N1SF
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Post by N1SF on May 30, 2009 18:51:09 GMT -5
The debut of HWW is here. Tonight you will witness the Pre-show, where Rated RKO wrestles DX and Charlie Haas wrestles Finlay. Then, tune in tomorrow for the first episode of HWW. Please remember to reply, thanks! |
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Post by hippo123 on May 30, 2009 18:56:31 GMT -5
Ok. Just to say, its Belfast, Northern Ireland. Not Ireland. They are too different places.
The Show was good but the matches were short. Ofcourse, this is the pre show and i'm sure the main show will feature longer matches. Overall, it was fun viewing.
9/10
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Post by deskjet on May 30, 2009 20:57:56 GMT -5
Nice clear pics. Pretty WWesih and the matches were very short. Plenty of room for improvement but also a good start.
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Cottage Cheese
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Post by Cottage Cheese on May 30, 2009 21:31:58 GMT -5
Commentary looks good, good clear pics, Arena looks good and the poses are pretty good not the best though so keep working on them.
You need to make the matches longer, they need to be atleast 30 pics long, also buy some fishing wire and make string poses
Overall it was good for a first, I will be waiting to see more from you
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Deep Shadows
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MXW 6 is here! https://youtu.be/LiDlNuiKmjA
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Post by Deep Shadows on May 31, 2009 0:04:48 GMT -5
Cool!! Tazz and Coach as commentators is meh. Very nice photos...great quality and that's definitely a big plus. Flair as commish is pretty cool. This should be over fast because Finlay's gotta sh*t! I'm not a fan of the name plates. Wow, that match was way too quick. Rated RKO vs. HHH/Shawn  . Not much to comment on really. I think you've got the potential to be a top pic fedder. I would really like to see originality...teams, storylines, characters, etc. |
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Post by Elliot on May 31, 2009 4:26:19 GMT -5
Ok. Just to say, its Belfast, Northern Ireland. Not Ireland. They are too different places.The Show was good but the matches were short. Ofcourse, this is the pre show and i'm sure the main show will feature longer matches. Overall, it was fun viewing. 9/10 Finlay is billed from simply Belfast, Ireland in the WWE, which is probably where he got that from. No fault of his own, tbh. Anyway, it was a nice show and I think you executed most of it well. As already said, the matches were a bit too short, but that can be worked on. Good luck with the rest of this. |
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samsson
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Post by samsson on May 31, 2009 8:54:04 GMT -5
Not bad for your first time out ..I won't repeat what has already been said, I will just add something about Commentary..... 1.You have a play by play man = tells whats going on in match, holds etc 2.Heel/Face color =tells back story to wrestlers,funny comments, plays off play by play man. Work on that it would help you out ALOT !!!  |
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N1SF
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Post by N1SF on May 31, 2009 21:27:33 GMT -5
Episode One is up!
I know a lot of the matches are pretty short, but they will be longer on the next shows. I was just testing a few things out and I will make sure I make my matches longer from now on. Thank You for the comments guys, I will make sure that I work on the things mentioned.
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N1SF
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Post by N1SF on Jun 5, 2009 21:05:39 GMT -5
Thanks for all of the replies on the Pre-Show, but I would like your feedback on the Episode. I need to know what to change for episode 2. Thanks!
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Cottage Cheese
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Post by Cottage Cheese on Jun 5, 2009 22:17:09 GMT -5
Keep working on making the poses, you should have more Mid-air poses. Make sure that the wrestlers hand isn't all messed up, make sure they are actually looking at each other when they are fighting and when they get hit the wrestler should have a reaction(Turn their waist/head in the direction that they were hit at, also move their arms up like they just got punched) heres a good example of those 3 things I just listed  As you can see Turkay was not even looking at Batista, Batista's left hand looked goofy and Batista didn't even react to Turkay's right hand The show was better good, but will be a lot better once you make the matches longer. I think if you keep improving your Fed might be one of the top on the board, you just need to work on the string poses and the reaction of the wrestlers |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jun 6, 2009 12:32:27 GMT -5
wow man this was a really great start for your first show. the pictures were very clear as were the story lines. the only thing you need to work on is your poses. while a lot of the poses were good, a lot of them need work. just try your best to make the moves look as realistic as you can (which can be really hard). you are doing a good job man. keep it up. you have a fan in me =) |
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easy1986
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Post by easy1986 on Jun 7, 2009 9:51:49 GMT -5
I think you have excellent pic quality dude and a nice clean arena. Good easy to read commentary and a although WWEish roster a very good roster. Keep up the good work man, I think this has been the best debut show in a long time!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2009 17:49:43 GMT -5
Pre-Show:Lol, I haven't seen an Edge head on a referees body before. Looks odd due to the long hair. ;D Uhm... I complain very often about too short matches, but your opener was almost nonexistent! Is there a segment missing? Shawn seems beaten up, but there is no explanation. It just seems as if there was something to be seen before which is now not there anymore.  Edge is fresh in this match and gets pinned after a Spinebuster? Hmmm, not credible. And the match was way too short again.
HWW Episode 1:HHH ranting against his old friend Flair?  Uh... from where does HBK suddenly come? Rated RKO breaking up for almost no reason? Finlay wins in absolutely the same way he did in the pre-show? And there wasn't even a picture of him pinning Kendrick. A random match in the backstage area? The title is being handed over, I see... Tazz! But the segment fades without any real further feud-upheating. Festus is Jesses opponent! That's the best part of the show so far. Nice squash. Here the match length was fitting. MVP and Kendrick kidnapping Hornswoggle, FINALLY. 4up? Nice idea behind that stable. But they are just three, not four? Ah, Flair is the fourth man. Benjamin! And Haas too! They are helping Kurt Angle? A reunion of Team Angle?
Hmmmm... this wasn't totally bad except for the mentioned points, but you need to improve a lot. I hope you can get better and I await your next show.
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Post by extremefedration on Jun 18, 2009 14:21:14 GMT -5
Hmm 8/10
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Post by That guy next door. on Jul 7, 2009 11:03:11 GMT -5
I enjoyed this, hope i get the same reaction about my fed debut!
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jul 7, 2009 15:34:35 GMT -5
I enjoyed this, hope i get the same reaction about my fed debut! come on man, what is the point of topping something if your reply is one sentence long? |
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Jacob
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Post by Jacob on Jul 13, 2009 12:22:59 GMT -5
Great, clear images, but there's not much life going on. What I mean by that is, your posing. Alot of it is off, the Superstars don't interact with eachother, that's a major factor. Still, I'm glad for another new fed showing up. Keep it up, buddy!
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