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FPW #1
Jun 23, 2009 17:53:36 GMT -5
Post by jakeman14 on Jun 23, 2009 17:53:36 GMT -5
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FPW #1
Jun 24, 2009 16:21:30 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jun 24, 2009 16:21:30 GMT -5
Matt Striker as a commentator? Nice, haven’t seen that before. Your referee is certainly original. ;D Nice opener. Jericho is being introduced as “from backstage”? o_Ô Now the Sandman as a ref, cool. Using the old ECW Originals with their experience there? Nice idea. Try to have more consistency in the opinions of your commentators (heel/face). At the beginning, Striker was swearing at Jericho for blindsiding Rey. Now he excuses Jericho playing possum with “he’s doing whatever he can to win”. OK, the next comment of Striker put that a bit down.
I like your poses and picture quality, I just feel the matches should be a bit longer. Good first attempt at picfedding though, keep it up.  |
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FPW #1
Jun 24, 2009 17:23:34 GMT -5
Post by -LMB- on Jun 24, 2009 17:23:34 GMT -5
ahaha my logo used lol. Wow this is a bery nice first show The same y2j used in 1 first eps , i like your poses there very spot on, the y2j corner dropkick pose was amazing really captures Y2Js movement in the ring. I like Cm Punk as champion. Great overall show really enjoyed it. keep this up |
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FPW #1
Jun 26, 2009 15:46:50 GMT -5
Post by unionjack on Jun 26, 2009 15:46:50 GMT -5
cool  cool segment i like where this segment and storyline is going  burke v kendrick this is gonna be a great match i like the poses i love that you have tazz as your refferee very nice match i enjoyed it alot cool segment i wonder why heyman thanked burke for the win  y2g v rey i love that sandman is your referee cool match i liked it good job nice segment i like the duo of kendrick and morisson m"n"k punk v van dam very awesome match man i like alot the poses were very nice i like your commentary also your pic quality is preety nice great 1'st show man i really enjoyed good job man . |
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FPW #1
Jun 30, 2009 17:30:25 GMT -5
Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jun 30, 2009 17:30:25 GMT -5
this was actually pretty good for a first try man. all you have to do is work a bit on your poses. and some camera angles would really add to your show. i am not a bug fan of the figure that you are using for the ref but maybe it will grow on me. just keep trying your best to make your fed better and better. good job and good luck
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FPW #1
Jul 1, 2009 1:48:28 GMT -5
Post by easy1986 on Jul 1, 2009 1:48:28 GMT -5
Okay lets see what U got this was a very good opener a lot better than most of the debut shows we get on here. I felt U rushed a couple of things but at the same time I can understand why you did. Anyway man keep doing your thing
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FPW #1
Jul 1, 2009 16:06:16 GMT -5
Post by That guy next door. on Jul 1, 2009 16:06:16 GMT -5
Sweet work on this. But i must say the matches were very, very short but sweet. Maybe, same style but a tad longer and you have a good combination for your fed.
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FPW #1
Jul 1, 2009 18:03:13 GMT -5
Post by deskjet on Jul 1, 2009 18:03:13 GMT -5
i viewed this a while bak. First off, the entrcanceway is great but then deteriorates as we get to the ring...the ref has no pants, and the arena is just bland. the poses are ok. the backstage segments are just blah. The commentary needs work. I'd say develop storylines better. Make the fans want to come back neck week. work on backstage segemnts. make them meaningful. put a crowd in your arena and some better clothes on your refs. Keep working at it and you'll improve. You have some decent pic quality. Put the same dedication in the rest of the show as you did the entrance.
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