Cam V1
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Post by Cam V1 on Jan 22, 2010 14:53:30 GMT -5
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Mr.W²
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Post by Mr.W² on Jan 22, 2010 14:57:31 GMT -5
You Really Need To Look At A Spacing And Smoothness Tutorial, Because You Talk To People Saying To Space, When Infact There Is Not The Slightest Bit Of Spacing In Yours. Reactions Lack But Youve Got The Jist Of Animation, Just Work On Smoothness.
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Cam V1
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Post by Cam V1 on Jan 22, 2010 14:59:28 GMT -5
You Really Need To Look At A Spacing And Smoothness Tutorial, Because You Talk To People Saying To Space, When Infact There Is Not The Slightest Bit Of Spacing In Yours. Reactions Lack But Youve Got The Jist Of Animation, Just Work On Smoothness. I did try to space in this. Thanks for your tip.
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Mr.W²
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Post by Mr.W² on Jan 22, 2010 15:00:23 GMT -5
Comment On Mine Lmfao.
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Sabin
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Post by Sabin on Jan 22, 2010 16:37:41 GMT -5
not bad, I think it was alitlle stiff and the reaction could be improved, the landing was kind of choppy. I know you can do better though.
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Post by alexgg on Jan 24, 2010 7:49:12 GMT -5
The legs should stay in the same place for the jump, not slide on the turnbuckle. The back needs to arch a little bit more down and the arms should sway more. The legs should bend in the air and again when he lands, the animation is quite choopy and needs more frames. Remember to move nearly every ligament in each frame.
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Ryan
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Post by Ryan on Jan 24, 2010 13:52:12 GMT -5
Its very stiff and kinda slow but probs is your best.
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