Cam V1
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Post by Cam V1 on Jan 27, 2010 16:05:39 GMT -5
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Sabin
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Post by Sabin on Jan 27, 2010 16:16:38 GMT -5
Its better than your other anis but still not good. I didn't like the weird arm movement thing and it needed more frames. the jump was alright could be improved. I don't like the mid air movements. he should have been continuously moving through the air. reactions aren't bad. could use some work. maybe add a few frames to it.
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Post by alexgg on Jan 28, 2010 13:35:09 GMT -5
Probably your best but it needs a jump he dosnt bend or move enough for the height he goes.
I like it because it is smooth but I dislike how he stays in the air for too long, get rid of a few frames and it will look great. The head looks a little bit weird as it bends down too much imo.
The guy on the floor shouldnt move randomly in the animation, make sure the arms are flat on the ring canvas or is behind the ring.
Good job.
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Cam V1
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Post by Cam V1 on Jan 28, 2010 14:33:04 GMT -5
Probably your best but it needs a jump he dosnt bend or move enough for the height he goes. I like it because it is smooth but I dislike how he stays in the air for too long, get rid of a few frames and it will look great. The head looks a little bit weird as it bends down too much imo. The guy on the floor shouldnt move randomly in the animation, make sure the arms are flat on the ring canvas or is behind the ring. Good job. thanks for your tips. Gonna make another one now. |
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Cam V1
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Post by Cam V1 on Jan 29, 2010 12:45:41 GMT -5
Updated With new one.
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Sabin
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Post by Sabin on Jan 29, 2010 12:56:09 GMT -5
your improving. the jump was ok. Move the arms back more and bend the knees abit , but it was very stiff. yellow should have moved consistantly throughout. the reaction was also stiff. I didnt like the little bounce at the end. work on spacing abit.
Comment on mine?
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