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Post by bobsfedder on Jan 8, 2010 17:53:11 GMT -5
The matches are seriously short, did you rush this like crazy?
1. Write detailed matches
2. provide a good layout
3. make a roster
4. take time
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Post by slappy on Jan 9, 2010 0:19:50 GMT -5
The matches do need to be a bit more detailed/longer.
Also, it belittles your Light Heavyweight champion for the winner of the belt or even the champion to retain by not making a big deal out of winning or retaining the belt. Was Ryder champion or was he fighting for the belt? He just left, he didn't seem to care that he just won or retained the belt.
The tag match should never have happened. As one the match wouldn't have started until all men were in their corners and Miz just hit Shelley with the knucks and Dolph picks up the win. Plus, wouldn't the ref have seen the shot or was Dolph distracting the ref? It was never known.
Also, who is your main champion? Chris Hero all of a sudden gets a title shot, but no appearance by your champ.
For a starting show, it makes no sense why those two would all of a sudden fight to be Vice GM. First, who is your GM? Why is he/she getting a Vice GM? Did they screw up? Are they not a great GM?
You have a lot of work to do.
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