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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2010 9:50:02 GMT -5
 not that good but i gave it a shot . please give me advice  sorry if the GIF is too big.  dropkick moonsault off a ladder  tell me what u think |
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Post by alexgg on Apr 5, 2010 17:44:51 GMT -5
Looks good for a start, I was gonna say you need a ring but i see the second one you did.
You need to work on spacing the sticks from frame to frame, and the movements in them. Such as the bending of knees and arching of the back. when falling they should appear to move faster through the air as gravity is pulling them down.
Looks good for a first, keep it up.
I like the sig btw.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2010 3:24:24 GMT -5
Looks good for a start, I was gonna say you need a ring but i see the second one you did. You need to work on spacing the sticks from frame to frame, and the movements in them. Such as the bending of knees and arching of the back. when falling they should appear to move faster through the air as gravity is pulling them down. Looks good for a first, keep it up. I like the sig btw. thanks for the advice . and yeh i workked out how to get a ring lol |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2010 4:36:36 GMT -5
Pretty good considering your new. But cut down on the amount of frames you use and read the guide thread for how to do spacing - which is when you move the stick a little bit at the start and gradually move it more throughout the frames then move it a little bit towards the end of the movement. Your joint movement is decent just in some frames it doesn't look like you moved them - so yeah try and move every joint in every frame and put a little more into the reactions also this doesn't matter too much but try to have the ring on the bottom of the frame. Nice start though.
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