RatedWWEF
Main Eventer
Joined on: Mar 7, 2009 16:00:49 GMT -5
Posts: 1,073
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Post by RatedWWEF on Jun 7, 2009 14:33:43 GMT -5
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jun 10, 2009 21:34:11 GMT -5
ok man i feel bad that i haven't replied to any of your shows yet, but i am going to make it up to you by giving you some advice =)
you have all the tools to make a great federation. good figures, awesome setup, nice story lines, and decent pictures. i just really think that you need to work on your poses and originality a bit more. originality is what really brings people into your show. i think if you work on these things you will do great. keep it up, and don't give up. you can only get better! =) |
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RatedWWEF
Main Eventer
Joined on: Mar 7, 2009 16:00:49 GMT -5
Posts: 1,073
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Post by RatedWWEF on Jun 11, 2009 8:33:41 GMT -5
Ok thanks man, and if you havent heard already i will be doing 1 show every 2 weeks so that i can work on these things.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jun 11, 2009 17:45:43 GMT -5
Ok thanks man, and if you havent heard already i will be doing 1 show every 2 weeks so that i can work on these things. cool man, i look forward to your future shows =) |
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Post by deskjet on Jun 11, 2009 18:23:53 GMT -5
ok, i shall reply becasue you seem to be taking people advice by replying and spreading out your shows...which is good. and you're consistent which is really needed. Good opening match between two beasts Koslow and Bat. Kendrick Jericho is a good feud. Jeff/Matt seen it but is was still pretty good. Loved Jericho/ Kendrick should be a future feud. Orton/Cena...blah...cant get into Cena. ok, i think you've improved in your poses. You still need better backatage segments, a cleaner lookin arena, and more originality. I would drop cena, orton, hbk and push jericho/Kendrick feud. Nonetheless, a very good ppv overall. Keep workin at it:)
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2009 17:42:07 GMT -5
Nice and improved stage there. Vladimir Drago? Ivan Kozlov?  Not very much wrestling so far, just punches.  What is Flair doing with Batista? o_Ô Hmmm, I don't really get the ending. Breakup between Flair and Batista? New broadcasting partner! And a new GM! You could have made this match an official ladder match actually. Hmmm, I was happy with your opener, but this match was too short again. Undertaker has been taken out?  At least he is able to fight back. Noooo, they finally overcame him. Hebner should be punished for such a bad way of officiating. Pyros! I smell a rebirth as Biker-Undertaker. I Quit match is also already over... Edge not even saying who beat him? o_Ô Smart moves by Orton at the beginning. Orton reminds me of Rugged Ronny Garvin with all those stomps around his opponents body. HBK interfering? And hitting Cena too?
Good PPV, but apart from the opener, matches were still too short. :/ |
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Post by That guy next door. on Jul 7, 2009 13:31:35 GMT -5
You could go so far with this. Just needs a bit of refining. Good already but as with everything there is room for improvement.
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