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Post by That guy next door. on Jul 24, 2009 14:04:36 GMT -5
My apologies for any stuff that got in the background, i moved it all for episode 2, also, the poses are better there. But you need this to get storyline knolwedge etc. So here goes nothing....  4riw.webs.com |
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Post by -LMB- on Jul 24, 2009 14:09:12 GMT -5
will edit after ive watched the show.Right well...., I think it wasn't to bad. There are a lot of things that could help improve your fed. You should first try and get a little bit better at posing, Sort yourself out with maybe a 1 colour background like black or white, its keep everyone's eyes in one place and not looking for waldo or Radiators you should also find a way to get better shots as a lot of them where blurry and it was sometimes hard to see what was going on. I really didn't like how it seemed you put no effort into DX being attacked maybe you could of had a blank/black picture to add to the power cut effect, I did like it how you used a lot of mixed superstars and didn't just stick to one category of wrestlers you mixed it up which was quite nice to see if iam being honest. I think that in my eyes you could have done a lot better, the tag team match was your best match in the show but even that seemed rushed. Next time maybe take your time and get some clear pictures as it would help you a lot. Hope this works out and you improve.  |
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Post by indywrestling on Jul 24, 2009 14:28:53 GMT -5
Ok now im no pro at pic feding at all, but i think u need bettr qualtity pictures my man, also im not a fan of using toybiz and jakks ra/da figs together, they are no where near the same size, longer matches would be a little better to bro, i m not bashing u, im tryin to help a brotha out!!!
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Post by Deep Shadows on Jul 24, 2009 14:45:38 GMT -5
You definitely need to work on steadying your camera. I can't even watch the entire show because the pics hurt my eyes.
Glad to hear that you improved the background...hopefully a nice solid color like black or white.
Work on the lighting a bit...desk lamps work wonders!
Also, mixing styles of figures isn't a good idea...especially when it's Toybiz and Jakks. RA and DA isn't too bad though...just depends on who's who.
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Post by deskjet on Jul 24, 2009 15:22:02 GMT -5
I couldn't follow this not one bit. There was no transition from one pic to the next. One minute people are in the ring, one or two moves then someone wins, pics are just all over the place.. Matches were way too short, too many youtube vids, poor poses, eye hurting pic quality with the exception of a few. Although the arena wasn't too shabby, from what I could see of it. You've got one of two option here if you really want to be apart of this board...#1 take people's advice and put more time and effort into your shows, or #2 just be a replier/contributor in other ways to the board. This isnt gonna cut it. It's just pics thrown together with little or no perceivable thought into the flow of the matches or the fed as a whole. Look, I can piss down on your leg and tell ya it's rainin', but that's not gonna help you out so take this for what it's worth  . sorry man. |
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Post by That guy next door. on Jul 24, 2009 15:49:15 GMT -5
Guys, i understand this fully, at the time, and i did not realize this till publishing, my camera was malfunctioning and the shutter wasn't closing properly, however, i fixed this problem and episode 2 will be much better, the background is fixed to white apart from entrances, where the black stage will be shown. The poses i think have come out alot better. The roster has been tightened, also, i will be photoshopping trons into the pictures. I understand fully at the suggestions, and have already started to improve on this. For those who didn't understand here are the results:
RVD defeated Mr Perfect to become Hardcore Champion
Rated Y2J won the 8 team tag match to become tag champions
Chris Benoit defeated Terry Funk, Tazz, Charlie Haas, and Kurt Angle to become world champion
Jeff Hardy defeated X-Pac
"King" Booker T defeated Shelton Benjamin, The Great Khali, and Matt Stryker.
Zack Ryder defeated "R-Truth" Ron Killings and The Brian Kendrick.
Also, i have a few announcements to make:
Shawn Michaels and Triple H were both injured when they were attacked before the Tag Team Title match, they will be out of action for a minimum of 8 episodes.
Both "R-Truth" Ron Killings and Funaki have been suspended following their unauthorised participation in the aforementioned match.
And lastly, 4RIW was forced to come to terms with the release of several superstars. They are:
The Dynamite Kid
Cryme Tyme
Ric Flair
Chavo Guerrero
Finlay
Hornswoggle.
4RIW wishes them the best in their future endeavours and wishes to state that all left on good terms with the company and may possibly be offered a new contract once their wrestling ability rises to the next echelon.
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Post by deskjet on Jul 24, 2009 16:43:24 GMT -5
Guys, i understand this fully, at the time, and i did not realize this till publishing, my camera was malfunctioning and the shutter wasn't closing properly, however, i fixed this problem and episode 2 will be much better, the background is fixed to white apart from entrances, where the black stage will be shown. The poses i think have come out alot better. The roster has been tightened, also, i will be photoshopping trons into the pictures. I understand fully at the suggestions, and have already started to improve on this. For those who didn't understand here are the results: RVD defeated Mr Perfect to become Hardcore Champion Rated Y2J won the 8 team tag match to become tag champions Chris Benoit defeated Terry Funk, Tazz, Charlie Haas, and Kurt Angle to become world champion Jeff Hardy defeated X-Pac "King" Booker T defeated Shelton Benjamin, The Great Khali, and Matt Stryker. Zack Ryder defeated "R-Truth" Ron Killings and The Brian Kendrick. Also, i have a few announcements to make: Shawn Michaels and Triple H were both injured when they were attacked before the Tag Team Title match, they will be out of action for a minimum of 8 episodes. Both "R-Truth" Ron Killings and Funaki have been suspended following their unauthorised participation in the aforementioned match. And lastly, 4RIW was forced to come to terms with the release of several superstars. They are: The Dynamite Kid Cryme Tyme Ric Flair Chavo Guerrero Finlay Hornswoggle. 4RIW wishes them the best in their future endeavours and wishes to state that all left on good terms with the company and may possibly be offered a new contract once their wrestling ability rises to the next echelon. Well i hope you are focusing more than on just the pic quality becasue thats only a fraction of the problem the way I see it. I would really suggest you do maybe two nice long matches with some backstage segments, and focus those matches on good poses, pic quality and commentary. Use maybe two backstage segments to build feuds or storylines. |
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Post by That guy next door. on Jul 25, 2009 1:50:33 GMT -5
I have already filmed some promos for the next show.
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Post by fall on Jul 25, 2009 15:39:35 GMT -5
Go away.
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Post by That guy next door. on Jul 25, 2009 18:07:03 GMT -5
What do you hate about me so much that causes you to make such opinionated remarks?
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jul 26, 2009 10:59:24 GMT -5
to be honest, this was a lot better than i expected. there are a lot of issues that you need to work out, but as of right now you seem to get the gist of it. as others have said, the pics did not seem to flow. some of the poses were very stiff and the lack of originality shows. i know first hand how hard it is to create original story lines, but this could have been better. it seems a bit thrown together, but like i said, it was more than i was expecting. here are some things you can work on for your next show
better pic quality (try using flash)
better arena (atmosphere plays a big part in pic fedding. even a black background would work)
story lines (the plot was very unclear)
work on these hings and you should improve in a few shows
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Post by Titan Wrestling All-Stars on Aug 9, 2009 13:41:46 GMT -5
Just got through watching, here goes:
I liked the usage of X-Pac in the first match with Jeff Hardy, I wish I would have bought him when he was out. I personally don't mind the mixing of TNA, RA, & DA, doesn't really bother me.
The Fatal 4 Way match seemed out of place to me, I don't like to say too short cause I don't think length is a big deal unless it's PPV, maybe it was just the participants, I figured Khali would win, pretty surprised to see Booker take it.
I like that you have a cruiserweight division, I'm thinking of bringing mine back in the future. Are Killings and Ryder weight friendly for the division? Not really a fan of the finish, I would have gone with Kendrick myself.
Dynamite Kid & DH Smith, interesting combination, the New Bulldogs if you will, Los Guererro's, good choice. How many freakin' teams are in this match? DX have been laid out, lol, I love how you just flopped them over on a stretcher, it's like on cartoons where they load them up and they fly out of the back of the ambulance. DH tossing Horny out of the ring is priceless. I'm digging Chavo's ladder bump into the crowd. Glad to see Edge and Y2J win the titles, good match albeit a cluster f*uck.
RVD Vs. Mr. Perfect, sounds good! Holy crap, frog splash off the stage and through the table. RVD wins, first HC champ, I didn't realize it was for a title, but, RVD is obviously the better choice for Hardcore champ.
Main event championship match! Austin blind sides Angle? Terry Funk, I like it, Haas & Taz, not so much. Benoit, no comment, I'm one of those who can't stand him, but I do like this quote "JBL: Benoit certainly has bulked up alot before his 4RIW debut!", that sums it up. Ugh, Benoit wins, was really pulling for Funk, the hurricanrana ultimately did him in.
Overall I felt it was an ok show for a first episode, I strongly suggest using black poster or foam board cause it was rather hard to keep up with the matches seeing other stuff in the background. On you cam, were you using a flash or no flash, I personally use a flash cause with my cam using no flash kinda blurs the pics and that's what it's looking like to me with yours.
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Post by That guy next door. on Aug 9, 2009 15:14:36 GMT -5
@ TWA, Killings and Ryder are 218 and 197 lbs respectively, the cruiserweight max is 220lbs. Yeah, the 4 way, i designed the ending to surprise you. It was meant to show Booker slipped out of it and in a desperate attempt to avoid getting murdered by Khali ended up inadvertantly winning. Austin's run in with Angle is explained on episode 2. Posted tomorrow. For you Yanks that is, closer to midnight here for me. Funk is facing Tazz on episode 2 to decide who faces Benoit at Rage in The Cage, our first PPV. Yeah, sorted the other problems out mainly too. It's a white and blue two tone wall, that may sound dodgy but it divides exactly from where i take the pics.
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