Jesseversion1
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Dec 7, 2009 2:16:41 GMT -5
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Dan.
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Post by Dan. on Dec 7, 2009 12:12:15 GMT -5
Isnt this your 1000000000000000000000000000000th post?
Seriously Modify your threads.
Anyway the anis were completely ruined by the shakyness of the camera. its completely distracting and it kinda hurts my head. The 1st ani was too slow and choppy and shaky and floaty The 2nd ani was a good idea and it was quite smooth but extremely stiff and its wasnt realistic.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 7, 2009 12:46:11 GMT -5
nice,camera's a bit shaky though.It's also a little stiff.
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Starscream
Superstar
"In my restless dreams. I see that town...."
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Post by Starscream on Dec 8, 2009 10:54:05 GMT -5
Ok 1 ani: a bit slow,shaky and the shadows VERY annoying. 2 ani:Shaky again but was a ok ani. 3 ani:AGAIN shaky,Saw ur hand but was a very good ani and add reactions to the fans they look bored.
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Sosa
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Santino-Santana-Sandusky
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Post by Sosa on Dec 10, 2009 18:25:49 GMT -5
The first animation needs to be sped up, so look out for that next time, and the shadow gets annoying in that animation. The second animation is alright, theres nothing that really needs to be improved in that one, except for how he just hopped onto the ropes without going on feet first. The third animation is the best one out of all three in my opinion. He just flew out of the ring and swung him right onto the ladder. The only flaw in that animation was that it looks like it changed angles, not all the way, just a little bit, at the last minute, and I saw your hand.
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Post by Scotty on Dec 10, 2009 21:03:30 GMT -5
1. shaky, slow,floated 2. shaky, saw string, 3. shaky, good speed, saw ur hand,
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Unleashed in the East
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Can ya Smellll what The Rock...is cookin'?
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Post by Unleashed in the East on Dec 10, 2009 21:11:05 GMT -5
Yeah there's problems in the animations, but they were good. You're new to animating, right? Well this is a good job. Just it's Floaty, Choppy, and Stiff. The Camera was shaky. Your hand was seen. What you should do to get better-Bend the joints on the figures. Don't make the figures float in the air it is unrealistic. Don't shake the camera. You don't need a Tri-pod to be honets. Jsut use something that won't make your camera shaky. Use books or whatever. Edit your hand cause it hurts your score.
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Dashin' [TheNextMiz]
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There's Only One Miz And Hes Awsome
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Post by Dashin' [TheNextMiz] on Dec 12, 2009 12:13:03 GMT -5
It Had Bad Lighting And Was A Bit Shakey But Cool
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