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Post by thetruthrtruth on Mar 9, 2009 14:37:00 GMT -5
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Sims
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Post by Sims on Mar 9, 2009 15:33:15 GMT -5
Well there's no way you used string. There was nothing to use string for. First off the setup with the commentary was bad. Then your figures were extremely stiff. Third your matches were far to short and was only two of them so the show had no depth. To be honest I have no idea what the foil was there for. Commentary was just awful.So...
Batista vs Santino:
You had 3 of the same pictures of Beth there don't know what that was about. Match made no sense. Batista is in the ring. Santino is between his legs,then Santino is on top off him. Then Santino whens. You need to put commentary under each picture not at the end. That way we know what the hell is going on. No way you used string because there was nothing to use it for like I said.
John Cena vs Edge
Vince's Intro was the dumbest thing I have ever read but It was a good idea the five count thing. It would have been better if you would have established some sort of back story.
Cena turns around and gets speared....terrible. Then the foil wtf. Undertaker Appears and Edge is on the ground with Undertaker's hand on his . Stiff as a board. No Commentary just Undertaker with the belt.
It seems you put little effort into this and you didn't use string if so please show me where. I've seen worse but this isn't good at all.
Pointers:Better camera angles,longer matches, unstiffen your figures so the make better poses,use string,better commentary setup and page set up.
3/10
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Post by thetruthrtruth on Mar 9, 2009 15:49:23 GMT -5
It was actually a test to see if it worked with my site TBH, new one longer matches Coming Soon, thanks for the art with the five count, the beth thing was an accident, i just realised. Sometimes i couldn't get the dudes to stand up (some can't for some reason) i used string and edited it out!
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Sims
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Post by Sims on Mar 9, 2009 15:52:37 GMT -5
It was actually a test to see if it worked with my site TBH, new one longer matches Coming Soon, thanks for the art with the five count, the beth thing was an accident, i just realised. Sometimes i couldn't get the dudes to stand up (some can't for some reason) i used string and edited it out! Where   |
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Post by thetruthrtruth on Mar 9, 2009 15:55:20 GMT -5
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Sims
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Post by Sims on Mar 9, 2009 16:01:33 GMT -5
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Post by deskjet on Mar 9, 2009 18:59:39 GMT -5
Ok. let me start with the good. pretty clear pics, and the entrance is cool, although it is jakks made, but it looked good. Site was good. the not so good-commentary, poses, pic variation. The commentary was horible. the movement of wrestlers was pretty stiff. Brett hart looked like he just staggered outta the bar when he came through the entrance. bend the legs a bit. there was no stoyline so it seemed like you just through it up there to showcase pics and do what we've seen already in the WWE the ugly-No one attending to the lifeless Victoria on the side of the stands. people in the stands holding conversations, while the match was going on. paper and shyt behind your arena. Vince walkin down your steps. His commentary..:it is I" . that dated Vince Figure. Luger with no shirt. I guess the tshirt was too tight...lol. and now the WTf- tHE FOIL. SERIOSULY YOU COULD TURN THAT THING INTO ITS OWN CHARACTER. Tonight: The foil vs Cena for the world title. I think in my fed i'll do Jeter vs a ham sandwhich, lol. But seriously man, check out some other feds. there more to having a successful pic fed than just throwin figures in a ring. That's called show and tell. If you wanna have agood fed that doesnt get murdered in criticism, i'd work some things out  Good luck. |
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Post by thetruthrtruth on Mar 9, 2009 19:33:54 GMT -5
i didn't notice the victoria until my brother told me that he threw it there when i was taking pics.
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Post by thetruthrtruth on Mar 10, 2009 15:07:39 GMT -5
updated so everything is going in this one thread.
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Mar 10, 2009 18:00:55 GMT -5
I don't know about the show, but the feedback is just hilarious. You should name that foil ball Mick Foil-ey, make it hardcore...  |
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Post by thetruthrtruth on Mar 10, 2009 19:35:13 GMT -5
it was smoke, and edge's entrace.
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Post by hollywoodhilton on Mar 10, 2009 21:26:07 GMT -5
That Tin Foil has me sold! 10/10
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trøy
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Post by trøy on Mar 11, 2009 2:31:22 GMT -5
Never pic-fed again. Fail.
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Post by thetruthrtruth on Mar 11, 2009 9:53:50 GMT -5
working on episode 2, finished edge vs London for IC title and a booker t > Cena segment.
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Post by trøy on Mar 11, 2009 10:04:44 GMT -5
working on episode 2, finished edge vs London for IC title and a booker t > Cena segment. Use the god damn disscussion thread!  |
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Post by thetruthrtruth on Mar 11, 2009 10:13:15 GMT -5
Just responding to your reponse.
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trøy
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Post by trøy on Mar 11, 2009 18:28:24 GMT -5
Someone lock this. Just post in the discussion thread. God!
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Post by thetruthrtruth on Mar 11, 2009 19:00:54 GMT -5
why?
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trøy
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Post by trøy on Mar 11, 2009 19:09:04 GMT -5
Stop  ing spamming! Stop posting. God dammit. Just go to the Discussion board. And don't post again. You just trying to get your post count up. |
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Post by thetruthrtruth on Mar 11, 2009 19:14:04 GMT -5
Actually, in most forums i don't give a about post count. Also, i was replying to your comment about never pic fedding. |
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