Tasker
Main Eventer
EST4LIFE
Joined on: Aug 16, 2009 17:33:05 GMT -5
Posts: 3,192
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180 DDT
Apr 6, 2010 12:46:01 GMT -5
Post by Tasker on Apr 6, 2010 12:46:01 GMT -5
 First pivot in awhile. Credit to alex for making the style,even though i gave him the idea. |
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180 DDT
Apr 6, 2010 13:47:26 GMT -5
Post by alexgg on Apr 6, 2010 13:47:26 GMT -5
Its okay but really stiff imo, you need to bend the joints more.
And you need to work on the jump and turn as it dosnt have a good transition.
You should of ahd put them behind the mat as well.
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180 DDT
Apr 6, 2010 14:28:44 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2010 14:28:44 GMT -5
The jump isn't the best he needs to bend down more imo . it runs quite well but quite stiff the turn didn't look good as it looked like he was facing one way and then the next frame he was facing the other way :/
i quite like the impact although i think the legs of the victim could have gone higher . the reaction is good. nice background btw:)
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180 DDT
Apr 6, 2010 20:29:54 GMT -5
Post by wccwmaster on Apr 6, 2010 20:29:54 GMT -5
The guy who jumped was pretty stiff after making contact. It also had a pretty wierd back position (guy who jumped) it was like curved and looked pretty un-human like...
But was a smooth animation and was smoth and nice background so i'm gonna say 6/10 since of stiffness and that back position.
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180 DDT
Apr 6, 2010 20:40:59 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2010 20:40:59 GMT -5
It's a nice start of you are new. You need to use more frames for your future animations though, with that being said this doesn't mean you use as many frames as possible - just enough so that it has a good speed and looks smooth. Also once you get the amount of frames down you should start to use spacing in your animations which you can read about in the guide thread. The joints are pretty well bent just it looks like they weren't moved in a couple frames - you should avoid that otherwise it'll just look stiff and the reaction wasn't really the way I'd see it happen but at least you did one. Good job.
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