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Post by DB on Jun 19, 2009 22:11:41 GMT -5
German suplex off ladder:  i know its probably horrible but it was my first time doing this.  tell me wut u think ;D P>S SORRY ABOUT THE COLOR CHANGING IN THE ANIMATION.DONT KNOW WHY THAT HAPPENED!! |
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Post by swantonbombingsd on Jun 19, 2009 22:20:06 GMT -5
Awesome for your first. Just a little stiff and no reaction, The sticks look *wierd*. But I likes the walking and throw. 6.5/10
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Post by bac5220 on Jun 20, 2009 9:42:31 GMT -5
Welcome to the stick boards!  Pretty god for a first.  CM [PG-13] Punk was great at his first also. (Possibly stop-motion gave you an idea of what to do) Walking is choppy, but it's your first, but it's kind of a hard thing to get the hang of it. Reactions are realistic, in a way. The whole thing is smooth. ;D OVERALL MARK: 7/10 P.S. Don't use the "Default" sticks, because they are bad for animating. Start with sticks that have three back-joints, then when you start getting better, have your sticks with about 6 back-joints. Hope I helped. |
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Post by alexgg on Jun 20, 2009 13:57:52 GMT -5
Good for a first, the movements are chooppy and stiff and most parts. Try bending and arching parts more and also work on reactions.
The colour change happened cause you changed it on a frame. This dosnt not effect previous frames.
Dont use deafult sticks as ones with more back joints will make the back arch better and look smoother in the animation.
4/10
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DB
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Post by DB on Jun 21, 2009 17:05:34 GMT -5
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