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Post by Ace Bennett on Sept 4, 2013 20:00:11 GMT -5
Venusaur has Thick Fat (which is insane) and increased Defense and Special Defense. Charizard has Drought and increased Special Attack. Blastoise has some new ability that increases it's attack power.
I'm just going to box my Kanto starter along with Torchic because I want to work with all Kalos Pokemon in my first play through. Being able to transfer is really awesome though, and five dollars a year is really nice and affordable.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Sept 1, 2013 12:46:55 GMT -5
He's hardcore! He's hardcore! He's hardcore!
Seriously, that sucks. Get better.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 31, 2013 16:39:03 GMT -5
I could've swore I responded to this in my first go round, but I guess not.
I pretty much agree with all previous posts. The one thing I'd like to add is to be careful when describing other people. The way Jayson comes off in monologues makes him come off as this cocky arrogant upper-class guy who thinks he's the best thing since sliced bread. That type of person wouldn't refer to another person, especially not a low-class waitress, as "lovely." I feel like by doing that, you're canceling out some of the character build that you have starting with contradicting statements. A very solid piece overall though, just a few things to work on. Love to see newcomers with potential.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 30, 2013 13:19:24 GMT -5
I thought this was decent man. I know you started late (a few of us had that issue) so it obviously looks rushed. But you did pretty well all things considered.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 30, 2013 13:12:08 GMT -5
Nice work man. Enjoyed this quite a lot. You do a great job of developing characters in a short period of time. It did seem a tad rushed In places with slight grammar errors, but no big deal really. Great work overall.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 30, 2013 13:00:07 GMT -5
This was quickly put together? I couldn't tell, I thought it this was really good, better than your Battleground piece. I loved e contrast between Bishop's first run with the belt and this run, that was well done. Can't wait to read further work from you
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 30, 2013 12:38:15 GMT -5
The hope is one of the lower three WRs becomes starter worthy and I can use Roddy or the breakout guy as trade bait for another good RB.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 29, 2013 23:32:03 GMT -5
Because Obama is anti-American, we will go into WWIII and the holocaust that happened in Germany will happen here too. While we're fighting overseas, all chaos breaks loose here at home and everyone is sent to die at the concentration camps they have built all around the country. Well, that escalated quickly.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 29, 2013 21:45:20 GMT -5
10 Teams, Standard Rules. I picked 6th, pretty happy overall. Would've liked another RB, but I didn't see anyone there who I liked and Thompkins was staring me in the face.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 29, 2013 0:02:48 GMT -5
No, I think the guy you were speaking to was just stupid.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 28, 2013 15:56:47 GMT -5
The 2DS looks really cool, I'd have gotten one if I had've needed a 3DS to play X and Y. Thankfully I already got my hands on one. Just waiting for the exclusives to be announced before I preorder.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 26, 2013 21:03:55 GMT -5
While I do think this whole Nazi argument is dumb and everything, Nazi's weren't the first people to make laws discriminating against homeless people. en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vagrancy_Act_1824www.legislation.gov.uk/ukpga/Geo4/5/83/contentsI realize it's a Wikipedia article and everything, but I also provided a .gov.uk page that states the law is real also. It makes sleeping on the street and begging illegal. If one is homeless, they are probably sleeping on the street, therefore making it illegal to be homeless. So yeah, the idea of punishing homeless people for being homeless is not of Nazi origin. Someone correct me if I'm wrong of course but yeah..
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 26, 2013 20:32:24 GMT -5
So the Bills are supposedly planning on starting Jeff Tuel for Week 1. If that actually happens, it'll be the first time ever that an undrafted rookie starts in Week 1 in the modern era.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 26, 2013 19:46:07 GMT -5
Happens to the best of us. Was looking forward to this match, and despite this being short it was still well written. If we had like a 500 word limit for RPs, and I were a betting man, I'd probably put my money on you. Good luck.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 26, 2013 19:41:02 GMT -5
I honestly like the style of these, I just don't see how they will be competitive. Although judging by the lines in this I don't think you care. Glad to see you having fun with a new style though. I enjoyed several pieces of this.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 26, 2013 19:31:48 GMT -5
Yep yep pretty much what everyone else said. It's nice to have a new interested party, but watch the grammar. We also want more of an idea of who your character is and what they are about about and why they are in the WFWF in their debut, but that can always be covered in the future. The foundation is there and there is definitely a lot of improvement to be made here so I look forward to reading your new stuff. Welcome man.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 26, 2013 19:23:33 GMT -5
I told you what I thought about the first two parts of this, and I must say that you can definitely see some of Revvie's influence coming through in the third part as well. You would've definitely beat me with this if this were last show. Just watch the minor grammar errors that I saw at points, because in close matches those will make or break you. Great work man. I'm proud :') haha
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 26, 2013 19:12:54 GMT -5
Yeah, I'm honestly surprised you showed man. Hopefully we start to see some quality stuff from you starting next show as you showed a lot of potential in your first RP. But the you've been Aced line is pretty bad, I must say. But yeah, let's see what you bring next show.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 26, 2013 0:23:18 GMT -5
I've been back at university for a little over a week now, classes start tomorrow. Just a word of advice from me about the sports thing: if you're really new and don't think you'll be good at the sport, join one that your school isn't particularly competitive in. That will give you a better chance to play in the actual games and have more fun with it. I come from a high school that was very competitive in lacrosse (made states every year I was there). So instead of bothering with that, I went with track, because we were one of the weaker teams in our area. Turned out to be a good idea, because I had a lot more fun with it. Made sectionals my junior and senior year after starting sophomore year.
But yeah, high school sucked for the most part.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 23, 2013 23:23:41 GMT -5
Wee bit late, thanks Shawn for giving me the okay to do so. Not my best, but what can you do. I thought the deadline was Sunday for some reason. Ah well.
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