MX5
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Post by MX5 on Mar 6, 2009 20:08:15 GMT -5
I DON'T KNOW, BUT I HAVE THEM!  SEE WHAT I DID THERE? WE WERE GOING DOWN HAHA LAND AND TOOK A RIGHT ONTO TOPICAL. |
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Das Jay™
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Post by Das Jay™ on Mar 6, 2009 20:40:04 GMT -5
Pretty cool.
But i dont like then ring how it has white bits.
Pros
The ladder moving is a great touch but i think it shouold move abit more
The runnings pretty sweet
The corkscrew senton is nice and creative
Cons
Orange reaction is holding his head but why, he didnt hit his head
Reds reaction sucks
I think you could make red have a reaction at the start like hes facing the other way and turns around then BAM! hits him but you just made him stand there
Making orange behind red makes him look like he hits his shoulder so i dont really like that bit
Overall a pretty good ani but work on the cons.
8.3/10???
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MX5
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Post by MX5 on Mar 6, 2009 20:54:43 GMT -5
Cons Orange reaction is holding his head but why, he didnt hit his head Reds reaction sucks I think you could make red have a reaction at the start like hes facing the other way and turns around then BAM! hits him but you just made him stand there Making orange behind red makes him look like he hits his shoulder so i dont really like that bit Orange is holding his head, probably because he is contemplating why the hell he'd jump off of a ladder onto one person. Reds reaction sucks, have you seen a plancha in wrestling sir? they fall over, not much to it... When they aren't falling over guess what? they stand there. Again with watching plancha's in wrestling, for a plancha like this, you'd catch the person with your shoulder. in reality if you let someone land on your whole body you'd be crushed. Thanks for the good reply and all, but I don't really care to improve anymore, I just do them for fun! |
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Das Jay™
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Post by Das Jay™ on Mar 6, 2009 21:15:01 GMT -5
Okay just saying there wasnt much to complaine about except those points.
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MX5
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Post by MX5 on Mar 6, 2009 21:22:45 GMT -5
Its cool MAN! I'm a funny guy, hahahahahah laugh damn it.
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Das Jay™
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Post by Das Jay™ on Mar 6, 2009 21:58:53 GMT -5
Haha lol.
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Post by alexgg on Mar 7, 2009 6:18:39 GMT -5
mad move and it looks great and as long as you like it thats all that matters.
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xReyAlsanecx
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Post by xReyAlsanecx on Mar 7, 2009 17:07:40 GMT -5
Epic apart from reds reactions at the end.
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Post by bac5220 on Mar 23, 2009 18:45:09 GMT -5
Pretty cool. But i dont like then ring how it has white bits. Pros The ladder moving is a great touch but i think it shouold move abit more The runnings pretty sweet The corkscrew senton is nice and creative Cons Orange reaction is holding his head but why, he didnt hit his head Reds reaction sucks I think you could make red have a reaction at the start like hes facing the other way and turns around then BAM! hits him but you just made him stand there Making orange behind red makes him look like he hits his shoulder so i dont really like that bit Overall a pretty good ani but work on the cons. 8.3/10??? 1maybe he was holding his head 'cuz he saw some guy with his wife.  2 maybe red was k.o.'d 3 maybe red was breathing 4 maybe thats his style...  overall i liked the ani. 9.10 |
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trøy
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Post by trøy on Mar 23, 2009 19:41:56 GMT -5
Pretty cool. But i dont like then ring how it has white bits. Pros The ladder moving is a great touch but i think it shouold move abit more The runnings pretty sweet The corkscrew senton is nice and creative Cons Orange reaction is holding his head but why, he didnt hit his head Reds reaction sucks I think you could make red have a reaction at the start like hes facing the other way and turns around then BAM! hits him but you just made him stand there Making orange behind red makes him look like he hits his shoulder so i dont really like that bit Overall a pretty good ani but work on the cons. 8.3/10??? 1maybe he was holsing his head 'cuz he saw some guy with his wife. 2 maybe red was k.o.'d 3 maybe red was breathing 4 maybe thats his style... overall i liked the ani. 9.10 Don't top old posts. |
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