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Post by matty on Apr 30, 2009 12:32:13 GMT -5
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------  I lost the other file  -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------  part2 also please stop spaming up this tread |
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Post by underdark78 on Apr 30, 2009 17:55:28 GMT -5
I think that the match was way too short - you should have at least 5 move's to make it look more like a match instead of just 1, anyway the suplex onto the ladder was decent but could use some work, you need to use alot more frame's to smooth en it out - once you have your animation's smooth you should try spacing this will make your animation look alot more realistic, the reaction looked odd as I don't think that it would happen in real life, also the red is very fidgety throughout, however the movement's in your animation's are decent.
Overall I personally think that you should try to get better at pivot before doing this - but do what you wish to....
-Also instead of having the part's going from the bottom up have them starting at the top of the post the put the next part below it - it will make your post look neater and more understandable.
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Post by matty on May 1, 2009 10:13:36 GMT -5
Im gonna top this thread up,so that the whole highlight reel is up.
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Post by alexgg on May 1, 2009 12:09:34 GMT -5
All spam deleted leading to two serious threads (but edited)
Anyway you deserve some coments.-
Part 1:
Not much to say but you need to work on the walking as it was stiff in the legs and needed to bend more, especcaily when entering the ring.
When he kneels up it is choppy and needs more frames.
I liked that red rubbed his head so he isnt still throughout the animation.
Part 2:
The movements are there but more frames are needed and the legs again need to bend just a bit more.
The suplex looked a bit effortless and slightly floaty and fidgets.
The reactions are not very good it seems that it misses a few frames making it choppy.
I dont like the reactions becacuse he is very stiff and just slides down.
5.5/10
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