the computer (which idk who wouldnt wake up from that) which im sure wasnt what you were going for. So in the end it felt like i was watching an episode of the Brady Bunch where in only a few minutes someone has an epiphany and the day ends happily. But even the Brady Bunch had bigger conflicts. Im sorry for the harsh criticism but I just cant get over how it had no climax. If i was grading this i couldnt give it anything above a D for effort. |
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Post by wwf4lyf on Sept 9, 2008 1:32:11 GMT -5
Good work, but end sorta ruined it. Good luck, keep making films
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Post by hardyz27 on Sept 20, 2008 0:37:14 GMT -5
Good Video Bro Thumbs Up
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