Jesseversion1
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Sept 25, 2009 20:10:50 GMT -5
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Sabin
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Post by Sabin on Sept 25, 2009 20:14:34 GMT -5
Ir needs more of a reaction and You should get Jasc because its better than WMM/ YouTube
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TTF4eva
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Post by TTF4eva on Sept 25, 2009 21:20:09 GMT -5
First off, welcome to wfigs jesse.
It was sorta smooth, although needed a bigger reaction, the table break was good, little bit stiff
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Post by underdark78 on Sept 26, 2009 1:13:47 GMT -5
Welcome, this animation is very good, however it looked like Matt just kind of floated into the air when there should of been more of a jump, the move itself was decent but in some frames you didnt move the figures enough which made it look like the figure was just spinning ont the spot and the figure was also a bit shakey to fix these problems you just need to look at your camera every time before you take a picture to make sure that the figure is moved a consistant amount and flows together, also the joints could of used some more bending as the stayed in preety much the same position for the whole moonsault, the table break was good but as others have said the reactions lacked - you really should put more time into them as they can make a animation look alot better, also for the animation in whole a few more pictures here and there would be a nice imporvment.
6/10
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Ezio Auditor D,ferienze
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Post by Ezio Auditor D,ferienze on Sept 26, 2009 4:46:49 GMT -5
very good the flip was smooth but they need a reaction 7/10
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MTH™
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Post by MTH™ on Sept 26, 2009 6:49:11 GMT -5
Welcome to wfigs! I thought the animation was quite good for your first on wfigs. It was smooth but all i would say isthat you need to add a reaction. If someone got hit by that it's always gonna hurt so you have to show this by making the victims move in pain. 7/10
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