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Post by thetruthrtruth on Feb 9, 2009 14:17:52 GMT -5
RATE PLEASE
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Post by bad guy™ on Feb 9, 2009 14:25:10 GMT -5
Ok, don't take this the wrong way, and read the whole thing before you say anything about my comment. It's to slow. There is no reaction by either guy. The table should have broke. That being said, I take it you are just beginning, so in that case, this is decent. For future reference, you really should work on the reactions of the guys more if nothing else. Then work on working in the reactions with weapons (the table breaking and such). Hope that helps.
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Post by thetruthrtruth on Feb 9, 2009 14:28:02 GMT -5
Ok, don't take this the wrong way, and read the whole thing before you say anything about my comment. It's to slow. There is no reaction by either guy. The table should have broke.
That being said, I take it you are just beginning, so in that case, this is decent. For future reference, you really should work on the reactions of the guys more if nothing else. Then work on working in the reactions with weapons (the table breaking and such). Hope that helps. The bolded part....yes i know it should have but the table has a white outline and looked real ugly so instead i didn't break the table...and yes it's like my third.
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Ryan
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Post by Ryan on Feb 9, 2009 14:42:23 GMT -5
could you please tell me how you got your table.thanks
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Post by thetruthrtruth on Feb 9, 2009 14:48:09 GMT -5
In the sprites topic.
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Post by alexgg on Feb 9, 2009 14:53:55 GMT -5
sorry for messed up sprites, didnt realize photobucket converted bmp into jpg which gave it that fuzzy look, i will get it sorted a soon as possible.
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Post by Epic Z on Feb 9, 2009 16:25:21 GMT -5
Well 1st of all I don't like how dark the figures are but if that floats your boat then okay.
If you knew the table wouldn't break IMO you should have picked a diffrent move but since you didn't...
It was to floaty the throwers legs didn't move what so ever no reaction on the table he could have fell off and held his stomach.
Keep trying and don't take that the wrong way.
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trøy
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Post by trøy on Feb 9, 2009 16:31:47 GMT -5
First, you need to have some kind of momentum going into the move. You can't just have a guy throw him in the air without momentum. Second, Work on your smoothness, sometimes you want to add frames, and sometimes take away. Third, you need to have the guy who is throwing the other guy doing something while the move is taking place. Another thing is reactions, work on them. In this one, there is absolutely no reaction, and no table break. Finally, remember to keep it smooth and not floaty.
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