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Post by Red Dragon on Aug 11, 2008 12:08:33 GMT -5
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Aug 11, 2008 12:25:47 GMT -5
alright lets get to it
i am not sure about your choice of commentators. i mean i am not too fond of HTM being a commentator neither Milo, but i may be jumping to conclusion.
the whole point system is a cool idea. i like it.
ok dusty is the head of the company... no wonder the logo has that cowboy feel. cool
ok here we go i am going to just give you an overall reply and some timps that will help you improve. i dont want to seem harsh at all but the pic quality is pretty bad. i would reccomend more lighting or using flash. what kind of camera are you using?
your poses are not bad but they need a bit of work. i can see becuz your camera is so bad that your string poses come out really blurry. like i said maybe more lighting would help that. just keep trying man. you will continue to improve. good luck to you. if i think of any more advice i will edit. i would continue to work at it. because you have great originality and good storyline development. keep trying man and you will get better =)
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Post by Red Dragon on Aug 11, 2008 13:14:40 GMT -5
May as well do a shout out everyone else does it now
wwefan617- thanks for the reply, I know my camera is basically dead, it eats up batteries really fast also, Hopefully next show i'll minimise the pics allowing better pic qualtiy. As far as commentators go I thought HTM would be good and it allows me to have him wrestle occasionally ( and I have 2 figs of him so I can swap figs) and Milo is from the movie Atlantis lol he just looks good with them. Thanks again.
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easy1986
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Post by easy1986 on Aug 11, 2008 13:28:16 GMT -5
Wow another up and coming league, Glad you made a show
Pics are a little too dark but your poses are really good so i can deal with that. Orton really does have a brother, good match, I love Ortons finishing move its pretty deadly. The Sandman promo is the best thing I seen in years loved it and the pic quality kinda helped it. I love how your getting all these new stars in the mix. Johnny Jeter's attire is awesome!!
Good match
Know is a beast allthough I really dont like him in real life.
Good first show and keep it up, I can see your fed going places!!
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Post by Red Dragon on Aug 11, 2008 14:07:03 GMT -5
easy1986- Thanks a really positive reply thanks, ortons brother is really called Nathan as well I didn't want the RKO so I got him that move thinking of naming it the 'Orton Family Driver' I was quite pleased with the Sandman promo and glad you liked it so much, Jeters attire is a Paul London fig with 'P.L' sanded off with a jacket I found, Allways liked the Knox fig don't know why I just like it. Thanks again!
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Post by deskjet on Aug 11, 2008 15:01:09 GMT -5
Not too bad of a show-luv the logo. Nate orton huh, is that real? Opening match was good. Some good poses. Love the Jeter custom. Eugene was hilarious. LMAO at Sandman...great backstage. Main event was ok, like the hardcore stuff. I think it goes without saying work on the pic quality and the arena...and get rid of the brick!  Overall a decent debut with room to improve. Keep up the good work! |
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geroge86
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Post by geroge86 on Aug 11, 2008 17:06:52 GMT -5
Not too bad of a show-luv the logo. Nate orton huh, is that real? yeah Nate Orton is real however he's trying to get into MMA and to my knowledge he doesn't have any tattoos and he has a shaved head so in real life he looks a little different. As for the show I like what you got going on I love the Sandman promo and I like the point system for title shots the pics are a little dark but my screen is outdated as well overall I liked the show just try to make the pics lighter |
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Post by Red Dragon on Aug 12, 2008 2:41:21 GMT -5
Thanks for the replies:
deskjet- Thanks, seems as if everyone liked the Sandman promo yay, as for the brick it will prob stay to keep the rough texas look, I like the arena its nice and plain I only put the tree (just about see) to cover up the light comming though the wall, thanks
Geroge66- thanks, I now Nathan does MMA but I just use Randys first fig not modified somewere in this season we may have a Orton promo explaining stuff and I will improve the pics
These are what I think are the main points of what I need to improve on
Too dark and bad quality, episode 2 will have smaller pics allowing the quality to be better and I will get some lights in
Thanks for all the replies
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