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Post by hwa09 on May 9, 2009 20:05:17 GMT -5
 I Know Their Choppy,it was 2am. Their not the best,im just practising,the last one (spear) has been cutoff,the programe i use done that,and i have no clue why anyway,please comment |
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TTF4eva
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Post by TTF4eva on May 9, 2009 21:26:46 GMT -5
the first one was ok, just took a while with the impact, probably took too many frames for that.
The f-u was great, the lighting was a little distracting cos it changed every frame
The spear would have been good, the lead up was great, except when edge made conncetion with kofi, his connected on one frame, and then the next frame they were already flying through the air.
OVERALL: 1st Move - 6.5/10
2nd Move - 8/10
3rd Move - 7.5/10
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Post by hwa09 on May 10, 2009 5:14:44 GMT -5
the first one was ok, just took a while with the impact, probably took too many frames for that. The f-u was great, the lighting was a little distracting cos it changed every frame The spear would have been good, the lead up was great, except when edge made conncetion with kofi, his connected on one frame, and then the next frame they were already flying through the air. OVERALL: 1st Move - 6.5/10 2nd Move - 8/10 3rd Move - 7.5/10 Thanks |
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Post by brigsdoom on May 10, 2009 16:41:09 GMT -5
in the 1st post bourne botched it his feet hit the block  if you wanted to you could of done it and have him land flat on his head  and then table took to long to brake 1st pose 6.5/10 2nd pose 8.5/10 3rd pose 7/10 |
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Post by hwa09 on May 11, 2009 12:51:38 GMT -5
in the 1st post bourne botched it his feet hit the block if you wanted to you could of done it and have him land flat on his head and then table took to long to brake 1st pose 6.5/10 2nd pose 8.5/10 3rd pose 7/10 His Feet Did Not Touch It At All |
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wwestevo07
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Post by wwestevo07 on May 11, 2009 13:34:42 GMT -5
the picture quality is good for all, the lighting is ok, its good your using string, they were pretty smooth but in all the animations the figs were pretty stiff like when they are jumping you need to bend their bodys and bend there arms, like in the f-u, i didnt really look like cena was trowing smith, it kinda looked like he just jumped him self and you need to move his arms as he is going down, the movemnets on the ssp was decent but the arms need to be bent more, and the reaction on that was decent. they were ok, they wud just look so much beter if u bend their bodys and arms more. try doing this in your next ani.
1. 6/10
2. 5/10
3. 4.5/10
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Post by brigsdoom on May 13, 2009 5:30:48 GMT -5
in the 1st post bourne botched it his feet hit the block if you wanted to you could of done it and have him land flat on his head and then table took to long to brake 1st pose 6.5/10 2nd pose 8.5/10 3rd pose 7/10 His Feet Did Not Touch It At All well it looked like it did he kinda just paused for a second and his feet must have been off the thing like an inch but couldt see it do to angle srry bud |
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