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Post by wolfe7187 on May 16, 2009 9:05:25 GMT -5
 First I posted in a little while. Will update shortly. Credit Will for getting me the style.   New one. Again credit will for getting me the style. |
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Post by alexgg on May 16, 2009 9:15:34 GMT -5
You need to work on the running, it looks like a stomppy walk.
The step up is ok but red becomes choppy after he steps off him.looks weird
The animation gets much better when he does the ssp, as it looks smoother although a bit floaty.the jump looks good
The table break is great , but the slowness lets it down. and the reactons could also be better as it is choppy.~
IMO one of your best animations, 6/10 comment on mine ~?
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Post by wolfe7187 on May 16, 2009 9:17:41 GMT -5
You need to work on the running, it looks like a stomppy walk. The step up is ok but red becomes choppy after he steps off him.looks weird The animation gets much better when he does the ssp, as it looks smoother although a bit floaty.the jump looks good The table break is great , but the slowness lets it down. and the reactons could also be better as it is choppy.~ IMO one of your best animations, 6/10 comment on mine ~? Sure, comment on my effects ani? |
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Post by alexgg on May 16, 2009 9:29:42 GMT -5
oh i didnt even see the other animation : P ....Random, the light tube was odd, and the skateboard was choppy.I didnt like the gun either. the logo is great. nice random thing...  |
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Post by wolfe7187 on May 16, 2009 10:31:51 GMT -5
Commented. Anymore?
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Post by trøy on May 16, 2009 12:49:44 GMT -5
You need to work on the running, it looks like a stomppy walk. The step up is ok but red becomes choppy after he steps off him.looks weird The animation gets much better when he does the ssp, as it looks smoother although a bit floaty.the jump looks good The table break is great , but the slowness lets it down. and the reactons could also be better as it is choppy.~ IMO one of your best animations, 6/10 comment on mine ~? TBH, this post completely explains what I would have replies with. I agree. 100%. |
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Post by ky1p on May 17, 2009 10:54:28 GMT -5
The run looked like he was walking/stomping...And when he got on his back hit was kinda weird.The flip was ok but the ending...WTF is wrong with his back its hilarious.But other than that the ani's ok.
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Post by wolfe7187 on May 17, 2009 11:25:41 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments guys. And update.
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Post by Epic Z on May 17, 2009 15:48:30 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments guys. And update. Walking is less stompy but it still needs some work. It's smooth and the roll out of the ring was amazing plus the chair reaction was spot on. But you need to work on the reactions of the people. |
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Post by wolfe7187 on May 17, 2009 15:55:13 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments guys. And update. Walking is less stompy but it still needs some work. It's smooth and the roll out of the ring was amazing plus the chair reaction was spot on. But you need to work on the reactions of the people. Yeah I kinda rushed the reactions. And thanks for the comment.  I thought the roll out was ok, not amazing, but it's your opinion.  |
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