RatedWWEF
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Post by RatedWWEF on Jul 17, 2009 12:48:23 GMT -5
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Post by hippo123 on Jul 17, 2009 15:15:52 GMT -5
This is a great show as always. I liked the way your evolving Jeff's charcter and the opening match did a great job of advancing storylines. Not as much ring time as usual, but the segments did there job very well. Look forward to the Intercontinental Championship match and to the World Title Match. I hope Punk and Orton's feud continues further than ONS! Good job man!
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easy1986
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Post by easy1986 on Jul 17, 2009 15:28:05 GMT -5
You've really been impressing me alot of late, this was your best effort yet, decent to good poses along with great storyline progression. Some of the dialogue was a bit stale though. Like when i see a Vlad promo it should sound like Vlad not an american. Anyway keep up the good work and just keep improving.
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Post by That guy next door. on Jul 18, 2009 3:29:13 GMT -5
I can definitely say i like your work and that you improve week after week, the main faults have been stated above, also, i feel that the odd pose is a bit stiff but overall you are improving at a very rapid rate.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jul 19, 2009 12:02:28 GMT -5
wow man you really are starting to get a lot better! your story lines are advancing and straying away from typical WWE stuff. i really like where you are going with this federation. lol it still freezes my computer, but your shows are worth it.
one small criticism. your poses could be a bit better. without a doubt they have improved, but i still think you can tweak the figures a bit more. awesome job regardless.
good show =)
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RatedWWEF
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Post by RatedWWEF on Jul 19, 2009 12:57:16 GMT -5
Thanks for the relies guys, wwefan shame that you pc keeps freezing I wonder whats wrong there lol. Thanks again.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 20, 2009 18:23:06 GMT -5
„SHUT UP!“ ;D Lol @ Kennedy interrupting Shawn as he was about to tell the stipulation. ;D Ah, Dreamer has a new radio. Cool match between Kozlov and Kanelov. Batista out for retribution! And now Hardy too. MARK HENRY! *MARKout* “A hotdog”… I guess he eats a lot more than just one. ;D Using the new Edge figure?  Hm, so Edge accepts. That’s a bit disappointing, they teamed up before. I hoped Orton would pick some other guy, probably a new addition to WWEF.  The Miz betraying Morrison?  Where did you get the old KotR-trophy from? Never seen that before. I have another one, came with an old Jakks Title Belt set. Did you really break the trophy? It looks like the top indeed broke.  Lol @ Styles saying “hopefully they can patch things up”. I seriously doubt that. Man, Dreamer is EVERYWHERE. Oh, HBK is keeping the stipulation a secret until One Night Stand! Orton? Weirdo… Edge attacking! Umaga has secret powers! MVP aiding Christian? o_Ô I have a feeling that he will lose his title. Jericho kicking the referee? It backfired! MVP has to face all three! JR advertising Bruno? o_Ô Vince can’t even afford a somewhat decent table. ;D Uh oh, sounds like Dreamers time as caretaker GM is over. Frederico Massi! I guess Jesse has to job tonight. I like the arrogant sneer on his face due to the beard. ;D Kiss of death? Urgh… Cena is put on holiday? Vince surely is a hardliner. Michaels and Punk can’t win that match if HBK is hurting so badly. Awww, now he revealed the stipulation already. Hardy changing to the extreme? That painted face would be an indicator.
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RatedWWEF
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Post by RatedWWEF on Jul 21, 2009 4:40:37 GMT -5
The trophy was actually from Samoa Joe lol, i seriosuly don't know what series though, and yes the trophy broke for real lol.
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Post by deskjet on Jul 21, 2009 7:46:12 GMT -5
Ok, finally got a chance to reply, sorry for the delay. Liked the opening match and like how Batista and Matt came in after their respective rivals. Backstage segments just are doin nothing for me becasue of the cardboard. Federico Massi debut was pretty good. Kinda got bored halfway through becasue it still just feels too WWE'ish...HBK, Punk, Orton, Edge, etc. At least Cena was released and Dreamer is the GM. Well, for my taste, I think the length of the show is too long and it has too many backstage segments. The Backstage and the perimeter of the arena still needs to be tidyed up and the poses still need work. Also, I know it's your fed but I just cant get into the same things I see played out on tv. Maybe create a stable or two? Put the belt on some young guys? etc.
Again, this is just my personal opinion, it;s your fed and you're the creative mind behind it:) Keep on pic feddin, at least you are consistent with your shows.
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RatedWWEF
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Post by RatedWWEF on Jul 21, 2009 8:07:02 GMT -5
Thanks deskjet, i will take note of your comments.
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Dat guy ova der
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Post by Dat guy ova der on Jul 22, 2009 17:51:59 GMT -5
Nice opening segment, So a three way at ONS? Kennedy/HBK/Edge? Nice to see Kennedy take out HBK anyway. Not really into Backstage segments, as they seemed very similar and Dreamer really didn't seem to care, but they were good build up for what they were... Kane and Vlad should be a cool match. Lots of power moves probably... yep lots of power moves. I like your poses a lot, especially the sidewalk slam. A win with the headbutt. Unexpected and pretty cool I think. Spear and Twist Of Fate were both nice poses. Lol "I need to go and get me a hotdog". Last Man Standing should be pretty cool. I just marked for Rated RKO lol. Great match, but why did Miz leave? poor Morrison looking like he was making a comback and he just gets squashed. I really likes the attack from Edge on HBK, was well played out imo. lol at Rob running away. Poor jesse got squashed, but I'm interested in seeing more from this Italian. Once again, I really like your poses, but the backsatge stuff doesn't really keep my intrest. Nice to see Rated RKO take the win, and am excited to see the ladder match. Was a very good show, and cant wait to see "WWEF One Night Stand" Posted on the main board! Chance you could take a look at my show?
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JedsWorld
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Post by JedsWorld on Aug 17, 2009 3:59:07 GMT -5
SHOW NUMBER 22
Never got round to replying, as I was on vacation and then returned to try work extra hard on my second show so there wasn't too much of a wait, anyway here we go with you next show...
HBK coming out telling it how it is, nice work as I could see him saying that in WWE/F But some of the text it a bit of a 'mouthful' and seems like too much to say, the words don't flow.
Kennedy.... Great nice to see, hey wait.... KENNEDY-! there ya go, anyway nice to see him getting involved should be interesting, is he with edge, is he just trying to make an impact?
Tommy listening to music, banging it dude, lol Orton booo caretaker Tommy, thats odd? anyway Matt hardy has some white tac stuck on his head call for help-!!
Vlad, meer, kozz, loaf, here he comes.. nice big strong match worked well, oh no Batista.. oh no matt hardy.. oh no all hell has broken loose - crazy stuff should make some nice storylines.
Henry and Kendrick seem like a couple, haha Hotdog - Noooooo :x
Batista just kicked ass in the ring and now he doest care, just talking to Ric-?? odd.
Tag match was great from start to finish, MIZ YOU NO GOOD B******-!!
HBK gets sneak attacked, nicely done, like how the chairs were 'there'
Jesse and gravy.... oh damn no gray he's against a custom guy so thats good expecting him to win his debut here, as expected he's a powerhouse, JESSE GETS SQUASHED-!!
Tag match main event, nice change to the night... Rated RKO sneak the win over Punk, LADDER MATCH WOOOPP, Wait whys hards there on the ladder after HBKS's announcement, anyway overall a great show keep it up!!
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