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Post by wolfe7187 on Jun 9, 2009 8:19:05 GMT -5
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Post by jakeman14 on Jun 9, 2009 8:38:46 GMT -5
Pretty good ani there Wolfe. I really think this is up there with one of your bests. I thought the jump prep needed some work done to it. It needs to be less stiff and spaced well, and more 2-d'ish like on my SSP. The bounce you added really gave realisticness to the ani. The jump is not noticeable, and it looks like he didn't jump. Airtime needs to be spaced a little better, but w/e. Reactions had good movements but they were choppy in parts; you need to space reactions too. Making the other stk have movements was creative and added more to the ani, But I thought you could have spaced it better. The Evans stk's reactions were pretty good.
I think you are improving, but you need to work on your spacing some to make your anis less choppy, more smoother.
5/10 for me.
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Post by alexgg on Jun 9, 2009 12:33:35 GMT -5
Awesome, someone used my cola machine!
I liked the jump prep but the jump needs some more work, he was stiff whilst air boune also.
The cola shake is good but a bit too much.
The reactions are okay, the floor bounce made it better. black was a bit weird at the end, and green was choppy.
5/10
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Post by trøy on Jun 9, 2009 13:52:23 GMT -5
Wow, I enjoyed this, great work. The jump seems a bit effortless, but thats fine. The mid-air is fine, just remember to move his body in a bit more, to make it a bit less stiff. The reactions and impact are good but, the way the evans stick rolls up looks odd. Nice job, but remember to bend the sticks a bit more and space a bit better. Nice work wolfe, keep it coming.
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Post by tnawrestlingfantsy on Jun 9, 2009 16:59:32 GMT -5
Nice coke reaction along with the jump and splash jst dont like the other guy reatcions
6/10
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